Alquawende
· 20 January 2008
· Chapter 18: Reflections Before Sleep
Just rereading this story until book II comes out.
>>Glorfindel felt himself slipping further into the Path of Dreams, but before sleep took him completely he returned again to the problem, as he saw it, that was Amarië. He didn’t trust her and he feared for Finrod. He should do something about it, he decided, yawning...
This just popped up in my mind when I finished this chapter. What would Glorfindel have to not trust about Amarie? It's obvious she likes Finrod so she wouldn't hurt him and she has improved in how she behaves with Sador and he, Glorfindel.
Author's reply
That's just it... she was very unpleasant towards both Glorfindel and Sador from the very beginning and then all of a sudden she's not. The complete turnaround in her personality probably sent up red flags in Glorfindel who, at this point in time, thinks that his 'mission' is to protect Finrod. His converstaion with Irmo and Námo in the next chapter will disabuse him of this notion.
ekian
· 16 January 2008
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
i have been keeping with this story, anticipating the next chapter to it even when i just saw another posted, i must say that your writing is one of the most prominent ones that have inspired me to give writing a good bash. this chapter is a jewel in this mithril made crown of a story.
i do hope you post a sequel or somthing soon, this story is far to good to ever end.
lots of respect, ekian
Author's reply
Thanks ekian, I really appreciate you taking the time to letting me know how much you've enjoyed reading this story. There will indeed be a "Book Two" though I will not be posting that for another couple of months. Look for the first chapter of "Elf, Interrupted: Book Two: Glorfindel's Quest" sometime around Easter if not before. I am also glad to see that my writing has inspired you to give writing a try for yourself.
"a jewel in this mithril-made crown of a story"... I like the sound of that. See, you're a writer already. *grin*
Lilandriel
· 16 January 2008
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
oh goodness! what an awesome chapter, and stunning finale!
the 'where' certainly is the question. let's just hope there's no 'when' involved, too! are they even still on Aman? or the world, for that matter?
brilliant, brilliant story. this has held me from the very first chapter. i am so pleased to see that you're continuing, and i see that you've wrote more stories while i've been away! always good ;-) thank you so much for what has been a thoroughly excellent, compelling and captivating story
J xx
Author's reply
Thank you, Lilandriel, for letting me know how much you've enjoyed this story. Yes, I will be continuing Finrod and Glorfindel's adventures (and everyone else's as well) in Book Two. I wll begin posting that in the next couple of months. I hope you will enjoy the continuation as much as you've enjoyed this tale. As to where our intrepid duo are... we'll find out soon enough, I promise. *grin*
GloriRose
· 15 January 2008
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
I came to this site a few months ago, looking for stories about my favorite reborn balrog slayer, and WOW, WOW, WOW, did I ever find him!
Fiondil, this story is wonderful (as is everything of yours I have read so far). I love your descriptions and characterizations of, well...everything and everyone. Your Lord Namo is certainly one of my favorite characters of all time.
At least the cliffie gives me some time to catch up with Wars of the Valar, Stirrings of Shadow and the other stories you have posted since the beginning of December (you have been busy!).
Thank you for this story...I am really looking forward to Book 2.
Author's reply
Hi GloriRose and welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed this tale. Glorfindel is just about my favorite elf as well, though he and Finrod probably tie for first place in my book. Book Two will not be too long in coming though as you can see I have been busy writing other stories. Thanks for letting me know how much you've enjoyed reading "Elf, Interrupted". I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know.
obsidianj
· 24 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Wow! I'm stunned. This is an end I hadn't expected. This whole story was not what I expected when I started to read, but you kept me enthralled and I couldn't wait for new chapters ;-). Now I'm sitting here and want more answers. I hope you start posting the sequel soon. I want to know what happens to Vorondil and all the rest, aside from Glorfindel and Finrod,
Author's reply
Hi, obsidianj. I'm sure many readers did not expect this ending (which is what I was hoping for. *grin*) Book Two will be posted soon enough, though it will probably be a couple of months while I finish up some other stories. Trust me, the story isn't over with by a long shot and we will find out what happens to Vorondil and everyone else. Thanks for being so a faithful reviewer. I appreciate it very much.
Nariel
· 17 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Loved the ending! I have an idea of where Finrod and Glorfindel are but am not completely sure. I'm just going to be as patient as I can, unlike some of the other readers, for book 2 knowing that you're just going to tell us that we have to wait no matter what. This novel was just amazing and I thank you for writing this!
Namarie!
Author's reply
Thanks, Nariel. I appreciate your kind thoughts. I hope to begin posting Book Two early in the new year, perhaps before Easter, so keep your eyes peeled. We'll learn early in the next book just where Finrod and Glorfindel have ended up.
hanci
· 17 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
That was really dramatic! Memories I expected, but not the Songs. I should have. :o)
Thank you for this really long and wonderful story, the next part will be greeted with a happy dance at least! Meanwhile, I will read this one again...
Author's reply
Thanks, Hanci. I'm glad you enjoyed this story so much. Thanks for taking the time to review chapters. I really appreciate it. And I hope you find Book Two just as interesting and wonderful as you found Book One.
Tira
· 11 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
I knew it. I knew you were evil in some way (after all, only someone with a minionish streak would steal the key to Elrohir's cell *g*).
So....when is chapter 1 of book 2 coming? hmm? C'mon....I don't wanna wait! *wails* I need to knooooooooow!
Please say you at least have some of it written...if you dare tell me it is just a bunny right now, I will so....I don't know, I'll think of something.
Author's reply
I didn't steal the key, I made a copy! LOL
As for the first chapter of book two, it isn't written except in my head. I'm still working out details. but it's definitely not a bunny by any means, so no more threats or I won't post anything, so there! *sticks out tongue*
Selene Aduial
· 11 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
I just have to go and say this.... You are evil... *grin*
Why did you go and leave us a cliffie like this?? You better hurry and start posting book 2.
On the chapter itself: Great, loved Beleg's lay, it really suited the fight.
And yes, Ingwe sure got more than he wished for ;)
I do have a hunch of were they are, but that's probably because of your other stories.
Can't wait for more, so please don't leave us hanging to long.
Author's reply
Hi Selene. Glad you liked the chapter in spite of the cliffie. *grin* Writers live for cliffhangers, it's how we get our readers to come back. The next book won't be posted for a while, but it won't be years, just a couple of months while I finish up some other stories and such. Just be patient.
scarletdragon
· 11 December 2007
· Chapter 34: A Lesson In Manners
I love this story! Though there's so many things going on (and so many characters!) that it's hard to keep track of, it's still really interesting. I do have one question, though: Is 'Lomion' Maeglin? It was his mother name originally. If so, why has he already been released from Mandos? He betrayed Gondolin! And if I'm right, why doesn't Glorfindel recognise him? Keep up the good work, as this story was incredible, and please answer my questions somewhere in the next story.
Author's reply
Hi, Scarletdragon. Thanks for telling me how much you've enjoyed this story. To answer your question... no, this particular Lomion is not Maeglin. I've merely bororwed the name, deciding that it might be a name that could be given to more than one elf though for different reasons. So Glorfindel would have no reason to recognize this particular elf.
Author Reply: I just looked at the date of your review... sorry it took so long to answer. Not sure why... I suspect it was because I was in the midst of trying to finish this tale and wasn't paying attention to alerts. Now I had better go through the reviews and see if I've missed any others.
Liz
· 10 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
I've been reading this from the beginning - you have me thoroughly hooked. I am definitely going to keep reading, whatever you write. Thanks bunches for so much enjoyment. :)
Author's reply
Hi Liz. I'm glad that you have been enjoying this story and I'm happy to know that you will continue reading whatever I write. Until Book Two comes out, feel free to read any of my other stories.
Agape4Gondor
· 10 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Excellent! Excellent! Excellent
*Bows in awe*
Author's reply
Thank you.
Agape4Gondor
· 10 December 2007
· Chapter 999999: Character List
Whoo hoo! I printed the listing - many, many thanks. Now, to go back and reread over the Christmas break.
Thank you.
Calenlass Greenleaf
· 10 December 2007
· Chapter 999999: Character List
Book II won't be posted until early next year, possibly not until Spring,
You jest, do you not? spring is still...about four months away!
Though, I suppose I don't terribly mind the wait, because I love your writings and your characterizations.
This story was a wonderful, wonderful one. And now I think I shall reread it again.
~Cal
MJ
· 10 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Now, why was I expecting you'd find a way to have this particular match end in a tie or a stalemate? Nicely done, though, as it certainly makes sense that his battle with Sauron would have been the worst memory for Finrod to relive, and as no mention was made of him facing that particular hurdle, it came as a bit of a surprise. Very nicely done, indeed.
Author's reply
I needed to end Book One with a cliffhanger, so this is what I came up with and it will prove important for the plot of the next book. Thanks for reviewing.
artistic sprite
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Elindis's right about the " Elyn!" thing.Hee hee! Looking forward to your next update!
Author's reply
Thanks, Sprite. I'm glad you have enjoyed this story.
ellie
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
the mystery post was from me. sorry forgot to sign my name.
Author's reply
no problem. Glad you identified yourself. *grin*
Misty
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Wow! I just have to say how impressed I was with that chapter! The fight was amazing, and I loved how we saw it in the form of a lay rather than a blow-by-blow description. That was genius! And the songs of power during the battle... I'm kind of speechless.
I didn't think it was a good sign though when the Valar were becoming so worried. So, what was the flame and where did they go? I will be greatly looking forward to the first chapter of the next book. You certainly know how to leave us hanging. lol
Great chapter, and a great way to end book one. I just hope you don't take too long to post book two.
Author's reply
Thanks Misty. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I didn't want to give a blow-by-blow description of the fight, as that, to me, would have been too dull. Describing it one removed through the lay made it more interesting for me as a writer.
And no it isn't a good sign when the Valar look worried. *grin*
As for the Flame and where they went... book two, book two, which will be posted early next year.
Anonymous
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
okay. wow!!!!!!!!!!! what an ending! it's amazing, dear fiondil, the lengths you are willing to go to in order to not have to decide who won the last battle of the tournament. you probably have a cheeky grin on your face right now as you read this.
Love the descriptions of the songs and the valar's dismay at what was happening. love elindis and her reaction to ingwe, too. very well done!
glorfy and finrod's childish reactions to being in no man's land at the end were great! but, alas they aren't armed to face whatever they must face next.
now go post chapter one of the continuation. we'll sit here in front of our computers and wait...
Author's reply
But we all want them to both win, don't we? *cheeky grin*
Glad you liked the description of the songs and the Valar's reactions to it, as well as Elindis' reactions to Ingwë.
Finrod and Glorfindel may not have swords but they are unarmed nor are they helpless. I'm sure they'll do well enough, wherever they are.
Alquawende
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
This was a perfect ending! I can't wait for Book II! When will it begin getting posted?! I'm so curious as to where Finrod and Glorfindel are now. Are the two in Mandos or something? I wonder how their friends and family are going to take this and what the Valar are going to do. The revised lay was quite funny to read. I didn't think that when Glorfindel and Finrod fought that they would be reliving their own battles in which one had lost, then died, and the other had died.
Author's reply
Glad you liked the ending Alquawendë. Book II won't be posted until early next year, possibly not until Spring, but we'll see. We'll see how everyone reacts to what has happened and the reprecussions of it in the next book. The rising incidence of flashbacks among the other Reborn during the tournament have been leading up this point so it's not surprising that, first Finrod, then Glorfindel, would be reliving their final battles.
Alquawende
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 999999: Character List
For Beren's article, you typed 'pouse' instead of 'spouse.'
I thought that Ercasse was a member of Arafinwe's court because back in the chapter when the group from Tol Eressea is introduced to the royal family, since Amarie wasn't there at the event, Ercasse told her what happened.
Arafinwe's nickname when he was apprenticed to the Elder King is so cute!
Wasn't it Turacano, not Turucano?
I really like this character list. It makes it so much easier to remember all the characters!
Author's reply
Thanks for pointing out the typo for Beren and Turgon's Quenya name is Turúcano. Ercassë is a junior member of Arafinwë's court who is sent to Vanyamar as one of the young courtiers who are being fostered by Ingwë to learn from his court. Even though she is not yet of age (she's only 48 at the time), she's been "in training" for the last few years along with the others.
I'm glad you like the list. I just didn't realize just how many characters there really were. It's almost like a Russian novel. *grin*
ellie
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
i am so bummed it is over! hope you start posting book 2 soon!
Author's reply
It'll be posted when it's posted and not a minute sooner (or later) *sticks out tongue*
jwdisney
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Wow! This installment was amazing! The entire story has been so absorbing, and this is a great culmination. I can't wait to find out where they are, and what happens next! Thank you SO much for all of the time and effort you have put into this. It's truly breathtaking!
Author's reply
Thank you for reading and reviewing. It's been a roller-coaster ride of a story and it's not finished yet. I've been enjoying writing it and look forward to completing the saga (if only to stop Glorfindel's whining LOL).
Edlyn
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 142: Songs of Power and Glory
Wow!
That was fabulous! Beleg's lay is so gorgeous. It was a perfect way to tell us what was happening!
I have to admit though I've said previously that I wish I could be there at the tournament, I don't think I would have wanted to be present for this. IT was way too scary and powerful. I hope that someone thinks to go to the elflings and reassure them, not to mention Vorondil and Aldundil. And Sador and Beleg are going to need comforting, too.
I am looking forward to seeing the beginning of Elf, Interrupted: Part Two, not only to find out where Glorfindel and Finrod ended up but to see what the Powers and the other elves are going to do.
And no I'm not going to kill you for the cliffhanger. You ended this part of Glorfindel's tale perfectly in my opinion. You've only done what any master storyteller does to keep his listeneers returning for the rest of the story. Congratulations on a tale well told!
hugs,
Edlyn
Author's reply
Hi Edlyn! I'm glad you liked Beleg's lay. I had fun constructing it so that it describes what is happening between the two warriors while using the prose to describe the reactions of the spectators.
And I'm glad you think I ended this part of the tale perfectly. Readers hate cliffhangers, but writers love them because that's how we get you readers to come back for more. "The Perils of Pauline" was successful simply because of the crazy cliffhangers that girl found herself in and the viewers loved it.
Thank you for your lovely reviews, insights and support. I really appreciate it.
Nieriel Raina
· 9 December 2007
· Chapter 999999: Character List
I'll add my appplause to Rhyselle for this. WOW! Great job!
NiRi
Author's reply
And we're editing this even as we speak! Lots of errors neither of us caught the first or second time around. I'll pass on your thanks.