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The Ashes of Twilight  by Tinuviel ylf maegden 2 Review(s)
DracawynReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/22/2004
It is so truely sad. The pain she must have felt would have overwhelmed me, as now i realize it must have overwhelmed her. The pain of the children to lose both thier father and mother the same day would be tourcherouse though they had to remian on the earth and beer thier pains until a later time. You are a truely talented writter to be able to stir such thoughts within another. Goosebumps are not uncomin when your work is read. BRAVO BRAVO! Do not feel that you or your work are not of worth! They truely are! You truely are! My friend I envy your great talent. do not let it wither away with disuse.

-Dracawyn
(One who delites in dragons)

Author Reply: Thank you, Dracawyn. Though I do think you mean "bear", not "beer". However, I suppose you could do that, speaking figurativley. Whisky-er-whisk them away...no, I appreciate your kindness for reviewing my pathetic attempt at writing. May you stand as an example to all who are thinking about reviewing. Ah, who am I kidding? My story's crazy, why doesn't someone just admit it?

Author Reply: Thank you, Dracawyn. Though I do think you mean "bear", not "beer". However, I suppose you could do that, speaking figurativley. Whisky-er-whisk them away...no, I appreciate your kindness for reviewing my pathetic attempt at writing. May you stand as an example to all who are thinking about reviewing. Ah, who am I kidding? My story's crazy, why doesn't someone just admit it?

ScealdmaegdenReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/11/2004
Loved it, Mellon nin! I feel honored that you named one of your daughters after me. Luned, what does that name mean? And did you mean Rhosyn as in Welsh for rose? Just wondering. continue it please!
Love Éowyn, Gwedolyn, Ulven Gra

Author Reply: Blessed be Gwen, wine min. Thank's for reviewing. Yes, I did name one of my daughters after you, and one is named for a rose (a-l-l-e-g-o-r-y). I will continue, and in the mean time, you will have to endure your troubles. Now bear up and be the man I expect you to be!

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