Reviews (272)

Imhiriel · 6 September 2010 · Chapter 16: Dear Santa

I had not planned on leaving reviews as I was reading this story, but now I had to come out of "hiding" to tell you how much I enjoy it - Glorfindel showing of the Elvish script, with Daeron, of all people, standing beside him, was just too much to keept silent any longer. I wonder if Daeron will ding Glorfindel in private for plagiarising *g*... I love all those little details lovingly tucked in, from the actions and memories of the Elves (the twins' Mickey Mouse clock!), to the interaction with the Mortals, to the school (the Halloween party), to the many duties that encompasses their future jobs.

6336 · 13 April 2010 · Chapter 16: Dear Santa

Been rereading this and wonder if I can make a guess at the two other times Glorfindel has had to use a Word of Power:- a certain Witch King out of Angmar and at the Fords of the Bruinen to chase off the Nine. Lynda

Edlyn · 16 March 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

Fabulous story! I want to go be a student at the Elf Academy! I wonder if any of my Wright State credits would transfer? I'm working on getting caught up with your stories in between work, classes, and SCA activities and hope you are doing well. May your path be blessed, Edlyn

someone · 5 February 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

So... They're not coming to Finland? Great story, Fiondil :D. I have truly enjoyed reading it. I was so sure that the watcher in the woods was a group of wood-elves, perhaps Thranduil and some others, but it never even crossed my mind that it could be Oromë! Thank you for writing this. (I did read this when you posted it, but this review is a bit late :D.)

Tari · 1 February 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

Oh, no!!!!!! This can't be the end. There is so much more to say, like how many more mortals will enter the acadamy and what happens in the end. Will more Elves show up? Will the Valar come to earth again? This is more like a cliffhanger than the end. I had hoped to read about their weapons training. I shall deeply miss the Elf Academy.

Tari · 29 January 2010 · Chapter 19: An Unexpected Encounter

Okay. Where do I go and when can I sign up? I can be ready ASAP. "Sigh" If only it were real.

Sulwing of Mirkwood · 29 January 2010 · Chapter 18: Blizzard

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) The elves revealed themselves! And it was Glorfindel who gave them away in the end, lol! That scene gave me chills up and down my spine. I guess it was time for them to reveal themselves, only as elves will they be able to find Zach's group. I'm wondering what will happen after they find them though. "Are we hunting orcs, my lord, or looking for lost children?" "I just don't fancy having my hair blown in my eyes." Haha, certainly hope it's only the latter, don't know where the orcs would have been hiding all these years, but you never know...I think Glorifindel is just ready for everything to be like it was eons ago. "And when an Elf-lord gives his word, he means it. Only death will stop him from fulfilling his oath." "And sometimes not even then." So true, especially if the elf lord is Glorfindel! Heh-heh, kind of behind reading the chapters but I'll get there eventually. :)

Tari · 26 January 2010 · Chapter 18: Blizzard

Wow!! I never saw that coming. I didn't know if the Elves would ever reveal who they truly were, much less this soon. That had to be a real shock to the Mortals. Can you imagine what it would be like to have someone tell you they were immune to the cold and then see them walking on the snow. I suspect some of the people knew there was something different about the Elves; they just didn't know what. What fun. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Tari · 22 January 2010 · Chapter 17: Final Exam

What a truly magical day for the Michaelsons; one they will never forget. Little do they know the reality of what they heard. This is another reason why I dearly love the Elves. They have always been my favorite inhabitants of Middle-earth.

Nélindë Greycloak · 19 January 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

Incredible! I do hope that you write more along this line! I really have enjoyed this story-and the unexpected twist on the last chapters was intriguing! I do hope that you reveal the mystery of the tarn in a later story. Keep up the great writing! Nélindë

Eärillë · 17 January 2010 · Chapter 19: An Unexpected Encounter

Oops. No, Fiondil. The chapter was not wordy. And I am sorry that I can only clarify it now... It was actually nice. I think my wording gave that impression. What I meant is that all the information - well, most of it - was creepy. :sheepish: To me, at least. That is what I meant by "morbid" too... And again, sorry. - Rey PS: I do still hope you will consider a sequel. :)

Tari · 15 January 2010 · Chapter 15: ‘Poor Jud Is Dead’

Jud is very creative. I loved his use of the coffin and knew where the song came from after the first two lines. The new wording was priceless. Your wording makes it very easy to picture the whole scene. I imagine the sight of the Elves' "costumes" would leave anyone speechless. I wouldn't mind dressing like that myself.

Arwen75 · 13 January 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

As with others I left reviewing this till it ended...but I was somewhat impatient waiting for the new chapters and enjoyed the entrie story immensely. Read the last two chapters on a dodgy Internet conenction in Egypt...hence the delay in reviewing. I really loved the way you weaved so much into the story, although liek others I would love to see more about what happens now - a series of short stories would be wonderful if you cannot find the time for another story. Like others I was a litte hestitant over Elves in the modern world, but what you have done works so well, and now I want to know how things proceed with the training etc. But also lookinf forward to the continuation of your Aman stories as well however. I re-read Glorfindel part 1 while in Egypt on my e-book reader, and am now making my way through part 2 again to remin myself of the story while I wait for the new chapters to appear.

Tari · 12 January 2010 · Chapter 14: Into the Wilderness

Weren't they lucky to have an Elf with them. All it took was a quiet touch to calm the wolves. Some humans might be able to do this, but none could read the mind of a animal. I'll bet the humans will be talking about this for a long time.

Eärillë · 12 January 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

Aaaaahh... What was the creepy being in the tarn? *grumble* You left several loose threads hanging still... The conclusion was neat, though. (Or rather, the Valar's work was neat... and secret. :)) I wish you went deeper for the reactions of the mortals... Nimrodel's reunion with Amroth was quite a pleasant surprise, though. I forwent my hope of seeing Amroth there when you said he was not there. Meany Fiondil! :P But now I am very sleepy... It is 1:15 AM and I do have a class to teach tomorrow afternoon. So, well, I do hope you will at least give it a try on a short sequel... Pretty pretty please? - Rey PS: The mortals being the Elves' assistants was cool. :)

Eärillë · 12 January 2010 · Chapter 19: An Unexpected Encounter

*wince* All the information... Morbid. But it was oddly fascinating in a way. There was a play of sharp emotions here from the Elf, Interrupted universe. I firstly thought it was Namo, but then you gave the eyes away and I realised who the male was. LOL I kept expecting bad things to happen or that the Elves would meet some of the Valar because of the title but not this! You executed the chapter quite well. I found myself, again, immersed in the search and the anxiety they felt. Caleb was a fresh change from all the tension and dark conversations... Zach did admirably well, as Glorfindel said. Dunno, but I half-thought he would not have done that well... I guess I underestimated him. Shameful, really! The announcement that Dagor Dagorath was near made my skin crawl. Unfortunately the people there - and in turn, the readers - were not told about who the 'watcher in the water' was... *glare sulkily* I suspected the Valar's part in getting all the six Elves sacked, but I did not expect them to meddle with the mortals too. Now that the events took a darker tone, the job as elf guides did the same. I wish you would expand it to when the Elves and their friends tried to do what Manwe had bidden them to do... It would have been interesting, to say the least, and the 'ride' would be a rollercoaster one. Consider a short sequel, please? :puppy-dog eyes: LOL As light as the story has been, it ends on a serious note... Well, I think, I like this best. *grin* Now to the last chapter! (Yippy! I don't have to finish it tomorrow... I am so, so curious...) - Rey

Eärillë · 12 January 2010 · Chapter 18: Blizzard

Oh! Well, I admit that I held my breath for a bad reaction from the mortals... Glad that they did not react that badly, though. The children were most sweet in that case... Always the readier to believe what looks like nonsense to them. I wonder if the Michaelsons would realise what Glorfindel had spouted out to them? I am suitably impressed by Paul's sense of weather. I guess rangers had their own ways to predict it... but I am still impressed. I wonder if it is true in the real life... LOL But his words brought a sense of deja vu to me. Very similar to one of the peredhil twins! But now I realised that I had been misspelling Zach's name... *wince* Bad me. I hope Zach and his group were okay... I wonder what they were experiencing. When I hoped for a good glimpse to the others' experiences, I certainly did not mean this! *grin* But the revellation - the much-awaited revellation - was executed well. I say the Elves enjoyed it immensely! Having their covers blown up by themselves must feel good for them. Plus then they could rescue Zach and his group without the hindrance of their pretences. I hope they would reveal that their names were what their name-tags showed... Their friends deserved to know everything, at least. And I hope Paul would accept the sudden claim to immortality too. I'd hate to lose him! LOL Rolland's like a petulant child here... *grin* The tension throughout the chapter was palpable, and I found myself tensing together with the Elves and their friends - their remaining friends, at least. You did it quite well... but I still despise the feeling. Heheh. It was like waiting for my friend to come back from the blizard but knowing that it was not as easy as it seemed! That was horrible... I first thought that they would use the van. Silly me. Glorfindel's idea to run with that makeshift pack was a bit... risky, though. I hope they encountered nothing unpleasant along the way, or that they would experience it themselves... But knowing them, they probably would. *sigh* Well. Two chapters more... I hope I can finish this story in one go. Things are getting more and more interesting and I'd hate to sleep on the knowledge that I could have sorted out the big mystery and seen the loose thread tied off! *grin* - Rey

Eärillë · 12 January 2010 · Chapter 17: Final Exam

Crossing fingers and toes? Hahahahaha! Who have ever heard that particular phrase... *grin* Great! I found another similarly-tickling statement, but I forget which it was... The preparations leading to the tour was very interesting - and exciting! LOL And Deirdre made an appearance... I missed her and the other - Merry? (LOL I have even forgotten her name...) The tour was even more fascinating! I found myself in the shoes of the family volunteering to go with Glorfindel. They were so lucky! *grin* Will the experiences of the other people be told, though? Hmm. I think I will soon found out... And about leaking out hints/secrets of what is to come... Heheh. It is just the readers being cheeky, I suppose. *grin* Including me! ;) Glorfindel's thoughtfulness regarding the meal and stories, and his treatment on the children (and their parents, to an extent) was quite touching. I did not think that he would be so close to them... LOL And Andi partook in the marshmallo-toasting and the request for singing! Glorfindel got him hooked. And to think that he had thought Glorfindel was nervous... I had to refresh my memory on the handbook. It was not mentioned before this along the stretch of the story. Thankfully it was rather self-explanatory. I wonder how Glorfindel coaxed the hare to appear briefly... Certainly it was a delight to the children. The scene in the grotto and Glorfindel's talk with Dave about Santa moved me. You dealt with them in a very deep but gentle and somehow light manner. I love it. The things Glorfindel showed or taught the family (or the children, specifically) made me wonder about his exposing himself... before I realised that Tolkien's works never occured in that universe. It was interesting, to say the least, to see the family's reactions to his mannerisms, words, and even song and tales. Great! And now I am on to the next chapter... - Rey

Ces · 11 January 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

First of all let me apologize for not reviewing every chapter, but after the third chapter I saved the rest until the story was complete - I wanted to read it non-stop. And I'm glad I did! This ranks up there as one of your best stories; entertaining, educational and enlightening! You transport me right to Wiseman and I feel as though I'm part of that community. I know I definitely WANT to be one of the crowd surrounding Glorfindel and the others! Lord Manwe was a total surprise to me - I expected Namo to be there waiting to greet Glorfindel. I hope there's a sequel someday of a sort - I'd love to know how it all ends. The only thing missing from the story was my all time favorite elf Legolas but at least he was mentioned - and I'm quite hopeful you will satisfy my curiosity and write a story about Glorfindel's misplaced second-best sword? Oh, and do any of the elves that sailed get to come back and help in the final battle? I mean Thranduil could teach tracking in the forests and Legolas could be the archery instructor!

Kitty · 10 January 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

I was cheering Nicole and Ralph on when they contradicted Beth about Zach's singing! You know, I'm beginning to dislike Beth ... Oh, I'd have loved to be there, listening to the Elves telling their stories. That must have been a magical night. And I have to say, the people of Wiseman and the Academy took the stories – and particularly the part about changing the Academy to prepare for the Dagor Dagorath – pretty well. Jud is really good! That's a perfect solution – give everyone pointy ears and people will tire of making a big deal about that or searching for the real Elves quite fast! I was glad you gave at least a summary how things continued. It was great that Amroth turned up and Nimrodel was finally reunited with her lover after all these long ages! And I like the way the Academy changed and would like to see more details about that. But for now I'll stop badgering you; after all, you are spoiling your readers rotten with all the stories and regular updates. Now, if I just knew where to sign up for that Academy! Even with the Dagor Dagorath looming, it would be interesting. Thank you so much for a wonderful story and Christmas gift! I have enjoyed it very much and will miss this story, it was so much fun! And I appreciated the frequent updates.

Sulwing of Mirkwood · 8 January 2010 · Chapter 17: Final Exam

Thinking, a dangerous occupation--especially if Glorfindel is the one doing it! Of course, Glorfindel did an amazing job on his exam. First he talked more like he would as an elf anyway and he also knew just how to capture the kids' attention. (And he would have twins in his group.) I loved when Glorfindel sang about Elbereth, and the kids seemed to as well. There's something about Santa though...

Sulwing of Mirkwood · 8 January 2010 · Chapter 16: Dear Santa

It's really cool how the elves are turning everything they can into something that is actually M-E elvish. And I totally cracked up over "Murderous snowmen led by Frosty who’s turned evil because he’s wearing the wrong hat.” lol Elrohir would say something like that. :)

Selene Aduial · 7 January 2010 · Chapter 20: The Return of the Elves

I just found this story today, and I must say that you did a wonderful job, but then again you always do. I will just pitch my voice with the rest of the chorus for more. I am always very happy to find any new chapter by you. It doesn't matter which of your stories it belongs to. Many thanks Selene

Eärillë · 7 January 2010 · Chapter 16: Dear Santa

Oh. What was Glorfindel recalling when the Elves were talking about the Words of Power? That competition-gone-wrong in Book 2 of Elf, Interrupted? The one in which Finrod was recalling his battle with the Songs of Power with Sauron and Glorfindel parried with the same weapon? And what about the reference to a friend during the night? Was it the same with the one in Book 1 of Elf, Interrupted? But then the other Elves should not have known about that... should they? Whoaa. Glorfindel took control again... LOL I think I will cease to be amazed somewhere in the story! (But so far I have not. Hmm. One might wonder why... *grin*) What he did was neat, though. (Hah! Elf-path and Elf-light... Wow. LOL But I thought the signs would have more obscure than candles...) I love the making-fire-in-the-snow thing. Is it real, though? Thought I might insert it somewhere in my story if that was true... :uncertain: LOL Zacque-Finrod suddenly had 'fans'... and many get-well-soon gifts! I understand why he wanted to reply to children's letters, though. That must be refreshing, reading so many innocent elaborations of the hopeful little ones. :) It compensates well with the childish scroll. LOL (One would say... chicken-foot scroll...) The impromptu snowball fight was a pleasant surprise. Who knew if Glorfindel could act like an Elfling like that! Hahahaha! It has been great so far. I itch to just go ahead and read the next chapter... but I have been yawning widely every so often now, so I guess I ought to stop here and pick on where I left when I am able next time. :) So see you! - Rey

Eärillë · 7 January 2010 · Chapter 15: ‘Poor Jud Is Dead’

Ahahahahaha! I was taken aback with the title... but then... Wow... Hahahahaha! Well, yes, trust a mortal to play about death... What I forgot to mention in the last chapter (I think): Mickey Mouse clock! The pride and joy of the twins? *rolling on the floor laughing* Whoaa. A suspiciously localised snowfall? Hmm. *wink* What did you mean by illegal campers, though? I thought they could camp wherever they wanted whenever? But well, if it was in a national park area... I did not expect the Elves to dress themselves in their old attires. Then again, it made much sense. I was surprised too that they kept many things from their old lives. They looked and behaved so sophisticatedly... Surprised too when Rachel (Is she not?) courtsied. Wonder if Glorfindel truly looked like a king then. Thought people forgot much of how to courtsy. People bow still, yes, but even female performers usually bow, not courtsy. It was still quite amusing, though. :) You did have many amusing-but-in-another-sort-of-way things in this story. It makes it very unique - and endearing. :) The feeling of friendship was quite palpable when they took a ride in Glorfindel's mini-van. But, for the life of me, I do not know why they suddenly wanted to take a trip to the town via a vehicle. They usually just walked. It was good, though, because then Jud had that crazy idea. *grin* That one scene was one of my favourites in this chapter. I laughed when Lily resigned herself to crouching instead of sitting on Daeron's lap. Seeing her and Zacque's reactions to things were always interesting, in the least. Why was Glorfindel set about Finrod and the others being in the ether? Should it not be the realm of the spirits, of the dead, of the afterlife? But Aman is not like that, is it? He should have known better. :uncertain: It gave the impression that Finrod and the others were dead... A bit unnerving. - Rey