Shadows of the Past by Laikwalâssê
Silmarien · 9 April 2010 · Chapter 7: hold on
Please don't get discouraged. I'm hooked on this story, and very much looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's reply
Hello Silmarien, thank you for your kind words. I´m glad you like the story. At the beginning I was thrilled by the idea but I think now it was not so a good one, nonetheless I will bring it to an end. Hope to see you at the next chapters. I really appreciate your review. Lai
Anonymous · 9 April 2010 · Chapter 7: hold on
Sort of reads like a bad afternoon soap opera. Over-the-top melodrama and no real character development.
Author's reply
I´m sorry that you do not like the story, but you could have simply not reviewed and it´s indicative that you do citicize whithout showing your name. Lai
Irene · 2 April 2010 · Chapter 6: journey into darkness
I like your story.It's something new, the plot is well thought-out and there is also suspension enough. Hopefully, therre will be much more chapters.. Good story
Author's reply
Hello Irene, you do not know how glad I´m about your praise, that you like my story because it is something new. That was my intention to write about something no one has described before, but the response so far was not so encouraging, until now. And I can assure you there will be many more chapters and the suspension will grow. Hope you enjoy all that will come too. Thank you so much for the time to review. Lai
Janet · 1 April 2010 · Chapter 6: journey into darkness
Hello Lay. Well, help has arrived. Someone should give Thranduil a good kick for being so stubbern and ungrateful. I know two people are very relieved about Elrond's arrval. Glad Glorfindle come along, he will keep the King in line. Looking forward to the next chapter. Janet
Author's reply
Hello Janet, you are right, someone should slap the King, but he will soon find out that reacting too late will cost him dearly. The next chapter is on the way. Thank you so much for the review. Lai
Janet · 23 March 2010 · Chapter 4: shadows of the past
I just started to read this story and I like it very much. I enjoy reading about Thranduilion and his family and the love they share for each other. It is sad to see all the elflings suffering and am very glad that Galadhion took it on his own to write the lette to Elrond who, I hope, will find a cure. Looking forward to the next chapter. Janet
Author's reply
Hello Janet, thank you so very much for your kind review. I really appreciate it because I feared no one is really interested in a story about Thranduil and his family. I really like to create a family around Legolas. I´m glad you enjoyed my creation. Galadhion has really done the right thing, but his father isn´t that happy. The next chapter is on the way. Hope to see you there. Again thanks. Lai
minuial · 19 March 2010 · Chapter 4: shadows of the past
I really like your story. I'm looking forward to the meeting between Elrond and Thranduil and the change of heart of the last one. Keep up the good work.
Author's reply
thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it und I´m glad you like my story, because the response so for is not very encouraging. Good to know that at least some are still reading. I hope you enjoy the meeting between Elrond and Thranduil, but will te King really change his heart? Keep with me and see. Lai
Selene Aduial · 28 February 2010 · Chapter 1: A look back
Good to see this one up. Keep writing.
Author's reply
Hi Petra, thank you and I will but Thranduil is no easy stuff. Lai
Larner · 26 February 2010 · Chapter 1: A look back
A delightful look at Thranduil's family and wonderful introduction to Legolas. Now, to learn how it was that Saeron was once hurt, and how Elrond happened to save his life!
Author's reply
thank you Larner. I liked to gather a family around Legolas. You will soon discover why Elrond was hard pressed to save Saeron´s life. See you at the following chapters. Thank you so much for the time to review. Lai