Semmley
· 28 September 2014
· Chapter 1: dark times
As usual, a great start to another of your tales Lai. A child's disobedience has plunged his parents into despair. We feel Arwen's pain, and sorrow with Aragorn. Of course, this situation cannot continue and I look forward to learning how Estel prevails.
Author's reply
thank you Semmley. This time I have choosen a playgroung a bit away from elven magic and more like our reality. Let´s see how Aragorn reacts when driven to his limits. I´m glad you like my new story. THanks for a really appreciated review. Lai
demeter d
· 27 September 2014
· Chapter 1: dark times
Oh, my Goodness! Another of your exciting stories where you plunge your characters quickly into a desperate situation! Yes, I will keep checking for your updates! I especially liked here Arwen and Aragorn joining their considerable healing skills to try to help their son. And right now, even "Estel" has lost hope. It will be interesting to see how you write them out of this peril!
Author's reply
yes, even elven magic and healing hands have no power here. Estel and Arwen are living trough a situation which can happen to us every day. Let´s see how they will manage that. I´m glad you like my story and really appreciate your review, demeter. Lai
Marianel
· 27 September 2014
· Chapter 1: dark times
A beautiful and sad story that touched my heart deeply as a parent myself and I also have a most beloved ten yearold son that sometimes do reckless things. Just the other day my son climbed the roof of our garage though I believe this place (thank god it was fictional) Eldarion played on was much much more dangerous.I yelled at my son never to do it again though .Tears streamed down my face when I read the last lines. I dont know if its just me being sensitive but Im sure every parent knows this worry with dreadful sickeniing feeling that something or someone hurt or killed your child or could have done it.Great story and I will following it indeed.
Author's reply
I have also lived thorough such a situation with a family mamber and know a bit about the emotions I´m writing about. I hope the story is nonetheless entertaining and not too much emotional uplifting. I´m glad you will follow it and appreciate every review very much. Thanks Marianel, Lai
Larner
· 27 September 2014
· Chapter 1: dark times
Indeed a situation for which one would keen. Alas for the child who fell while playing.
Author's reply
yes, poor Aragorn and Arwen. An accident Aragorn has warned for has now happend, leaving the parents helpless and despairing. Let´s see how they will master this crisis. Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai