eliza61
· 23 November 2005
· Chapter 6: The Rescue
Hi firstMate,
Not to worry, your story is to good to give up on. Poor Elladan & Legolas, unfortunately I think Estel is the typical young man-not afraid of any thing and usually thinks he knows absolutely everything! (this from the experience/trauma or raising 3 boys)Tell them I said to try a large rock upside the head. LOL. I like how you have written the "flashback" story, it's interesting to see my favorite elves as babies.
Post soon, your fan
Eliza
Author's reply
Three boys! Wow...I only have one. He's a dear, but one boy and one girl are enough for me. :) Hmmm...large rock upside the head for Estel. Nah! He'd end up with a headache, his brothers would be in trouble with their father, and he probably would forget the whole lesson anyway. I think I'll stick to my less drastic method with storytelling. (Although, it is tempting to have someone give him a good swift kick where it counts!)
Bodkin
· 23 November 2005
· Chapter 6: The Rescue
There is nothing else for it. They've tried the educational method. Elladan and Legolas will just have to stake Estel out, smear him with honey and leave him to the ants. He clearly has the understanding and empathy of . . . the average teenage boy. He needs kicking. Not because it will make him any more intelligent, mind - but it will relieve the feelings of those attempting to inject a smidgen of sense into him.
I'm glad Elrohir is out of that cave - both in reality and in his mind - and that Belmandren redeemed himself. It took a great deal of courage to confront Elrond in that mood - and to see what he had done and continue to try to help.
Elladan and Legolas did very well - typical of Elladan to take the saving of Elrohir on himself. He must have been totally exhausted by the time they got out of that tunnel.
Now let's hammer some sense in Estel. With a hammer.
Author's reply
Poor Estel. He is, after all, just a teenage boy. If I did all the things people have suggested, he'd be one miserable puppy! Of course, I totally agree that he's being an obnoxious teenage boy at the moment. He WILL be a lot smarter by the end of the story, though. (Without the hammer!) :)
Tigger
· 22 November 2005
· Chapter 6: The Rescue
Eeeeek!!! I really need to remember not to try and do reviews when painkillers are kicking in on me. Sheesh...Just noticed when checking to make sure the review went up that I confused my cousins there. It was a she that made that "comment" and one of our male cousins who came to my defence.
Shessh!! *shakes head in embrassment* Sorry about that!!
Author's reply
No problem. :)
Tigger
· 22 November 2005
· Chapter 6: The Rescue
Oh, but Estel will get it. Either he begins to understand or Elladan and Legolas will *make* him understand.
There are all kinds of courage. One of my cousins thought I was a coward and chicken because I wouldn't go on a carnival ride w/him and another one of our cousins. To say she got ripped a new one by our other cousin is a huge understatement. I'm legally blind and due to the damage done to my eyes by my eye disease, I have no depth perception. So, understandably fast rides are not my favourite things. However, as my other cousin informed the one who called me chicken, she wouldn't be able to handle the stares, the rude and stupid behaviour and the looks of fear I'm given by other people to me when they see my white cane. People do unbelievable things over what is basically a three piece metal rod, w/a golf club handle as the fourth piece, wrapped in reflective tape and w/a plastic tip at the bottom.
I am looking very much to seeing Elladan and Legolas educate Estel in what courage truly is.
Author's reply
Well, I don't have any vision problems and I still don't like the really fast rides, so don't feel bad...different strokes for different folks! I'm sorry that people can be such idiots with you, though. Some people are...well...stupid. I'm glad to hear you can handle it, though. Your cousin is right--courage comes in all shapes and sizes!
daw the minstrel
· 22 November 2005
· Chapter 6: The Rescue
Aaarrggh! Estel, you dimwit!
Thank goodness, Elrohir is out of the cave. And I'm glad for Belmandren too. He did what was right and earned some redemption, I think.
But I think Estel may need to be dangled off a cliff for a while and then asked how he feels about heights.
Author's reply
LOL...I think it just might work, but somehow I don't think Elrond would approve of that kind of lesson. I'm sure some day Estel will be afraid of something and appreciate the lesson he's going to learn, but in the mean time he is being kind of a putz!
BlueEyedElf
· 21 October 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
Yay! Elladan and Legolas to the rescue.
Hats off to Thranduil and Legolas for their neat intervention in this situation. They were beyond awesome. I especially enjoyed it when Legolas, knowing that arguing with his father would get him nowhere, neatly used one of his own lessons to win him over. Very clever.
However, poor Elladan. He's just too stressed out to be rational at this point. Same goes for Elrond and Celebrian.
I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. I'm ready to see them get Elrohir out of that cave.
Author's reply
Hi! Yep, Elladan and Legolas were the heroes (just posted the next chapter a couple of minutes ago). Elladan did end up being rather stressed--to the point that he really wasn't thinking clearly in a lot of places. Luckily, he had his old pal Legolas along to help out. Guess that's what friends are for...to help you out when the going is tough! Hope you like this next chapter. :)
WindSinger
· 27 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
I am dragging myself out of lurk mode to shoot you at least one quick review of 'The True Face of Courage'. I read (also copied so I could take home and re-read often) and thouroughly enjoyed your story 'Lost' but never got off one review. So, when I found myself hooked on this story also I was determined to get off at least one itty, bitty, little review.
This is a wonderful, well written, carefully plotted story in which the characters seem so alive they almost dance off the page (and it is a page as I don't have time to read until I get home with my printed copy of each chapter). I am so enjoying how real you make our heroes, mainly by showing that they, too, have emotions we can identify with. They are not perfect, although they deal with their imperfections, weaknesses and mistakes in much more mature, adult ways than most of us would.
It makes sense that Estel would be disappointed to see what he could not help but see as a weakness in one of his strong, stoic, perfect, elder (by thousands of years) brothers. I am sure he has put them on a pedestal, examples of what to always strive for, never being able to actually ascend the heights completely himself no matter how hard he tries. It will be a good lesson for him to learn -- not anyone is perfect, even his brothers, but that makes them no less of a person - or an elf - no less honorable, strong, worthy.
I can also understand completely why the brothers themselves would be hesitant to discuss the horrific event that lead to the less than heroic reaction to small, dark caves full of rats.
Ah, Legolas to the rescue! And what a nice, fuzzy, elfling story; complete with anxt, worried parents, discovered reserves of strength and learning about the 'twin bond' by everyone involved.
Very nice! Thank you so much for taking the time to share - even with those of us who don't seem to be able to find the time or words to review.
Kudos! Keep up the good work and remember that for every one who takes time to send you a review there are a horde of us lurking shamelessly, waiting anxiously for each update!
WindSinger
Author's reply
"WindSinger"...what a lovely name! Well, when you de-lurk, you do it in style. What a nice, long review. Hmmm...I like having the elves be imperfect also. If they had no flaws, they wouldn't be nearly as...well, pardon the expression...human. Besides, perfect beings wouldn't be quite so noble and amazing. I mean, being good because you are programmed to be that way isn't as inspiring as being good and brave as a choice. And who can identify with perfect people? I think Estel will actually come to appreciate that the twins aren't perfect either. When he thinks about it, he'll realize that he has a much better chance of being like them if they aren't up on a pedestal. As for why the brothers don't discuss Elrohir's aversion to caves and rats--Elrohir is embarrassed by it and Elladan simply doesn't want to make him feel bad. Hey, glad you also liked "Lost." It was the first story I'd written in years, so I was VERY hesitant to send it out into the world and reviews made all the difference. Thanks so much for de-lurking. I know it's SO easy to lurk (I'm a former lurker myself!), but reviews really are so appreciated! :)
Elentariel
· 20 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
I'm so glad you've updated! This sounds like a hero(es) setup Elladan and Legolas to the rescue! Update soon!
Author's reply
Yep, Elladan and Legolas to the rescue! I've already written them going back through the cave and reaching Elrohir...now I just have to write them getting him out!
Kitty
· 18 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
I’ll understand if you give up on me and move on. Sigh….
No, my dear, I *absolutely* refuse to give up! Even if I have to wait half a year for each chapter (well, I hope you're a bit faster), this is much too good and I love the story too much to ever stop reading and hoping for more!
*sends a bit spare time*
That was another touching chapter. I felt so sorry for Elladan while he searched for his twin and fought then so much to wake him up and to save him. His desperation was heartbreaking. And it was so sweet that he gave his brother his shoe - a symbol they will be together again.
Bless Thranduil and Legolas! I was glad Legolas offered to help, and Thranduil did very well in his questioning of Elladan. He truly found the right words when Elrond wasn't able to do it in his fear and anguish for Elrohir! And I can understand Elrond and Celebrían didn't want for Elladan to go back alone or only with Legolas, but they had to understand Elladan couldn't stay with them and abandon his helpless twin. I enjoyed it how Legolas convinced his ada with Thranduil's own words! In the end Elrond probably has to thank Legolas for Elrohir's rescue, because Legolas convinced Thranduil and Thranduil Elrond.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's reply
You sent me spare time! THANKS! I can use all I can get. Giving Elrohir the shoe was Elladan's way of protecting his brother...well, that and the torch. He hated leaving him behind, but he was smart enough to know he had to. He did all he could, though, to take care of his twin. He's a good brother! And Legolas is a good friend. Even as a little fellow, he was willing to go into a dark, nasty cave to rescue his friend. It's good that Thranduil was willing to listen. Thanks for the second note and your patient attitude!
Gladys
· 17 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
I won't give up on you FirstMate, not if I can blow myself up first. You can do it!
Author's reply
Well, that's incentive to keep writing! No blowing up, my dear! :)
Kitty
· 17 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
Dont worry about the late posting. I love this story and will once again wait for an update to read it.
I love the thought of Little Legolas and Elladan going to save Elrohir!
Author's reply
Thank you so much for being willing to wait. I'm working on the next chapter, but I'm just not going as fast as I'd like. It's coming along, though, and little Elrohir will be rescued soon!
Bodkin
· 17 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
Give up on you? Never! Keep the story coming as quickly as you can, that's all I ask.
Elladan is very brave here - and so is Legolas. And they are right; they are the only two who can rescue Elrohir quickly enough to be any good. And Elladan is the one most likely to be able to reach into the world into which his brother has withdrawn.
Thranduil did well - his questioning was very subtle and extracted the information that Elrond couldn't bring himself to request.
That cave is a nasty place with a capital N - I think Estel ought to be shut in there for a while. (I haven't forgotten his teenage pain-in-the-derriere qualities!)
I look forward to the next chapter - whenever that might come.
Author's reply
Oh, I haven't forgotten Estel's...uhm...less-than-endearing behavior either. He's still not over his snit, though, and will have to have a little more wisdom pounded into him before he gets a clue. Yeah, little Elladan and little Legolas are being brave to go back into the nasty cave. I like to think it's a reflection of how they'll be when they're older--ready to sacrifice when needed. Thanks for sticking it out with me and being patient!
Creashuns
· 17 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
(I’ll understand if you give up on me and move on.)....WHAT?!?!?!!!
Nope, the good things are WORTH waitiing for!
I love this fic, actually I love all you work - take your time...
We'll still be here when you come back, (we're a very bored lot that has nothing else to do- pathetic I know).
Cheers!
Creashuns
Author's reply
Thank you, my dear! Your review genuinely made me smile. I'm so glad you enjoy my stories!
pipinheart
· 16 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
I love this... Poor Elrohir is so scared and so is hidding in his mind... And Elladan won't take no for an answer... He and Legolas are going to save him, I hope they get back before the rats...
Please contine...
Author's reply
Elladan and Legolas will get there soon (well, when I get the chapter written and posted) and Elrohir will be saved (finally!) I'll continue as soon as I can! :)
Robinscat
· 16 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
I am still here and reading your story. I like it very much, always like young Legolas stories. Sorry, he is my favorite, although I know this is the twin's story.
Don't beat youself up over rl. It happens, and write in your own time.
Robin
Author's reply
Yes, this is really a 'twins' story, but Legolas does play a part all throughout it. He's a brave little fellow and I like that he takes risks for his friends. I guess I don't have choice about rl...it will take my time whether I want it to or not. Thanks for the review!
Finafyr
· 16 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
I would never give up on you or your story.. the story is too good.. and you are too good of a writer. I will be patient.. waiting for Ro to be rescued..
Author's reply
Thank you so much for hanging in there with me! I guess if patience is a virtue, my readers will have to be very virtuous. :( Elrohir will be rescued soon, though, (in the coming chapter).
daw the minstrel
· 16 September 2005
· Chapter 5: The Hero
Oh yay! I'm so glad to see this chapter. It was worth waiting for and I'll wait for the next one too. Deal with RL and then come back. :-)
The scene in the rat-filled cave was just awful. Elladan was very brave and resourceful. I look forward to seeing the rescue. How hard for the parents to send the kids though.
pipinheart
· 1 July 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
You had me hanging on the edge of my seat. I want to hear more.
Elrohir, is missing and hurt and Elledan is going after him...
Please...Update this soon... Great job...
Author's reply
I'm TRYING to get the next chapter written...really. It's just taking an inordinate amount of time since RL keeps getting in the way. The chapter's fully outlined and the first half or so is written, but the second half just isn't coming very quickly. I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far...please hang in there with me and I'll update as soon as I can!
BlueEyedElf
· 27 June 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
Forgot to mention that it's me, DeepBlueSomething. I have changed my screen name and forgot to tell you.
Author's reply
I think you'd mentioned that in a previous message. Or maybe I read it in someone else's review. Thanks, though. It's always nice to keep track of folks!
Laurelin
· 16 June 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
Arrrgggghhh....not a cliffy!i hope Elladan is not going to have too much trouble finding his twin and in one piece he's one brave elfling.This story has me totaly hooked i'm always checking for updates please keep up the wonderful writing Thanx Laurelin
Author's reply
Is that a cliffie? I guess so since Elrohir isn't rescued yet, but it did seem like a good stopping point. Sorry...I don't try to over-dramatize things with cliffies. Anyway, I do think Elladan is very brave, even as a little fellow. He would do anything for Elrohir, but it still must be hard to crawl into unknown darkness. And he will find him without much trouble. Of course, getting him out is another issue....
BlueEyedElf
· 12 June 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
Oops! Forgot to mention that I loved the analogy with the shoes. It really brought the whole chapter together in a very angsty fashion and made the idea of the twins' special relationship more concrete. Great job!
Author's reply
I really like the shoes analogy myself (if I do say so myself!) It's how I see the twins--separate unique beings, but really truly complete when they're together.
BlueEyedElf
· 12 June 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
Great story! I've been meaning to review since you started, but have only now done so.
You did a great job portraying Estel as a moody teenager. (No offense to all the teenagers out there). You did such a good job, in fact, that I had a strong urge to slap him. After reading some of your other reviews, I think most of your other readers agree with me. I really enjoyed it when Elladan got up in spite of his injuries to confront Estel. His concern that Elrohir had to go through his nightmare again on his account was very touching.
I felt so sorry for Elrohir. Sounds like he had a horrendous experience. Those other boys didn't mean any harm, but it doesn't excuse their behavior. I have a feeling their mothers will punish them adequately.
I almost felt sorry for the two boys when they had to tell Elrond what they did. That must have been a scary experience. I kind of shudder when I think of Elrond in full fury. However, Celebrian may be the one to watch. She is too worried about Elrohir at the moment to feel much anger. I think when Elrohir is safe, she may be scarier than Elrond. I can't wait to find out. Mommies with threatened babies can be a force to be reckoned with.
Anyway, I am really enjoying this story. I will look forward to the next update.
Author's reply
Hi BEE! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Yeah, a lot of reviewers did seem to want to give Estel a slap. I hope I didn't offend any teenagers either, but they CAN be a bit...uh...opinionated at times. Of course, they can also surprise you with their generosity and kindness at others. I think the teenage years are the hardest, so I can understand Estel, although I do think he could have used a kick in the rear! I enjoyed writing Elladan's fury.
Definitely I wouldn't want to be either of the boys facing Elrond and Celebrian. It's hard enough to admit when you've done something stupid, but something stupid that might have seriously harmed a little kid...how horrid! I haven't sketched out Elrond and Celebrian's final reactions once Elrohir is safe, but I agree that Celebrian might be less forgiving of the boys' behavior.
Ellie
· 11 June 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
Love the title of this chapter. It was quite profound. Poor Elrohir being so alone for so long. I love your depiction of the kids and terrified adults in this. Very well done. Can't wait for more!
Author's reply
Glad you liked the chapter title. The whole shoe thing was a last-minute addition that came to me when Elladan was zipping up the wall away from his father. Sometimes details just seem to fall into place. Elrohir really DOES need to be rescued soon, though, so I'll have to get working harder on that next chapter!
Tigger
· 11 June 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
I would not want to be in those two Elven boys shoes when Elrond and Celebrian get their hands on them after all of this is over. And then, they're more than likely have to face Glorfindel as well. Not good, deserved, but still not good.
Hoping Elladan can get Elrohir out of that cave w/the little one's broken ankle. Please don't wait so long between updates. Pllllleeeeaaassseeee!!!!!
Author's reply
Not sure yet what the punishment will be for Johir and Belmandren. I'm thinking that their parents would give them much harsher punishments than what Elrond and Celebrian would. I do like the idea of giving them to Glorfindel for punishment, though...hmmm...
I'm REALLY sorry that I haven't finished the next chapter yet. Between work and home I haven't had time to write for weeks. It just doesn't work unless I can have some real time to sit down without distractions. I envy those people who can whip out stories quickly, but I'm just not one of them...sigh.
Jay of Lasgalen
· 11 June 2005
· Chapter 4: A Pair of Shoes
I feel so sorry for Elladan in this chapter. He doesn't understand the bond with Elrohir yet, but knows something is very wrong. I think the saddest part was when he awoke in the morning to see Legolas, not Elrohir. I liked Elrond's reaction in listening to his son, and accepting his sense of unease - not dismissing it with 'he'll be back soon!'
Poor Celebrían, crawling down the tunnel, finding the shoe, and then not being able to go further. She must have felt she'd failed Elrohir. How on earth is Elladan going to get his twin out though, if no-one else can get down the tunnel?
I liked the analogy at the end with the shoes - separate in themselves, but part of a whole.
Jay
Author's reply
Elladan is having a tough time right now and unfortunately it will only get worse when he finds Elrohir and has to come to terms with the fact that he can't get him out alone (ah...but there is someone else who can get down the tunnel!)
I am enjoying working the twins' bond into the story. I think as little fellows they just wouldn't understand it yet. It's so much a part of who they are that they don't question it...it just IS. I don't see it ever becoming telepathy, though...more of a sense or a feeling, especially strong emotions. I imagine Elrond would have some kind of basic understanding that there was a bond, but since he didn't have the same with his twin (well, at least not in my stories), he can only guess as to what is possible.
I'm glad you liked the shoe analogy--it kind of popped into my head as I was writing (maybe a kindly muse tossed it my way). I had decided to have Elrohir lose his shoe so there would be some clue as to where he went, but then when Elladan was escaping his father, the rest of it just all fell into place. One of the fun things about writing!