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Healed  by shirebound 13 Review(s)
PSWReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/27/2015
Of course Yavanna appeared to Sam. Why would she not?? :-)

I love playful, happy Elrond...

Author Reply: It's such a joy to imagine Elrond carefree and joyous.

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/29/2004
ohhhhh goody, there's gonna be more? I was just thinking, oh rats, pooey, darn, I've read them all now and there are none left....but if there's gonna be more *great big sappy grin*

Guess I can always start over again:D

Such lovely writing here though.........

Armariel~~~{~@

NivinaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/29/2004
*melts and sighs happily*


LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/28/2004
Yes, Frodo and Sam are the two sides of the coin, always.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/28/2004
This is so full of wonder. So full of light! Such a joy and an uplift. My mind needs the contrast between between the darkness of my "Fear" and the glowing joy, beauty and happiness of "HEALED". This is indeed a blessing.

Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/28/2004
You have just out done yourself, Shirebound! This chapter was SO beautiful from start to finish it just squeezed my heart!

QUOTES:

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“I am trying,” Pippin sighed. “I think they only talk to you, Sam.”
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LOL! Poor Pip! So hard to be quiet long enough to listen! :p

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“Not so,” Sam smiled...

Celebrían chuckled quietly. “Not so” was an expression Elrond used often.
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I LOVE that element that you have included! The hobbits would pick up the habits and speech patterns of those around them...not just the language. Brilliant!

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“Does it bother you, Pippin, that we all look different?”

“’Course not,” Pippin giggled. “Everybody’s different. It would be too boring, otherwise.” He looked into the Elf lord’s ageless eyes, puzzled. “Don’t you think so?”

“I certainly do,” Elrond smiled. “Ah, young one, how did you grow so wise, so soon?”

“Look!” Pippin said again, pointing to where a flock of white gulls flew over the sparkling water. And Elrond lifted him high, swinging him up, up... until Pippin felt that he almost had wings, himself.
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Awww!! I'm so glad you included that as well because that is something that has always bothered me when I think of Frodo gone away. I just had a hard time imagining him happy with only Bilbo there for another hobbit to be with (no offense to Bilbo, but you know!)


Fantastic job!!




Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/28/2004
This is so interesting. It is strange to think of Bilbo the same or nearly the same age as the others. I also wonder what the differences in the way they have been raised will do to each hobbit's personality. I loved Sam with the plants.

Connie B.Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/28/2004
Oh, this is so sweet it should not be allowed to be read this soon after consuming all the goodies at Thanksgiving. I get the feeling that Pippin has managed once again to wrap all the adults around his little finger. I just love it. I hope there are more than one or two more chapters. This is fun. I'm looking forward to watching the hobbits grow and come into the full promise of their gifts.

Thanks for sharing this.

Connie B.

SlightlyTookishReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/28/2004
How did I miss this story??? I just read all 4 chapters now and I love seeing all five(!) hobbits as youngsters and together again. I wish it could have happened that way, it's so beautiful. And I'm glad I found this, however belated. Eagerly awaiting more! :)

ElwenReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/28/2004
You're giving them the perfect childhood that we all wish we had. Thank you for so much happiness and love.

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