Elanial (visitor) · 23 August 2003 · Chapter 6: Division Within the Ranks
Ha ha ha! This, while being very funny and attention-keeping, somehow manages to stay in-canon to a certain extent. Especially as regarding the amount of detail that has been put into it: the seperate activities of each of the main characters, and the subtle plots and schemes that are afoot in each character's mind. Oh, I really think that Eomer's *cough* attachment to Arwen is quite amusing (but I dearly wish it to work out in the end, because Lothiriel ROCKS!). I will be checking up on this every so often, and I hope that you will update very soon, because I need something funny to sustain me during the long, boring, dull year that is school. Keep writing this! It is very funny! ~Elanial
Author's reply
My most sincere thanks for your compliments! I have tried very hard to keep this as close to canon as possible. There are certainly a few stretches here and there, but I'm glad to see that I haven't broken any sacred canon barriers yet! And I'm also very glad that you like the intertwining plot. It will get even more tangled as we go along because more and more story lines will start to mesh. And I'm rather fond of Eomer's crush on Arwen, too. That story line is going to be rather minor, though, compared with what a few of the other story lines are going to do. But it will definitely play a large role in the end.