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Jay's Drabblets  by Jay of Lasgalen 15 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 76 on 7/25/2007
ROTFL - my goodness - this one was fun... especially, of course, the last line!

Did they do that on purpose, the wily twins???? Mispeak to even further confuse their Ada.... WOW

viggomaniacReviewed Chapter: 76 on 7/25/2007
Delightfully clever. And so realistic...

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/27/2006
DELIGHTFUL! And, yes, they had better not run into the mother on the way out.

Author Reply: *Grin* Yes, somehow I don't think Celebrķan would be fooled so easily ...

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/27/2006
Yes, clever elflings that they are, they've figured out how to manage their father! Heh!

Author Reply: Sneaky twins. Get Elrond when he's reading or studying, and they're already halfway to winning. And they know it!

ViresseReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/27/2006
I LOVE it! How intellgence are the twins! Go El!

Wonderful chappie.

Author Reply: Oh, I think the twins are very smart. And cunning. And know exactly how to get round their father!

Thank you :>)



KittyReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/27/2006
*lol* With these two, Elrond clearly should be more cautious what he says. But the twins knew very well how they would get what they wanted - they know their Ada too well.

Author Reply: I think Elrond will be much more careful in future! But *all* children know how to get round their parents - and the twins are far too sharp to miss a chance like this :>)

SeleneReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/26/2006
O dear, the things parent will agree to when the are distracted ;)
The twins know him all to well don't they? Elladan does not even mind being corrected if only they can do what they want to.

Author Reply: *Grin* The twins knew they could get to Elrond while he was reading - the grammar lesson was just a bonus that they took advantage of!

Lasse-LantaReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/26/2006
Ahh yes, how many times has this happened to a parents chagrin. It's scary isn't it how the dear little ones can read us so well. Another cute slice of life Jay!

Author Reply: I can hear myself saying 'xxxx and I' in that tone - as a parent and as a teacher. The twins are frighteningly fast to take advantage!

SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/26/2006
*giggles* Oh, that was just too adorable - poor Elrond, mischievous twins tricking him like that!

Author Reply: They hoped he'd be distracted while reading - but the 'El' slip of the tongue proved even better for them. I think E&E make a formidable team :>)

DotReviewed Chapter: 76 on 11/26/2006
Hehehe. Oh Elrond, you've just been outwitted! Such clever twins - they saw an opening and took complete advantage of it! I love how Elrond, in his distraction, says "El" and especially how this is a joint effort for the twins. Teamwork can really pay off! I really enjoyed this, Jay :-)

Author Reply: I think the twins would be the ultimate double act, and would keep the whole of Imladris on its toes! I must admit, I grinned as I wrote Elrond saying 'El and I'. He proved to be even more distracted than E2 hoped for!

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