Ah! At last! Glorfindel had been getting the rough end of the pineapple for far too long. Unselfish love for others cured him, his reward an adorable reborn Asfaloth .. A perfect conclusion to an enjoyable story Lai.
Author's reply
I could not let our dear elf hanging like that and thought of a suitable healing and reward. I thought on a beautiful foal - a son of Asfaloth but my beta reader had the wonderful idea of Asfaloth reborn. Yeah, he deserves it all. The story was much fun to write. I´m glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much for following and reviewing. Lai
shirebound
· 6 October 2017
· Chapter 19: A miracle
After a brief hesitation, it walked into the elf´s arms and placed his head on the warrior´s forearm. Glorfindel carefully enveloped the tiny animal in a gentle hug tears in his eyes. He stroked the fluffy fur and felt the foal already relaxing against him.
*melts* Oh yay, a happy ending! I have a big grin on my face now. :)
Author's reply
I could not let our dear Glorfi hanging. I´m glad you liked the ending, shirebound. Thank you so much for following my story and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai
Semmley
· 27 September 2017
· Chapter 18: waking up
So Celebrian is finally reconciled with her family. But, Glorfindel? I loved the way you portrayed little Elrohir and then Elladan, so slow to trust. A sweet chapter Lai.
Author's reply
Elrond is too tenderhearted for his own good. LOL. Yes , there is some way to go for our dear Glorfi. I´m glad you liked the portray of the twins. So similar and yet so different. Thank you, my friend, for a most appreciated review. Lai
eliza
· 26 September 2017
· Chapter 18: waking up
Yeah, the Calvary has arrived. glad to see Celebrian is not totally nonredeemable.
I wish you luck with Glorifindel, lol if Namo can't shake some sense in him we might have to dig up a Balrog. some thing tells me he's going to be more difficult than Celebrian.
lovely chapter
Author's reply
with a little help from "above" even Celebrian has seen reason- LOL! Your fear will be right, but I think Lord Namo has some idea of digging out a balrog. Thanks for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai
shirebound
· 25 September 2017
· Chapter 18: waking up
I'm relieved that these special people are beginning to find peace with one another again.
Author's reply
they had to - even with a bit of help. LOL! Two headstrong elves need a nudge sometimes. Thanks for your review, shirebound. Lai
eliza
· 21 September 2017
· Chapter 17: changed reality
Darn it, real life almost made me miss a chapter....
Now talk about a plot twist. lol. Nicely done Lai, nicely done. this is interesting because that must mean Glorifindel must have a few lessons to learn. very well written, I never ever think of Glori being irresponsible and to see him viewed as such was fascinating.
can't wait to see where his dreams lead him
Author's reply
you are welcome and thank you very much. Yes, poor Glorfi, even with his age he has still some things to learn- lol! It was fun to picture him such. Thanks for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai
Semmley
· 20 September 2017
· Chapter 17: changed reality
Oh! Nice! Great plot twist Lai. I've now joined Glorfindel and Celebrian on the cliff top. As I am afraid of heights, I hope I don't have to wait too long for rescue.
Author's reply
thanks, Tina. You have not to wait long, but the drop will be deep. Thanks for your review, my friend. Lai
shirebound
· 19 September 2017
· Chapter 17: changed reality
Whaaaaat?? Good heavens, what's happening? Such a terrible nightmare, if indeed that's what this is. Poor Glorfindel.
Author's reply
Glorfindel does not need this nightmare on top, or is it real? He will find out soon, promise. Thanks so much for reviewing, shirebound. Lai
Semmley
· 14 September 2017
· Chapter 16: an overdue talking and bad dreams
Oh! Celebrian is such a trial. She has successfully alienated just about everyone. I am not surprised she is beset by nightmares; just what is needed to bring her to her senses! I'm really looking forward to the next update Lai.
Author's reply
a nightmare is exactly what she needs now, otherwise Elrond will throw a celebration when she finally sails. LOL! Be asured the dream will help! Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, my friend. Lai
Silkleaf
· 5 September 2017
· Chapter 16: an overdue talking and bad dreams
It sort of reminded me of "It's a wonderful life" also, I wonder if somehow Galadriel isn't behind this ;D I know Celebrian's being difficult but I feel for her. Hope she wakes up soon!
Author's reply
it´s not Galadriel, but an other powerful being. She will wake up in the truest sense of the word. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Silkleaf. Lai
eliza
· 5 September 2017
· Chapter 16: an overdue talking and bad dreams
ah-ha,
let's file this under "be careful what you ask for". It also reminds me of one of my favorite holiday movies, lol it's a wonderful life.
Celebrian makes me sad in a way, she seems to be an example of a mom who is so terrified of something happening to her kids that she tries to hold on super tight, only to find out that not only does that not work but it usually ends up pushing the very people you're trying to protect away much quicker.
Here's hoping her little dream helps her see the forest for the trees before she loses every thing.
Author's reply
exactly, you have to let go when you want someone to come back. Celebrían has to make up for her behaviour especially with her oldest. I can only say: be careful what you ask for - LOL! Thank you so much for reviewing, eliza. Lai
Elentarri
· 5 September 2017
· Chapter 16: an overdue talking and bad dreams
Celebrian is a bitch! At this rate Elrond is going to be ecstatic and throw a celebration when she finally sails.
Author's reply
wow, my thoughts also at first, I do not overly like her, but I at least try to understand her motivations, even if I´m not very sucessful-LOL! Elrond deserves better. Love you review, Elentarri, thank you so much. Lai
shirebound
· 30 August 2017
· Chapter 15: Coming home
I'm finally able to catch up with your story now that my cross-country move is complete. What a difficult time for this family! And poor Glorfindel. I hope he's able to find healing.
Author's reply
Glorfindel is not to envy, but Elrond neither. Both could need a bit of mind-relaxing. Celebrían is not helping matters. Indeed a difficult time right now. Thank you so much for still reading my story and reviewing, shirebound. Lai
Semmley
· 27 August 2017
· Chapter 15: Coming home
Elrond and Celebrian seem to be reconciled, but for how long? She seems to have transferred her anger to Glorfindel - more angst. Lai, how will Elrond resolve this little dilemma?
Author's reply
Elrond will not appreciate what Celebrian had done and the clashing will come very soon. What options does he have anyway? Celebrían has to put in place. Her behavior is not acceptable. I´m sorry for poor Elrond. He would need a shoulder right now. Thanks for reviewing, my friend. Lai
Semmley
· 27 August 2017
· Chapter 14: a bit of coming closer
Well, that little battle sorted out some priorities, with the elvish cloak saving those in the tent. But will all hostilities have ceased by the time they reach home?
Author's reply
surely not and Celebrían will push the limits of patience once more - promise. LOL! Thanks for another appreciated review, Tina. Lai
Semmley
· 27 August 2017
· Chapter 13: Reunion
Just lovely! With Elrond and Celebrian both taking the moral high-ground, it was inevitable the orcs would take the opportunity to attack the camp. Now what!
Author's reply
they both should know better then to quarrel in front of their children but Celebrían is not easy going. I could not resist the temptation with the orcs - LOL! Thank you so much for reviewing, Tina. Love Lai
Silkleaf
· 26 August 2017
· Chapter 15: Coming home
Ouch! Just when Elrond was glad to be home, looks like stuff is still cooking under the surface! Lots of misunderstandings, and poor Glorfindel meant well at the start of this! I guess Elrond feels like shipping all of them to Valinor! ;D Looking forward to more!
Author's reply
you are right. The volcano is ready to erupt. Either he shipps all to Valinor or goes himself. LOL! Even Elrond has his limits and all would do good to remember that from time to time or they will find out the hard way. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai
eliza
· 24 August 2017
· Chapter 15: Coming home
Wow! Ok, I'm firmly on Team Elrond here. just seems like the hits keep coming. Interesting to see Celebrian reaction to this accident and the aftermath. I like your portrayal of their relationship though, lol I always wondered if Elven couples experience the usual stresses of child rearing.
Elrond is in a difficult position here, talk about having to tread carefully. Can't wait to see his next move.
Author's reply
why should elven couples not quarrel from time to time, I wondered and Celebrian isn´t easy I guess. Elrond isn´t to envy with all the stress on his back - traumatisized children, many injured and of course Glorfindel and on topp an angry wife - not easy. I´m glad you like the family drama I´m weaving. Next chapter is on the way. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, eliza. Lai
Ellie
· 14 August 2017
· Chapter 14: a bit of coming closer
At least they survived the battle - even if many of them were injured. The trip home will be slow indeed.
Author's reply
Elrond will need time to relax and this very quickly I fear. Thanks for reviewing, Ellie. Lai
eliza
· 2 August 2017
· Chapter 13: Reunion
Lai, Are you trying to give me a heart attack??? Here I was ready for a "Happy ever after" and now Orcs!! lol Elrond has got to be ready to impale himself on his sword.
I'm almost scared to ask "What next". very emotional, although Celebrian needs a spanking
Author's reply
that was not my intention. LOL! But the happy ever after has to wait and yes, you are right, Elrond is very near a total breakdown. Celebrian would do good to finally support her husband. Thank you so much for your review, eliza. Lai
eliza
· 26 July 2017
· Chapter 12: stop-over
Oy Vey, talk about having a bad day. Wife mad at you, best friend angry and paralyzed and kids injured and meddling in-laws. lol. great chapter Lai, great chapter. One thing that was really interesting was how even in the midst of all "heck" breaking loose, Elrond still managed to find a light moment with Tinar.
can't wait to see how this plays out.
Author's reply
Elrond has really much on his plate and his wife would do good to support him. Even Elrond has his limits and they would do all good to remember that. I fear how this will play out. LOL! Thank you so much for your lovely review, eliza. Lai
Semmley
· 26 July 2017
· Chapter 12: stop-over
Lai, I am enjoying this story very much. You have woven the direct influence of the Valar, dicey rescues, explosive family dynamics, Glorfindel's paralysis and glory, even the Eagles play their part, into a well written whole. Celebrian's bond with the twins has her sick with worry, no wonder she is angry when Elrond shuts her out; it is good he is having doubts about the matter. Love that bit about "the Lorien lot." BTW will Asfaloth be resurrected by the Valar?
Author's reply
thank you so much for your appreciation. It means a lot to me. I´m always aiming at showing emotion as real as possible and obviously I habe done something righ, but there is good stuff to work with, eh? I have other plans with Asfaloth but something that will maked Glorfindel hopefully also happy in the end. Love and thanks for reviewing, Tina. Lai
Ellie
· 25 July 2017
· Chapter 12: stop-over
Poor Elrond! Everyone is after him for something! I hope he gets a break eventually, but I bet it takes a long while.
Author's reply
I fear you are right, Ellie. There will be a long way home and many perils along the way. Elrond will need a real long holiday after all this. Thanks for your lovely review. Lai
Amber
· 16 July 2017
· Chapter 1: From one moment to the other
Just found this story but am very glad to see it. I can't wait for the epic blow up between Elrond and Celebrian.
Author's reply
you are welcome. I´m glad you like my story and really appreciate your review. The blow up will come, I promise. LOL! Lai
shirebound
· 9 July 2017
· Chapter 11: Keeping spirits up
Poor Celebrian, it appears she needs as much emotional healing as the rest need physical healing.
What a courtesy to the dead companion of Glorfindel. This would mean much to the warrior.
Oh my! :)
Author's reply
much healing needed all around, yes. I understand Celebrían´s anger, but also Elrond´s argument´s. There is much talk needed. Oh my, ideed. LOL! Thank you for your lovely review, shirebound. Lai