I agree with Legolas - Sam definately should not have named children after Merry and Pippin. The gifting of some of the parents attributes to Goldilocks, Pippin, and Faramir is well-done, its just enough to show their connection to their parents without making them a younger edition. I especially loved how you have Sam's shyness to Pippin.
Author Reply: Thank you for your review! I am also in agreement with Legolas - very, very bad idea on Sam's part! I *try* not to make the children too much like their parents, so thank you for letting me know that I've succeeded there! |
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