Larner
· 14 March 2006
· Chapter 6: If I Were a Dark Lord
Now you have me humming in my mind, "If I were a dark lord, didle deedle didle deedle didle didle dum...."
A hilarious examination of the foolishness of Sauron! Lovely!
Author's reply
LOL, if only Sauron had had them for advisors! The Ring-wraiths would have been riding around in pastel robes on dainty horses, and the orcs would have well-balanced meals five times a day. And he might not have been so grouchy and mean himself. ;)
Thanks for reading!
Larner
· 14 March 2006
· Chapter 5: The Healer's Apprentice
We can certainly see our Frodo and Bilbo here. I, too, find I like Marigold here. Good use of the Master's works.
Author's reply
I can easily see Frodo trying to sneak his way out of a treatment and Bilbo fretting over his cousin. Marigold was an interesting character. She knows how to handle those stubborn Bagginses. ;)
Thanks for reading!
shirebound
· 14 March 2006
· Chapter 6: If I Were a Dark Lord
“Well, if I were a dark lord, I’d let my troops eat something other than maggoty bread,” Primrose said, scrunching up her nose with distaste. “That couldn’t have tasted very good and if they’d had better things to eat, they might not have been so grouchy and mean.”
“I think you’re missing the point of being a dark lord,” Goldilocks said.
Oh how I adore Sam's children! This is just marvelous from start to finish.
Author's reply
Sam has an adorable brood. Those kids would melt the Dark Lord's heart. :)
Thanks for the review!
Queen Galadriel
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 5: The Healer's Apprentice
Sometimes-no, often-I think the Baggins stubbornness shows the worst when they're ill. Especially Frodo. :) But Goldie did a wise thing. I think if that lovely poem was read just right, it would put me to sleep too. :)
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
No one likes to be sick, and I can very well imagine the Bagginses being the type of patients that would have the healer in fits over their stubbornness. Marigold was smart to use the poems as a way to soothe Frodo back to sleep.
Thanks for reading!
Oh my! That's all I can say. You know, the first time I read the books I didn't like Boromir at all, I didn't trust him. But the more I think about it, it wasn't really Boromir who did the wrong; it was the influence of the Ring. You capture that perfectly here.
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
Oh dear! I can't believe I never replied to this review! I'm so sorry, dear!
Boromir does come off rather distant in the books. I liked Sean Bean's portrayal in the movies and he's a big part of how I interpret Boromir in the books. Boromir is often accused of villiany, but that is simply not in his character. The Ring truly is a treacherous thing.
Queen Galadriel
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 2: Looking After
LOL! The next time elves come to the door?! LOL! Oh, that really wasn't nice of Bilbo! :) But it's so funny! I love the way you write wee! Sam, so trusting and loving and serious, just as he would have to have been.
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
Bilbo can be rather wicked at times, can't he? Imagine, doing such a thing to poor unsuspecting, gullible Sam! But Frodo gives him the perfect solution. Next time, no one will be stealing any food because Sam will have it all to give to the elves! Even at this young age, Sam already shows much of the traits that he will have later during the Quest.
Thanks for reading!
Queen Galadriel
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 1: Samwise: Gardener, Warrior, Father
Oh, this is precious! Especially the last!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
Thank you! I do like that last one the best myself. Sam is such a wonderful husband, it's no wonder Rosie waited for him all that time during the Quest.
Isilhen Daegol
· 3 October 2005
· Chapter 5: The Healer's Apprentice
Hmmm... Interesting. I don't like it as much as some of your others, for some reason, but it's still good. I noticed you slipped in your grammar a bit here and there, tense changes and all, but nothing too bad. That poem is enthralling, though. I'll have to pick up a copy of HoME sometime...
Author's reply
Yep, this was a quick write and post, which means I didn't give myself much time to work with it. I do like that poem and hopefully I'll be able to finish reading it sometime soon! Glad you liked it!
Bodkin
· 2 October 2005
· Chapter 5: The Healer's Apprentice
I like Marigold - and her sudden absorption in the charms of Elven poetry is quite understandable. I can just feel for Frodo as he recovers from the childish ailment - he's a limp as a dunked biscuit. The mint flavoured medicine must be a decided plus. Perhaps Frodo should have Marigold give him the recipe, so he can pass it on to a certain Ranger.
Author's reply
Frodo has a long way to go before he's 100% again. Getting the flu for a week is bad enough, recovering from this will be quite trying for Frodo. At least he should still sleep a good deal for the next week. It will be the weeks following that will drive Frodo to tears with boredom.
Marigold was created specifically for Pippinlives, but I might try to work that character into my regular cast of OCs. Hey, anyone who can make medicine taste good is worth keeping around. ;)
shirebound
· 1 October 2005
· Chapter 5: The Healer's Apprentice
It was unlike anything she had ever read, strange and odd and all together wonderful.
I really like that line -- it reminds me of my first reaction to reading "The Lord of the Rings".
:D
Author's reply
Thank you! I think we all felt that way the first time we read LOTR. :)
Isilhen Daegol
· 24 September 2005
· Chapter 4: A Matter of Pervinca
Haha. I think their courting is sweet. I can't see why Pip has such a problem understanding that. Of course, it's Pip. He's fallen victim to Vinca's pranks too many times to think she can ever be straightforward about anything. This was good, and I'd like to see more of Vinca and Everard actually courting. I think it would be fun.
Author's reply
Exactly - Pip has been through hell and back with his sister. He's finding it difficult to believe that anyone can be serious about being in love with her, Ev especially. He and Vinca don't exactly have the most romantic of histories, lol. I'm rather afraid to see what would come of a Vinca/Ev courtship fic. I do have that on my rather long list of fics to work on later, so something will eventually get written.
shirebound
· 22 September 2005
· Chapter 4: A Matter of Pervinca
Adorable! Maybe Pippin will finally accept reality... at the wedding!
:D
Author's reply
Thank you! Pippin will eventually realize the truth. Everard may want to run when that happens, lol. Pippin is a rather protective little brother. ;)
Larner
· 22 September 2005
· Chapter 4: A Matter of Pervinca
Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Trying to talk to someone who doesn't believe you is impossible.
Author's reply
Ev would have been better off talking to a brick wall, lol. Glad this gave you a laugh. :)
Dreamflower
· 19 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
Poor Boromir.
Yes. I see this as his thoughts. He would not realize the great achievement he had made in even shrugging off his need for the Ring after Frodo left him, but only his failure in submitting to temptation to begin with.
A good deal like Frodo's own feelings after *he* claimed the Ring in the end.
Author's reply
Exactly. I think Boromir and Frodo are very similar in this respect. This may be a reason why Frodo was so hard on himself. While I think he realized what the Ring had done to Boromir, he obviously would not have been able to trust the Man again, and so I think Frodo was not able to fully trust himself again after claiming the Ring.
RenaissanceGrrl
· 6 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
*sniffle, sniffle*
Gosh darn it...Sean Bean made me so attached to Boromir...
"I stole his faith in the nobility of Men." So poignant.
Author's reply
I too missed Bean's presence in the last two movies. He brought an otherwise dry character to life, and I love Boromir because of him.
Larner
· 3 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
And so redemption comes to Boromir son of Denethor, may the Valar light his way.
Lovely.
Author's reply
Thank you! A poignant part of the books for me. I always mourn for Boromir here and I am always sad to see him perish. That he is redeemed makes the parting easier, but not happier.
Armariel
· 3 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
Really really really nice. I'm quite fond of Boromir. Lovely, spare, economical and lyrical in a plain way.
Author's reply
Thank you! I don't write Boromir very often, but I have great respect for his character. He was tempted by the Ring and fell to its power, but was then able to push that aside and fulfill his duty - just amazing. Thanks for reading. :)
Andrea
· 3 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
What a coincidence! Just today I read the Parth Galen chapter again :)
Your characterization of Boromir is perfect!
Despite what other people may say, I have always felt sympathy for Boromir and I'm sad that he had to die so soon. I think Sean Bean did a great job in the movies.
Author's reply
That is quite perfect timing!
Sean Bean was fantastic in the movies, and I truly missed and mourned his presence in the last two. It has made me appreciate Boromir that much more. Boromir is very deserving of our sympathy and empathy. His redemption cost him his life, and he wouldn't have had it any other way.
Thank you for reading. :)
Ah, yes, more amunition to fight the chauvinist!Boromir. You did a great job on this. Good job at developing Boromir's character in just a few short paragraphs. It's really sad that lots of people don't like Boromir just because of what happens in that first movie. So, thank you, this is a boon to all.
Author's reply
I understand the temptation to write Chauvinist!Boromir. Boromir is a complex character and it takes some time to really understand him. This is one place where I think the movies actually improve upon the books - Sean Bean's performance was spot on and gave life to a character that, in the books, always seemed a bit flat to me.
shirebound
· 3 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
How wonderful. Every word of this drabble is just perfect, Gamgeefest. I believe that Boromir's thoughts would have gone in exactly this direction. He truly redeemed his honor.
Author's reply
Thank you so much, Shirebound!
It took me a while, and many discussions on message boards, to understand this aspect of Boromir's character, but I love him for it. He must have been aghast at his actions towards Frodo; protecting Frodo's kin was the least he could do. And yes, he did redeem himself and was able to die with the honor he always regarded so highly.
I loved it. If you make it any better then the rest of us will be forced to go off and improve out stuff. Way too much work if you ask me. I loved hos this speaks to Boromir's sense of honor.
Author's reply
*blushes* Thank you, though I don't see how any of your stuff, or anyone else's, could be much better that it already is. :)
Boromir's honor and duty were the primary focus here and even focusing on just that, it was difficult to keep it within word count. Duty is no small thing for Boromir, who grew up serving his city so faithfully. His realization that he had nearly threw aside everything he believed in and was honorable to him was a sore trial for him. I'm glad he was able to redeem himself in the end.
FrodoBaggins_88
· 2 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
Wow!! I'm at loss for words. So much said for so few words. :) Excellent writing!
Author's reply
Thank you! With only 100 words, I had to really condense this down and focus on the most primal of all Boromir's thoughts in that moment: his sense of duty and valor. Needless to say, it wasn't easy! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading. :)
Periantari
· 2 September 2005
· Chapter 3: Parth Galen
oh my that was amazing and very profound~
i love it .. you're a great drabbler--would love to hear more from yOU! =)
Author's reply
Thank you! And it's so good to hear from you! *hugs*
It was hard to squeeze Boromir's last thoughts into 100 little words, but well worth the effort. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Armariel
· 18 August 2005
· Chapter 2: Looking After
Cute, cute! Gotta love that Bilbo, what? the old rascal! *gggg*
Author's reply
Thank you! Bilbo is quite the scamp, isn't he - always ready and willing to lovingly tease for the sake of pancakes, lol. Thanks for reading. :)
Isilhen Daegol
· 17 August 2005
· Chapter 2: Looking After
Oh, that was sweet. Aww, cute little Sam, going to the door to check for Elves. *shakes finger at Bilbo* What a thing to do to a little kid! And just for some pancakes, too! I don't believe it. Well... actually, with Bilbo involved, I do believe it. Anyway, great job as usual. It's always a pleasure to read your work.
Author's reply
Yes, Bilbo is quite the scamp. Now we know where Frodo learned it from, lol. I'm sure Bilbo was just concerned that the pancakes might go bad if they sat out too much longer. *halo*
Poor Sam, so eager to greet the Elves, only to find no one there. He'll wise up to Bilbo's tricks soon enough, or follow up on Frodo's advice and take the food with him! Bilbo won't try that trick again after that. ;)