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Castle Part 1 and 2  by Timmy2222 3 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/12/2007
Poor Vlohiri. Bullies are so cruel. Somehow, I feel he will be Aragorn's way to freedom. When it happens, I hope the child is put into a real home with people who will love him.

Tari

striders girlReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/30/2004
This is A BRILLIENT STORY SO FAR. I AM ENTRANTED BY IT. I LOVE IT! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE WITH IT. I'M WONDERING IS THIS STORY ON FANFICTION.NET? IF IT IS COULD YOU TELL ME WHERE IT IS AND WHAT YOUR PENNAME IS? IF NOT DON'T WORRY ABOUT IT. I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT PART OF THIS STORY! KEEP ON WRITING!

Éile igen BriainReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/29/2004
Wow! Great start. While you do have some grammer problems, the plot is good and the characters enaging. I'm also enjoying your original characters. So far they have been as interesting as our 'usual cast members.' :) Great job!

Your story line is something I haven't seen before, which is always a good thing! I look forward to seeing where you go with it.

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