A Walk to Remember by LOTRFaith
daw the minstrel · 2 November 2003 · Chapter 6: We danced anyway
Thranduil is such a good ada here, and you can see that his son will be one too because he has had a loving example. Thalion and company are at least safe and I like the idea of them being in Lorien. I don't think that Thranduil's people were as isolated as those in Lorien seem to have been. Finally, Legolas is still in trouble but at least other warriors are around who might be able to help. I think there is hope!
Nikara · 28 October 2003 · Chapter 5: Things of the Past
Great chapters! This story is very well though out. I'm a little confused about what is going on with Legolas right now, but I'm sure that will be cleared up soon! Add more soon please!
Elf Queen of Gondor20 · 27 October 2003 · Chapter 5: Things of the Past
Umm... what happened to either chapter five or six? It was only up to five where you could click to get into it on my computer, and it what SAID it was chapter five, there was an authour's note saying that if it didn't make sense we were supposed to go back and read chapter five. How does that work?
Author's reply
Hi! Thanks for the review. I forgot to take that off. I post the same story on Fanfiction.net and I don't think many knew that I had posted chapter 5. So that was just a heads up for the people on FF.net. Sorry for any confusion. Namaarie! LOTRFaith
Eruanna · 27 October 2003 · Chapter 5: Things of the Past
Ooooohhh! I love this story! It's odd, but I seem to take sadistic pleasure in Legolas getting hurt...strange. Anyway, very lovely story. I love the way you write! All the couples are so cute. :-D Write more!
Aly · 27 October 2003 · Chapter 5: Things of the Past
Yay! Another chapter. :) I love how you've gone into more about Thranduil and his family, but now I can't help but want to a little bit more about Legolas and the group he's with, especially with the dream that started this whole story! Now that they've been caught I'm excited to see what actually happens to them. Will the rest of the group get caught or will they find a way to escape? Have they sent someone back to the palace to warn Thranduil? I want to know what happens!!! I can not wait for more! Keep up the wonderful writing!
daw the minstrel · 27 October 2003 · Chapter 5: Things of the Past
You have a really good sense of plot, Faith. The different parts of the story all are believable and all are gripping (even the memories of the past). Also, you do a good job of giving different personalities to each of Thranduil's children. That really struck me in this chapter. Poor Thranduil. He has suffered so much loss. I guess that is the fate of Elves in Middle-earth. I trust you are not going to add to his problems!
daw the minstrel · 18 October 2003 · Chapter 4: Captured!
You've really done a good job of keeping all parts of your story going: Legolas, Thalion, Thrandiul, Lomion, and so on. The family is all coming alive with distinctive personalities. And I, for one, don't believe that Thalion is dead!
Aly · 7 October 2003 · Chapter 3: The Princes of Mirkwood
Whoa! So your getting both brothers into trouble. It's going to be fun to see how you get them out of it. ;) So is Legolas' dream going to come true now? hehe. I like how you've gone more into Thalion also, and would like to see more of Legolas' family as well(as you have eluded to that you would). I personally can not wait to read more! Keep up the good work.
daw the minstrel · 28 September 2003 · Chapter 2: Thoughts and Fears
Yes, yes! More Thalion. I liked that part a lot. He and his wife are very believable together. The plans for checking on the orcs and spiders were well developed. I know how hard that kind of strategic thing can be to think of. And the young warriors out on patrol are well done too. You can see that they are trying to behave themselves but are strongly tempted by youthful high spirits.
daw the minstrel · 14 September 2003 · Chapter 1: The Patrol
What a nice opening chapter. Lots of detail and very interesting characters with intriguing relationships to one another. You've also got your readers wondering about the dangers into which Legolas and, for me, Thalion, are riding. I look forward to more.
Aly · 14 September 2003 · Chapter 1: The Patrol
This is a really nice start! I can't wait to see where you take the story. Only suggestion is to watch the small grammer things (of instead of if or things like that). Hope you'll be able to update sooner then you think. :)