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He Loses Us Both  by lilpippin 20 Review(s)
lucidityReviewed Chapter: 7 on 11/6/2005
That was a very touching story! Thanks for posting it!

Author Reply: Thank you for reading and reviewing it. I am glad that you liked it. Hopefully I can get some more twin fics out there for you to read. Thanks so much for reviewing.

lucidityReviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/6/2005
It looks like there will be a happy ending after all! Hooray!

Author Reply: LoL. I'm glad that you're so excited about it. Thanks for reviewing

lucidityReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/6/2005
Ack! Is he dead or did he live? How long was he in the coma?

Author Reply: This was a confusing chapter wasn't it. I hope that the next chapter helped to answer your questions.

lucidityReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/6/2005
How sad! Elladan may be the one to die, when Elrohir was the one who was sick!




Author Reply: Nice turn of events isn't it. LoL

lucidityReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/6/2005
Of all the Elves in the books, the ones in Elrond's household are the ones I love the most, particularly Glorfindel. I enjoyed reading a chapter from his perspective.

Author Reply: I like Glorfindel as well. The twins are my favorite though. I like t o portray Glor as a mentor type fo person. I'm glad that you liked my portrayal of him.

lucidityReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/6/2005
I love this look through Elrond's eyes. How terrible it must be to have both of your sons in this predicament and you feeling at a loss at how to help them.

Author Reply: Elrond is such a fun character to write about, especially when it is about his relationship with his sons. Thanks for reviewing!

lucidityReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/6/2005
I've wondered if the twins could get sick, the poor dears. This is so sad, but beautifully written.

Author Reply: Thank you! I am glad that you liked it and reviewed.

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/4/2005

This is such an emotioal piece... Both of the twins are linked and if one goes he other does nice work.....

Author Reply: I am glad you like the emotion. It took me awhile to develop the "if one goes the other goes too" aspect of the story. Thanks for reviewing!

FalasielReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 2/3/2005
Heaven knows I read way too much fanfic involving the Peredhil, but I've never seen one that takes a look at the extent to which their Edain heritage might affect their health. (In fact, no one seems to pay much attention to how their Mortal blood would affect their thoughts, instinct, reactions and so on. How 'bout taking all that up in your next piece? ) I have enjoyed every chapter and I look forward to seeing how you wind things up!

Author Reply: I'm glad that you have enjoyed this so much! I have been pondering a few things about the human blood within my favorite half-elf family, and I have drawn some conclusions about a new story based on some of those qualities. It is not written yet but I have a plot down. Thanks for reviewing!

AngelelfReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/15/2005
Wonderfully written, compelling story. I felt like I was there.

Author Reply: Thanks for the nice review! I'm glad you enjoyed!

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