Reconciliation by Larner

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Antane · 26 April 2006 · Chapter 9: 9: In the Mayor's House

He does write the most lovely letters, doesn't he? Oh, I do so hope to meet him in Heaven one day! Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author's reply

Yes, Frodo does communicate well. God bless indeed, Antane.

demeter d · 26 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

My sympathies on your technology troubles. Modern "conveniences" can be mixed blessings. Sweet, wistful story. One by one the Shire's inhabitants are learning the news. The Bounder's reaction to hearing who his Ranger visitor was reminds me of Butterbur in Return of the King, after Gandalf has told him that the king has always loved the Pony, and Mr. Butterbur's beer. I, too, think that Frodo had insight when he gave the drawings of Narcissa to Brendilac. He had had visions of several of Sam and Rosie's as yet unborn children before he left them. Why would he not also be given insight into the possible futures of others that he cared about? And I think he would know when Paladin finally repented. Well done. Real life has caught up with me, also. i am having to control the hours spent on the computer, to actually get WORK DONE! Best wishes to you.

Author's reply

Hopefully I will have the new modem by the first of next week at the latest, but we will see, of course. Yes, they are learning, and some are realizing surprising things. I hadn't thought of old Barliman's reaction in ROTK, but I can certainly see why you immediately did. After all, how many of us think to share a breakfast along the road with the King Returned? I'd written in The Acceptable Sacrifice that Frodo foresaw the marriage of Brendi to Narcissa, an event I wrote into The Ties of Family; as we know Frodo had prescient dreams on several occasions, I thought it only appropriate that he might plan for that day, and perhaps plant some ideas in his unsuspecting cousin's head. And as hard as he worked to try to pound the fact through Paladin's head that Pippin was an adult in everything but chronological age and that no one was going to change the story just to make it more palatable to Paladin and Eglantine, I think he'd be very sensitive to the moment Pal apologized to his son and meant it. I don't have any excuse not to get more cleaning done, now that I'm offline save for when I can get into the office after hours and slip a bit of time online, but that doesn't seem to get me into cleaning the floor, which desperately needs it. Glad you're able to do better at disciplining yourself than I've been able to do. Thanks for the feedback.

Grey Wonderer · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

I am very pleased that Pippin's parents realize how wrong they were about Pippin and about Frodo. It seems as if Frodo has managed to leave something special for everyone. So like him to think of the others and to be that organized about it all. His note to Pearl was so very sad. Lovely chapter.

Author's reply

At least Paladin is big enough to admit he's been a fool and to do something about it. It's not an easy thing to apologize to the one you've wronged; it's even harder at times to apologize to everyone else who's had to deal with the situation. And of COURSE Frodo would be organized about his bequests--no tag sale in the parlor for Frodo, I think, unlike Bilbo. So glad you appreciated the letter to Pearl.

Endaewen · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

This is simply beautiful. There's that remote sadness so characteristic of much of the later Lord of the Rings and Silmarillion.

Author's reply

Thank you--being compared to the Master himself is always the greatest honor of all.

Antane · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

I’d always intended to give it to my eldest son. Oh, if that doesn't just tug at the heart! All those dreams and hopes - all dust. But all that love still. I'm glad you ended it with a glimpse at Frodo too. I hope we will see him again! :) Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author's reply

I do believe Frodo would have wanted to have a family--so many orphaned as he was find this is the one thing they wish above all else. And so it goes to the cousin he most identifies with, along with the hopes that Fosco will do what he did not, and marry and father children. The glimpse of Frodo at the end will be a rather oblique one in this story, you'll find.

Kitty · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

Poor Larner, you’ve a lot of bad luck with your computer! These things can be quite nasty, can’t they? I hope this is now soon over! It must be very frustrating. And I have grumbled because of my own problems – at my laptop is only the place broken into that the internet cable belongs, so the connection is rather unstable, to put it mildly, and I have always at least one book lying on the cable to hold it in place. But that’s nothing compared to you. Dear Frodo, he selected all these gifts so careful and lovingly! As sad it is that he has left the Shire, I hope his friends and relatives find some consolation in these little reminders of him. And he is still thinking of others, trying to care for Fosco and Forsythia as best as he can. And his letter to Pearl was simply touching *sniff* So Beli now knows just *who* this Ranger was? Nice little surprise for him, and for the others as well. It’s understandable he has some difficulties to imagine the King from far away in the South could’ve been the Ranger he meet at the borders of the Shire. I’d not expect it, either, in his place. Now I’m quite impressed with Paladin. Not everyone would’ve been able to be so open about his faults. The best wishes for your computer problems!

Author's reply

Yes, the computer problems continue, although HOPEFULLY all will be well once more on Monday at the latest. Had to come to the office to turn in my time sheets, so am slipping onto the internet before I head for work. It's frustrating not to be able to do this at home, though. And understand about the book--before the connection in the power cable for the laptop finally bit the dust I was having to put books underneath it to keep the connection going. Good luck with your own computer issues. Frodo may be gone from his family's lives, but he has done his best to remember each, and planning for the continued leadership for his own family and all. I agree--Paladin is proving a much more impressive individual than he appeared when he was driving poor Pippin and Frodo crazy insisting they not say things he didn't want to believe in. And it would be very interesting to have breakfast and later learn the pleasant person we shared a table with was someone we'd always hoped to meet but never dreamed we would. It was fun imagining Beli's response once he learned the actual identity of the nice Ranger he met along the road. And am honored you found Pearl's letter touching. Good luck with your own computer problems. They do get to be maddening, don't they?

harrowcat · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

Am so very glad to see this up and to hear that it is 'only' computer problems holding up the muse! :). Great as always Larner. Mind you, I haven't had time to review in the last two weeks anyway - between work and home life has been hectic. Mum says thank you for the best wishes.

Author's reply

I bet it has, and am glad to hear your mother appreciates my concern and continued prayers. Thanks for letting me know you read it, and that you enjoyed it. Good luck to you and yours. Hope to have the new modem by the first of next week at the latest.

Bodkin · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

What a shame for Paladin that he left his arrival at understanding so late - he will never, in this life, be able to reconcile properly with Frodo and let him know that he has come to terms with the last years. All Frodo's last gifts and messages are so well thought out. He must have spent a great deal of time over the last year deciding exactly what he had to say. And he says it very effectively. A difficult time for everyone. Apart, I suppose, for the scandalmongers who didn't really know Frodo. They must be having a ball.

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In The Choice of Healing Paladin at one point thinks it's too late to make it up with Pippin; I'm just glad he was able to do so after all with his son. He knows that Frodo forgives him, too, but I'm certain you're right that he wishes he could just have that mutual awareness he's sorry for what he did and has indeed reconciled with Pippin. I think Frodo would have found many hours when he was fighting off nightmares when he'd plan what he'd like to do for others for his final bequests. And am so glad you find he personal notes effective. As for the scandalmongers--well they are always the ones who will make their own opinions best known. The great problem is that so many are so willing to believe whatever the rumors say instead of trying to find out the truth of the matter. At least those who matter most to Frodo do know what he accomplished and honor it, even if it is after the fact. His own reluctance to admit what he did worked against him, I think.

Tigger · 24 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

I knew when I hadn't seen another chapter to this, the problems were worse than you thought a couple of weeks ago. Don't feel bad about it and not being able to take a look at the story I wanted you to go over. I more than understand. ((((HUGS)))) I loved Frodo's gifts to every one and his letter to Brendi. How he was leaving it to Narcissa to figure out what jewelry would be the best to give to Forsythia on her 25th birthday...Very smart hobbit our Frodo. Not only was he making sure she got approriate gifts for that very special day, but he was also making sure Brendi and Narcissa would be there on that day. Cunning, very cunning. ;o) So sad to see the conversation between them and the hobbits of the Inn. So very difficult to talk about those who have left us. Poor Pippa when she finds out. Brendi's reaction when he learned about the King and the Bounder meeting...I'm sure the maid in charge of that room will not be thinking good thoughts about him. I did love the touch of the Bounder focusing first on Arwen in Frodo's picture. Typical male whether he be Man or Hobbit. They always have a hard time tearing their eyes away from a gorgeous woman. ;o) Lovely addition to the story Larner. I hope the computer problems are fixed and soon for you.

Author's reply

I have three computers, and to have EVERY ONE of them all develop problems was almost more than I could deal with. Power supplies, damaged mother board, fried processor, and THEN the transmitter for the satellite modem self-destructing. I am SOOOOOOO frustrated. It's been a most expensive month for computers. And then last night the capacitor for the well pump decided to become so corroded it wouldn't pump water, and my niece this morning has determined she WON'T live where one has to deal with pumps and propane tanks. Not to mention all the car repairs that have been needed in the last two months. It would be SO nice to be able to spend the little extra money I get on something I'd LIKE rather than something NEEDED if you understand what I mean. Anyway, of COURSE Beli will look first at the lovely lady in the picture. So glad you appreciated that. Brendi is in many ways Frodo's secondary heir--the one who has to see to the last of the legal business, who won't fully be free of responsibilities to Frodo until Fosco comes of age. And I think that having foreseen Brendi and Narcissa's wedding and that there is a strong tie there to the twins, Frodo's not above trying to help it along. I agree about the maid and Brendi's spilled ale. But, seeing these are Hobbits I doubt she has to do it all that often. And in this case there was ample reason for Brendi to be surprised. Who'd dream the King himself was heading their way. Yet they've managed to learn enough of Aragorn's nature from what the Travellers have told them to appreciate what he's likely to do and do next. Thanks for understanding.

Linda Hoyland · 24 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

How considerate of Frodo to leave the gifts and mementos.It must have been hard telling everyone the news. I do hope you soon get your computer problems fixed.I have misssed you,but assumed you were on holiday for Easter.

Author's reply

The holiday has been computer enforced. Hope to get things back up by next week, and then to get a credit from my ISP for the inability to be online, in part due the failure of the modem I purchased from them to begin with. They want me to buy the new modem, of course, but I'd rather not have to tie myself to another fifteen month contract in case I find I can't work properly with the transfer they've done to a new server and domain name and software and so on. And am so glad you appreciate the thought Frodo took in planning his bequests. I think he'd be far more thoughtful and compassionate than Bilbo was.

SlightlyTookish · 24 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

Lovely chapter, and very peaceful. I especially loved Pippin's letter that Paladin and the rest read. They're learning more and more everyday. I'm so glad to see an update for this story :)

Author's reply

I was grateful I can use the network at the office to update on occasion. It's been trying not being able to access the net from home at the moment. Have about three other stories started and one even completed which will go up soon, I hope. And am so glad you appreciated Pippin's letter. Paladin has more assurance that Pippin understands and has been willing to forgive him.

Dreamflower · 24 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

Ah, I had been wondering at your silence! Computer woes are the pits, and I totally sympathize. Such a reflective chapter, as all begin to work through their acceptance of Frodo's loss. I liked the descriptions of all the gifts that Frodo left--he, like Bilbo before him--was a thoughtful giver, though his gifts carried more sentiment than Bilbo's sometimes jesting gifts. I also like your descriptions of how the Bounders and the Rangers have begun to work together, and the system of signals--very clever! I hope soon to see the families all together, and Pippin able to be himself in his parent's home finally! I hope your computer troubles are solved soon! And thanks for taking the time to post this chapter!

Author's reply

It's taken a couple days to be able to get back into the office to use the network, and am very grateful they'll allow this here during the hours I'm not working with clients. And agree about Frodo's gifts compared to Bilbo's--he's more empathic and less barbed in his gifts, at least. This would be a part of acknowledging the Shire is part of the outer realm, developing communication with the Rangers. Am so glad you approve. Hope you enjoy the next couple chapters, although I'm not certain they're in as much depth as you'd hoped to see. However, I've written enough now we can now imagine how much better it's going to be between Pippin and his parents and the rest of the family. And I think that Bard is glad to see it come. I, too, hope this is the end of computer problems for a while. I am SO tired of technical difficulties.

Queen Galadriel · 24 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

You have my heartfelt sympathy--to be cut off the net! I'd be insane by now--and I'm half serious! But I have to say I'm relieved that's all it is. I do know that computer problems are certainly some of the most annoying you can have, but I've been concerned for *you*! Good gracious! It's horrible to listen to someone chatter on about so-and-so when he/she is gone and you know it. But Bobbin didn't know. Poor Pippa. Hmmmm... Pippa and Beligard Took? :) I love Frodo's bequests to everyone, and absolutely *loved* the reaction to the news that Beli had met none other than the king himself! :) I don't suppose whoever has to get the stain out of the carpet will be too pleased, though. :) That letter to Pearl was very sweet and touching. I'm glad Frodo never knew why she threw him over. I was so thrilled to see another chapter of this! All the best to you getting your problems fixed, and with "luck" nothing else will go wrong, I hope. God bless, Galadriel

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Oh, I've been so frustrated in the past several weeks, with one difficulty after another after another. I am SO ready to have some BORING times for a change, I think. Bobbin and Pippin will learn soon enough, but it's hard for Brendi and Bard to explain at the moment. Hope this lack of explanation doesn't come back to bite them later, myself, although I don't think it will. And it's nice think that perhaps there is someone who will appreciate Pippa. I hope it does work out between her and Beli, I find. Whoever has to clean the ale out of the carpet will undoubtedly feel put upon briefly; but at least it wasn't a red wine leaving a permanent stain! She may just appreciate that. I, too, am glad Frodo didn't know precisely why Pearl pulled away, but I think he'd realize somehow Lobelia was behind it. And I, too, hope this is the last of the computer problems for a GOOD long time. Hopefully will have the new modem by Monday. Now, if Hughes doesn't give me a hassle about turning the access on for the satellite. They'd far rather I bought a new modem and a service contract from them rather than just replacing the old one.

Amy · 24 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

Sorry to hear that you've been having compy. trouble, Larner. Sometimes they get ornery, and at times I have to remind mine that I can unplug it and surely will if it doesn't act right! This was so worth the wait. Incognito!Aragorn, and many meetings in the near future, I'll warrant! I love the details on Frodo's gifts and letters, so sweet despite the sadness.

Author's reply

It's not just computers, but the satellite modem transmitter giving fits. It will be at least two weeks before I get the new one, too, I'm told. I am SO frustrated! And I don't get to the office often enough to post while here. Yes, Aragorn has managed to amaze a rather ordinary Hobbit by appearing to be a pretty decent individual and Ranger. And I think that Frodo's smaller bequests would be deeply appreciated. And I like to think that he had ulterior motives for giving the studies of Narcissa to Brendi. Sly Hobbit! It will be when all can laugh at something Frodo did that they'll be well on the road to recovery.

Elanor Silmariën · 24 April 2006 · Chapter 8: 8: Peace in the Great Smial

I loved the Bounder not knowing that he had been talking to the king! This is getting better and better. I am amazed at how well you write complicated plots! God bless, Ellie

Author's reply

It would be a shock, wouldn't it? And at least the folk in Pippin's family have managed to learn enough of the King to accurately predict his reactions and to appreciate his motivations. And thanks so much for the compliment! So sorry this story has languished this way, for I've been totally cut off the net at home since the eleventh. This has been terrible!

Antane · 22 April 2006 · Chapter 7: 7: Heirs and Codicils

Samwise Gamgee has seen Frodo at his greatest and his worst, and he honors him for it all. I am reminded of various quotes from people when I read this. One is from a friend that is not even familiar with the love between these two but from what has been told to her by friends but she has still come up with the most beautiful, accurate description it in calling it "the purest kind of love, from soul to soul." Another quote is from a rabbi that I came across - "Love is not blind, it sees more, not less and because it sees more, it is willing to see less." I just read recently another from Archbishop Fulton Sheen about seeing the beautiful in the unbeautiful. All these explain how Sam was able to keep on loving, even with a sword pointed at his throat, even when the Ring claimed his dear one at the fire. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author's reply

The fact is that we do see the best and worst in those we truly love most; the trick is to accept the person as he or she is, and do our best with them from that poing on. The sword at the throat is strictly movie-verse, of course, but still book-Frodo stung Sam to the heart demanding the Ring back in the tower of Cirith Ungol, only realizing what he'd done once the foul thing was back in his possession. We do hurt those we love most deeply; but that kind of love does forgive and supports as we can. "How many times shall I forgive my brother?" "Not seven times seven, but seventy times seven...."

Antane · 22 April 2006 · Chapter 6: 6: The King's Visit

“Cherish him!” he prayed the Valar. “Let him know easing in body and spirit, and let his Light shine fully once more that when the day comes for me I might find my way by it.” I love that! I'm glad that Aragorn was able to see his brother again, even if he missed saying goodbye. It would hurt him so much if he had arrived and caused Frodo's death that way due to that dear one's weak heart. I'm glad Frodo was convinced to 'uwrap the present.'. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author's reply

I had always rather wished Aragorn had come to say goodbye to Frodo; I get to write it that way when I write my fanfiction stories. However, as this isn't canon, Aragorn arrives too late, but is able to know that it's probably as well for Frodo that he was late. There were so many parallels between the King and Frodo that I do feel that Aragorn would pray just this way for Frodo's recovery and comfort. So glad it strikes a chord with you as well.

Antane · 20 April 2006 · Chapter 5: 5: Openness Returned

First, a rather belated Happy Easter, Larner! Christ is Risen! He is truly Risen! I've been meaning to get back to this story since Sunday and am only managing now. Oh, poor Pippin - "...I need some time just to realize that Frodo is gone. It’s one thing when you’re racing to catch him before he’s gone or returning home or hurrying here or there; it’s quite another thing to just waken to the fact we need to get through this day without him, and it’ll be this way from now on.” Such is each deeply felt loss. But perhaps when that heals some, he'll realize his beloved cousin hasn't really left him as he will always reside in Pippin's heart and in the hearts of so many others, including ours! I talk to him out loud and in my mind as though he is there listening as I believe he can hear me and is actually rather embarrassed by all the love there which I have apologized for but then I tell him that he must be used to it by now because I'm certainly not the only one! Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author's reply

He is risen indeed! Alleluia! If the Shire exists in our hearts as Ian McKellan pointed out, and the Ring is the most hated item that ever didn't exist, save in our imaginations due to Tolkien's writing, then Frodo and Sam and Aragorn are among the best beloved individuals ever that have lived only in our hearts. They must have a special place in Heaven, don't you think? But for Pippin and the others, as with all who have lost ones so well beloved, that is the trick--learning to live in the here and now without their presence so that one day we will meet them again when it is right.

Andrea · 11 April 2006 · Chapter 7: 7: Heirs and Codicils

And now we get a glimpse of Frodo's "Buckland years"! Those pranks were really ingenious! Once again I am fascinated with your OCs. Not so very long ago Bard was Frodo's rival, but when he got to know him better (and vice versa) it was the beginning of a friendship. But then Frodo left once again, never to return, and Bard remained with lots of unanswered questions. The conversation with Brendi helped him a lot, I think. Although the two of them are quite different, being a Brandybuck and a Took, I see the possibility of a growing friendship. You only have to look at Merry and Pippin to see that it works! Oh, and poor old Will, he loved Frodo like a son and the tragedy of losing Fenton is repeated all over again. No one realizes those two, for all their interest in outside the Shire, knew our land better than anyone else, knew and understood and loved our folk best of all. That is definitely true! Sadly, the "average hobbit" will only remember the words "outside the Shire" and will consider them cracked and disinterested in their homeland.

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It is, after all, great fun to imagine what kinds of things Frodo did to earn the title of the "rascal of Buckland." And I do think he'd have been very ingenious indeed. I believe that even in his leaving Frodo would somehow manage, by design or simply as a result of him being Frodo, to bring the proper folk together to support one another. And so Brendi eventually finds love with Narcissa, family through her, Fosco, Forsythia, and his children by Narcissa, and friendship with a Took lawyer who has a very different sort of practice. And I agree--friendship between Tooks and Brandybucks is possible--after all, there are marriages between them! It is so hard that in real life most people don't appear to look beyond appearances; Will has personally dealt with Frodo and Bilbo and realizes just how much they know and love the Shire and its folk; most others, as you've noted, don't look beyond the "outside the Shire." A very astute observation!

Kitty · 11 April 2006 · Chapter 7: 7: Heirs and Codicils

It is good to know Bard is over his former jealousy and has developed so much respect for Frodo during their work together. I am glad he stayed to talk with Brendi. Frodo was certainly very intelligent and imaginative. I loved the story about the rats! *grin* You know, if Frodo had had children and they had teamed up with Pippin’s, that would’ve been quite a plague for the Shire, if they were anything like their fathers! Sadly Will is probably right about what others will think and say about Frodo. It is a consolation that at least some hobbits know enough to honour Frodo as much as he deserves. It may be good Will and the others signed the codicil as well to prevent arguments about validity, but if *I* had a sheet with the signatures of all the legendary elves, *I* would frame it and be very proud of it! But I know a bit more about the legends behind the names than most hobbits, of course.

Author's reply

Seeing just what a former rival has come to is a wonderful antidote to jealousy, particularly when you realize he almost died, has ongoing physical issues as a result of his experiences, and has no intention of any sort of threatening your current happiness. And through Frodo a Took and a Brandybuck lawyer are coming to know one another and hopefully to respect and complement one another in the future. I've loved trying to think of the types of things Frodo might have done to earn his title of "the rascal of Buckland." Some of the stories I've seen have been so wonderful, and I thought this would be the perfect thing for the situation. Am so glad you appear to appreciate it. Will is all too right--Will himself is distinctly muddled as to what the four accomplished in leaving the Shire--about all he truly understands is that they are all heroes out there and the King loves and respects them all. What he knows is what they have accomplished HERE in the Shire--and that's been more than most will appreciate in decades. It was far easier to honor Merry and Pippin and their swordcraft and knowledge of tactics or Sam with his replanting and reconstruction than what Frodo did quietly behind the scenes in the Mayor's office. And so Frodo still receives the least recognition. As for framing the signature page for this codicil--I'd do the same!

Radbooks · 11 April 2006 · Chapter 7: 7: Heirs and Codicils

It's interesting how working with someone you really get to know them, who they are and what they are truly like. Not always what you had supposed or what you had thought they might be like. That's what I thought when I read the part about Bard learning what Frodo was truly like and how he came to like him. I was glad that he had that chance considering how he had felt about him for so many years. I felt so for Brendi when he talked about Frodo being his best friend. Here he was saddled with all of this responsibility and duties that he had to perform and probably what he most wanted to do was have time to go off and grieve for the loss of his friend. Though there will be time for that, and sometimes work helps you get through things, but still I felt for him. Loved the signatures on the codicil! :)

Author's reply

I know. I've found many I've been able to know far better when I work alongside them than when I just met them. And that Frodo and Bard would find a friendship as a result of their working together in the Mayor's office I find both logical and needful. It was past time for Bard to let go of the past. And for Brendi as you say, Frodo was his best friend, the one who always tried to see to it Brendi had what he truly wanted and needed. And being able to share that with Bard was, I think, important to his own healing. And those signatures will probably be sought after in later years by collectors from Gondor and Arnor--what do you want to bet? Heh! Back in school now, or is this your week off in Seattle?

Bodkin · 10 April 2006 · Chapter 7: 7: Heirs and Codicils

Will should start looking at who has been made Frodo's heir. Perhaps he should be heir to more than Bag End. A Lord of the Free Peoples. The largest landowner in Hobbiton. Sensible. The confidant of kings. I like Bard. Pearl chose well, even if she did throw Frodo over for him. To think of Frodo's last document sitting in the records with the signatures of nearly all the last of the Great Elves on it. Not that most hobbits would know who they were. Just as well they countersigned it.

Author's reply

I think Will is starting to do just that, Bodkin. Frodo has gone out of his way to highlight the fact that Sam is extraordinary. After all, Sam in six more years will be the new Mayor of the Shire. I think Frodo has done all he can to rub Will's face in the fact Sam is all Will wants in a successor for the office and more. So glad you like Bard, for I find I do, too. And that codicil may well come to be enshrined in the Mathom House in time. Most Hobbits won't care a bit; but there will be the few who appreciate just what those names meant in Middle Earth for the first three ages of Arda. And so it ends up being countersigned with mundane Hobbit names right there alongside those of Elrond, Gildor, Erestor, and Galadriel. Thanks so much for the feedback.

harrowcat · 10 April 2006 · Chapter 7: 7: Heirs and Codicils

To see these two professionals comparing notes at both personal and colleague levels is great Larner. “I’d just like—I’d like to understand a bit better, is all.” They are helping each other to do this I think although I am glad that just a few things are remaining private. And I agree that, while those closest to Frodo will treasure knowing as much of the truth as it is possible to piece together, those who are further away and less inclined to do more than listen to gossip will only see a partial picture that is coloured by their own prejudice. And so many famous signatures on that codicil!!! But it still needs more hobbit ones to satisfy present and future generations. This really highlight how isolated the Shire still is and will be for a great deal of time even though the events of the ring war and Frodo, in particular, have started the process of communication and change.

Author's reply

Yes, and it appears that Frodo's leaving may have aided another friendship to grow. I like to think that even in leaving the Shire Frodo fostered growth of positive actions and relationships. But I doubt Brendi will ever tell folk about that picture he saw, recognizing this was highly personal to Frodo; and I don't know if Bard will ever learn why Pearl threw Frodo over, being content to accept that she did turn to him, and that she recognized he loved her as much as Frodo did. Yet most folk don't bother to dig deeper, and so rumors will take the place of fact in the minds of most folk in the Shire, just as it happens all too often in the real world. Bard may recognize at least two of those names, but Will probably has no idea who these are in spite of the stories he's heard Frodo tell his grandchildren. They still aren't real to him, for he's never experienced them. Even what he learns of the King doesn't truly become real until he meets Aragorn at the Brandywine Bridge--only then does he begin to take in the information given him and begin to integrate what he's retained of what he's heard before. Yes, the Shire has been isolated, and in many ways Aragorn's edict keeps it that way, which may or may not be a good thing in the long run. But at least some communication is going on.

Grey Wonderer · 10 April 2006 · Chapter 7: 7: Heirs and Codicils

Poor Frodo's life was truly filled with lost love and sad events enough for three hobbits. It is indeed a wonder that he was able to carry on as well as he did. Between the death of his parents, worries about his health, and the Ring, he never had a chance, did he?

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All lives hold grief as well as joy; and Frodo's griefs were more obvious than those of many others. But the joy of Bilbo's acceptance and the friendship of Sam, Merry, Pippin, Freddy, Folco, and so on would have helped mitigate a good deal of the grief Frodo experienced, I think. And it's always fun to try to figure out ways Frodo earned the title of the "Rascal of Buckland." I think that considering what he accomplished he'd have done so with distinction, don't you? :-) In the end Frodo made the one choice that offered him a chance to reclaim some level of fulfillment in his life.

Grey Wonderer · 9 April 2006 · Chapter 6: 6: The King's Visit

I was sorry that Aragorn missed saying good-bye to Frodo but I was rather relieved that he had missed his chance after the news that Frodo might not have been able to stand another good-bye. At least he did get to visit with Merry, Sam and Pippin for a while.

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I always felt when younger that Aragorn would have wanted to be there at the Grey Havens to bid farewell to Frodo, Elrond, and Galadriel and others he'd known from Imladris and Lothlorien. Now that I'm writing my own fan fiction stories, of course I can indulge in this conceit; yet I don't feel free to break canon to the point he actually makes it. And so, yes, Aragorn receives at least some reassurance that the delays may well have worked to the good in the case of Frodo, and yet he also realizes his foster father recognized he was trying and sought to give him reassurance the attempt was appreciated. And the visit with Merry, Sam, and Pippin, of course, would help to make up for the lack of contact with those he missed. Thanks for the feedback, GW. You know I appreciate it.