Keep Him Secret, Keep Him Safe by shirebound
Pearl Took · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
Wonderful! I liked Aragorn's description of using his gift and I'm glad Frodo's heart is lightened. Frodo, there really are some wonderful ways to use lemons :-) Well done as always, shirebound!
Author's reply
Thank you so much, Pearl. I thought about this chapter for at least a month before I started writing it!
Pearl Took · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Frodo isn't the only one who would like that explained - ;-) I liked Pippin's quick thinking to distract Merry. That bath does sound wonderful!
Author's reply
I hope you like the explanation in Chapter 12! Happy hobbits in a tub, what a delight. :)
Cuthalion · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
That was a lovely, clever explanation of how Aragorn actually "calls" for people lost in the Black Breath... very convincing. And the end of the chapter, with Frodo thinking about how to properly feed Aragorn and get a fine breakfast himself made me smile. But your delightful tales always make me smile. Mona
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I've been thinking about this chapter for a long time, and hoped I'd be able to explain things in a way that made sense. *smiles back*
Andrea · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
“Why does everyone think I had too much to drink?” Frodo grumbled. LOL!!! I think this question needs no answer ;-) I'm glad that Aragorn was able to convince Frodo that he (Aragorn) made all his decisions of his own free will and that he regrets none of them. On the contrary, he's looking forward to be king and to take over all the responsibilities. But he did not answer Frodo's question! “But did you exhaust yourself, and nearly die?” Frodo asked anxiously, unable to let it go. “That is what you did, Frodo. And I honor you for it.” The true answer would have been "Yes". But, if Aragorn had asked Frodo this question the answer would have been the same! In that respect those two are much alike. Last but not least, I'm wondering how Aragorn will manage to make Frodo like lemons!
Author's reply
Aragorn didn't exactly answer the question, did he? But I think he was probing for what was really bothering Frodo, and it finally came out. LOL, those pesky lemons! :)
Antane · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
Maybe if you tried some sugar with the lemonade, Frodo, it would taste better. :) How nice that they had that talk - one less burden to carry - and the guilt of claiming the Ring hasn't kicked in yet. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Frodo will find a way to enjoy this strange fruit Sam loves so much, never fear. :)
Celeritas · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
“But did you exhaust yourself, and nearly die?” Frodo asked anxiously, unable to let it go. “That is what you did, Frodo. And I honor you for it.” Touche!!! The end bit with everyone being content with their own decisions saddened me, though, because the price Frodo paid--though he wouldn't have had it any other way unless he could have just held out against the Ring a little longer--was too great for him to stay in Middle-Earth. Ah, well. He doesn't quite know that yet. And the ubiquitous lemons! *snerk*
Author's reply
Yes, he doesn't quite know that yet. It will be many months before Frodo feels the first return of pain and anxiety. In the meantime, Cormallen is a place of healing, and Minas Tirith will be a city of wonder and honor for the hobbits. Ah, those lemons. What fun. :)
cookiefleck · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
I found it interesting that Frodo might feel Aragorn would "have no peace" if called upon to heal constantly. Yet, what could be more wonderful than to know that you have the power to do so much good for so many in your lifetime. I can't think of very many things that would make me happier. I wonder if Frodo would like sweet lemon bars. Hee.
Author's reply
Frodo fears that Aragorn will continue to pour so much energy into healing that he'll once again grow weary and ill. Knowing that the sons of Elrond (two notable healers) will be on hand to help is a great relief for him.
harrowcat · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
Lovely insights into Aragorn and his healing touch. But if Sam truly wants to cover the Shire in Lemon trees he is going to need an awful lot of glass-smials! *grin*
Author's reply
Yes, he will! Perhaps someone will take up that story someday. :) Thank you very much, Harrowcat.
Dreamflower · 28 October 2008 · Chapter 12: Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost
A wonderful conversation! I liked Aragorn's explanation--in some ways it reminds me of my husband trying to explain healing touch to me. Did you do some research on alternative healings? And of course, there is Aragorn's attitude: He is the exemplary Servant-King, and he is one who truly believes that to one who is given much, much is asked. Frodo understands this, though he tends to apply it to himself rather than his friends. I really enjoy the underpinnings of love, loyalty and respect that are so much a part of your stories.
Author's reply
I've been aware of contemplation/meditation for much of my life, and perhaps Aragorn's 'healing touch' has a measure of that. Glorfindel just had to touch Frodo's morgul wound to bring it warmth and relief, and Aragorn may have learned quite a bit not just from Elrond, but Glorfindel as well (which is perhaps a plotbunny for someone!). Thank you for your lovely words. Aragorn and Frodo are both very special, and Cormallen really is one of the last times they'd have (except for the trip to Rohan) to really converse.
Cuthalion · 15 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Would you believe that I read this chapter three times now - and every time I wanted to leave a review, I had to leave. How frustrating! Other than this delightful piece of writing, of course. Caring, funny hobbitses, a concerned Frodo, an Aragorn on shaky legs... and Frodo again, pondering breakfast after been provided with athelas. Simply wonderful. *hugs* Mona
Author's reply
Thank you, Mona! *beams* How I'd love to be a guest in that tent.
grumpy · 12 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Great chapter, It is sort of nice to know that hobbits can get hang-over too, not that I do that anymore. But if I did, would be nice to have somebody to take away the headache,
Author's reply
It sure would! :)
Baggins Babe · 7 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
I'm glad to see Aragorn up and about at last - I always find it odd, thinking of him having any sort of human weakness! :-) Loved the description of the hobbit bath, and Eomer trying to avoid being splashed! What could be nicer than tipsy hobbits? Pity that poor Frodo paid for his ale consumption the next morning but I'm glad Aragorn was able to help him. Now I can't wait to read about their conversation........
Author's reply
Thank you! With all that Aragorn went through (especially movie-Aragorn!), it's amazing he didn't collapse from exhaustion more often. I just love exploring the idea that even he would have a breaking point, and that Men might not understand or accept it... but hobbits would.
Linda Hoyland · 7 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
I'm fascinated to learn what the Hobbits perceived of Aragorn's healing.Poor Frodo to feel too guilty to easily accept it again.Another loveely chapter.
Author's reply
Thank you, Linda. The hobbits are learning new things about their friend 'Strider' in the same way he's still learning new things about them. :)
lbilover · 6 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Tipsy hobbits! Aw! Although I'm sorry Frodo felt ill the next morning, but it was a perfect lead-in to his fears for Aragorn and the discussion they will have. Sam was especially dear in this, and I teared up when he talked about holding Frodo's hand tightly to stop the bleeding. *cries* Pippin, too, is a total dear and I love that he dreams of the Lady smiling at him.
Author's reply
Thank you! Hobbits are just all-around dear, aren't they? Aragorn is going to miss their informal, teasing, affectionate, honest presence when it's time for them to go home.
Periantari · 6 October 2008 · Chapter 7: Kings of Men
Very nice dialogues are written here. I like the explanation of why Aragorn is feeling so out of sorts. I always like that you tie in the beginning quote with something from the chapter.
Author's reply
Thanks, Peri An. I like finding quotes that tie even an AU story to canon. :)
Agape4Gondor · 6 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
My favorite part was Pippin's little trick in getting Merry to think of happier times! And you forgot the bath at Crickhollow - that one seems to have been the most fun - while they were yet innocents.
Author's reply
I'm glad that the Professor wrote about that Crickhollow bath, which inspired much of the splashing and singing in this one! Hobbits take great joy in the simple pleasures of life.
Agape4Gondor · 6 October 2008 · Chapter 10: A Merry Evening
Sounds like a delightful evening - one in which we all would love to be part of. I loved the descriptions and the care and love for each other that shone through so nicely!
Author's reply
I'm so glad those things shine through, and that you're enjoying the story. :)
Larner · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Ah, the acceptance on Frodo's side comes, and together he and Aragorn know the joy of their friendship and the exercise of Aragorn's basic nature. Lovely!
Author's reply
"The joy of their friendship" is truly at the heart of this story. Thank you.
Grey Wonderer · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
I just love the way Frodo and Aragorn both care too much about the other one's safety. And I enjoyed the simple way Sam thanked Aragorn for guarding the Shire. Another lovely chapter. For some reason, this one made me want hot tea and a nice long bath...
Author's reply
Thank you, GW. Wouldn't it be lovely to end every day with hot tea and a nice long bath? And hobbits, of course. :)
Tigger · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Oh...I loved the bath scene and poor Eomer. In everything he's experienced, nothing has prepared him for the peril that bringing cloaks to bathing hobbits entailed. LOL!!! A tipsy and drowsy Frodo...*happy sigh*. I just want to gather him up and hug him. Then have him snuggle w/Aragorn again. They both need each other right now. Oh..Poor Frodo in the morning running away from Aragorn in case he is the cause of Aragorn relapsing. Poor hobbit...Through so much and now this. I can't wait to see his and Aragorn's chat. I'm sure it's what the both of them need. Looking forward to the next installment m'dear!! :o)
Author's reply
Oh Tigger, is there anything better than hobbits (and kings) getting the comfort and care they deserve? I just never tire of it. Thank you so much. I'll get right to work on writing listening in on that chat.
Inzilbeth · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Hobbits do know how to enjoy their bath times! As always, I loved everyone's concern from everyone else and of course I'm really looking forward to reading your take on Aragorn's healing thing. Thanks for another enjoyable chapter.
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you're enjoying this. :)
Cairistiona · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Very nice chapter ... I like the idea of the hobbits being troubled only by a mere hangover. Somehow at this juncture, it's nice to know that it's a normal thing and not some vile consequence from too close proximity to the Dark Lord! And wouldn't it be nice to have Aragorn around every time you had a headache. *sigh
Author's reply
Thank you. And I agree that it's lovely that the hobbits have reached a point where it's just simple, everyday things that trouble them.
Celeritas · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
I had been avoiding this story ever since I saw the letters "h/c" in the summary, but now I find that doing so was to my detriment! That Aragorn would have experienced some form of burnout after all that he had done is very plausible, and his tending has been very well-written. I've particularly liked hearing about all of the furnishings the tent has, courtesy of Gimli, and the lemons which Frodo so stubbornly avoids! Your Jacksonian descriptions of the characters do throw me for a loop, but you've got Sam's speech spot on, which is simply lovely. The only other "issue" I have is that Frodo has decided to feel guilty for Aragorn's illness, if not all of the problems that exist around him--a reaction which is so common in post-Quest ficcery that I'm afraid it's created an imbalance. But other than those two niggles (which come largely from my cantankerous alter-ego Sagitta) this was a lovely Sunday's read for me, and as I said before I regret not having come to it sooner. More, please!
Author's reply
Thank you, Celeritas, I appreciate your comments. I do tend to weave movie-verse into my stories in small amounts, but it's always a deliberate choice and (hopefully) not overwhelming. I've been writing hobbity h/c nonstop for six years, but I believe this is the first time I've explored possible guilt on Frodo's part. I believe the Quest left him fragile in many ways that didn't manifest for awhile, and it's possible that if he really thought about Gandalf's words that the King "put forth all his power" to bring him and Sam back, it might be something he remembered if Aragorn showed any weakness. It's little things like this I love exploring, especially since the Professor left us so many tempting time-gaps to fill in with our love and imagination.
julchen11 · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
This is soooo funny, comforting and lovingly written. Great chapter, dear. You're simply a master storyteller. I'm so looking how this is going on. Thank you, darling, thank you ever so much. I enjoyed reading it and listening to you voice (yes, I can HEAR you). Love, Julchen
Author's reply
Awwww, thank you. I'm very happy this is a comforting tale to read.
Andrea · 5 October 2008 · Chapter 11: The Hands of the King
Pippin breathed a sigh of relief. He’d rather Merry fall asleep thinking about his silly questions than the cold and dark of his wounding. He's such a clever hobbit! And I thought he was only jabbering ;-) Frodo had a grand time bathing and drinking, but maybe he had a wee bit too much ale! Not, that he would ever confess it! So, now we have reached the point when the long-expected conversation starts. And I'm as curious as Frodo about how Aragorn *did* it. Thank you for the update!
Author's reply
Thank you, Andrea! There's much more to Pippin than meets the eye. He's always thinking and evaluating a situation, like Merry, but he solves problems in his own unique way. Goodness yes, it's high time we reached the long-expected conversation. :)