YES! Finally a perfect Legolas-the-hero-saves-the-day-chapter! :) So so so good! :) And Tuillin did very very well, too, saving the children. Thank God she's not bitchy after Legolas snapped at her. While I thought it was a bit uncalled for to be so harsh towards her, I guess I would have done exactly the same thing if I was Legolas. I mean, he's tired, he's exhausted, the settlers make things complicated and show not one bit of thankfulness, his hormones are playing tricks on him, he will face his father's wrath for the settler's sake - and she dares accusing him - even if only slightly - of being unfair towards the humans. Oh, yes, I would have snapped at her, too!!! It would have been totally out of character for Legolas to get all softy around her just because they kissed the night before. Very well done, Daw! :) I like our kinda Macho-Legolas, hehe... :)
You cannot imagine the huge satisfied smirk on my face when Legolas finally made short work of Tinár - at least verbally! I was so proud of the prince! Yay!!! :)
Ah well *content sigh* This chapter was really very good - as it showed a so far well hidden side of Legolas. He keeps his overall view while all around him seem to lose their senses or just cannot do anything: Anyr, apart from making odd deals with a human settlement without informing his king or asking for his liege's approval, seems to be unable to take proper care of his settlement as the situation Tuillin and the kids are in clearly shows (or to put it more nicely: forsight is definitely not his gift!); Tinár is making things difficult as always and Galivion and Annael just don't have the position and authority to sort things out on their own. I really like how Legolas finally - I mean, phew, really, enough is enough! - puts his foot down on everything and takes it all into his very hands - even a shovel to fill bags with sands! There's a true hero!!! Yes! I love it! :)
~Any
Author's reply
I *love* heroic, masterful Legolas, even if he is cranky. He woke up in a bad mood and things just got worse from there. He needs a few flaws too. :-) But, Any, I think your inner fangirl is showing!!!
And I enjoyed writing about Legolas slapping Tinar down. It was very satisfying.
Legolas smiles modestly (and in a very princely manner) and says thank you for all your kind words.
Nilmandra
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
My favorite part of this was Legolas asserting himself as he did. Someone should be sure to tell his father how well he did, and judging by what we have seen of Galivion, he will do so. He actually does a nice job helping a young 'diplomat' learn the ropes. The king should hear about his good deeds from someone too.
Anyr is a little too easygoing; he is fortunate Legolas thought to go check on Tuilinn and the children. This brings back visions of the great floods a few years back when the Red River went from its normal short width to being about 50 miles wide - and the stories of schools and nursing homes and other places where vulnerable people lived being moved rather heroically to keep them from harm. Fortunately for us, we have helicopters. Being rescued by Legolas must be nearly as exciting, but I fear for them up on that flet now too!
Author's reply
Masterful!Legolas is very appealing, isn't he? So is heroic!rescuer!Legolas. My inner fangurl is working overtime here. I thought Galivion was helpful too. He tries not to interfere, but it's his job to offer advice. Thranduil does need to be told!
Floods are scary things, ugly too. And in all truth, being trapped on a flet with seven little kids would be alarming for me!
LKK
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
I'm so proud of "Captain" Legolas. I'm sure his brothers will be as well. Hopefully, his father will be in a good enough mood that when he hears about Captain Legolas' flood waters adventures, he will be proud as well. I know Thranduil will *eventually* be proud for Legolas was a true son of the realm this day.
I thoroughly enjoyed Tinar's dressing down. He deserved it, big time. Legolas' speech was exceptional for one who was so angry and cranky at the time. The part that impressed me most was Legolas' acknowledgement that he knows his promotion to Tinar's commanding officer to be temporarily. Even in the heat of anger, he still managed to remember that their superior-subordinate relationship is for this mission only. The fact that he remembered probably won't help him any with Tinar once they return to patrols, but it speaks well for him nonetheless.
I guess Anyr proves that not *every* elf was the wise, foresighted, super-human that we like to think they were. LOL I think he needs a reality check. Finally, I hope the food thieves don't come from the man village because I like them. (Hm... the phrase "man village" makes me feel like I'm reviewing The Jungle Book or something! LOL)
Author's reply
As a parent, I would love to hear about my kid doing this well. Someone needs to tell Thranduil and Ithilden too. Eilian is busy.
I can't imagine Tinar and Legolas in a patrol together again. Geez. It would be constant pain. And whoever is their captain would have to deal with it. Ithilden needs to think of something to do with Tinar.
The "man village" -- I like it!
Antigone Q
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Anyr doesn't have the good sense Eru would give to a bean sprout, and how he got to be leader of the settlement (Anyr, I mean, not Eru) is beyond me! Imagine leaving small children and one adult alone near a flood. If schools and day-care centers are near a disaster area, where is the first place that gets evacuated? Honestly!
I loved Legolas finally telling Tinar where to get off. I still feel sorry for Tinar, but not so sorry that I didn't think it was fun to see Legolas give him what-for. I was also very impressed with Legolas during the flood - and impressed with Tuilinn,as well. She seems to have kept her wits about her in a nearly impossible situation. She must have been _very_ glad to see Legolas. Maybe she will forgive him for snapping at her earlier...though it wouldn't hurt for him to apologize.
I can't guess who else might have taken the food. Could Dwarf prints look like Mannish prints? Could it be Men from some other settlement? Either way, bad news - Anyr's lack of foresight strikes again. On the other hand, one can only guess that whoever took the food was hungry. How many more complications is Legolas going to have to deal with?
I hope Thranduil gets an earful about the wonderful job Legolas did in such stressfull circumstances. In addition to Legolas deserving to have Thranduil be proud of him, it wouldn't hurt to have Thranduil in a really, really good mood when he hears about Eilian and Celuwen.
Author's reply
I wouldn't want Anyr making plans for me. I suppose the elves thought that the ground was higher where they were.
I truly enjoyed writing about Legolas telling Tinar off. I love masterful Legolas. Sigh. And Tuilinn was amazing. It must have been terrifying to be alone and responsible for the kids. This was fun to write all the way around, actually.
Thranduil really does need to hear how great Legolas has been. It would make him feel good. And I'm so sorry, but Eilian is going to beat Legolas home. Do you think he wants to hang around with his inlaws?
tigerlily713
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Once again you have proven how adept you are at action scenes. Even when in it water, and not orcs that are threatening our favorite elves. Great chapter! Lily
Author's reply
Thank you, Lily. I had a good time writing about Legolas as a hero rescuing the damsel in distress, telling off Tinar, etc. He's growing up and turning into Legolas of the Fellowship!
Elentari
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Whoohoooooooo! this was wicked cool, daw. I like the way Tuilinn is so gentle and so brave. a tad snapppish, too, but it makes her much more real. And I hope Anyr comes to his senses after that. Gosh, I have my heart on my throat with that guy!
Author's reply
Poor Tuilinn. I can't imagine how scared she must have been. But I loved letting Legolas be the hero who comes to her rescue. I'm not sure Anyr has any senses to come to.
Ms. Whatsit
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Ha! I was right! Legolas got to rescue Tuilinn after the settlement was flooded! *feels inordinately pleased with self*
Poor Legolas! Tinar, Anyr, floods...could this get any more difficult? He'll have a hell of a time explaining the story to Thranduil, that's for sure, though I bet his dad'll be pleased. He handled Tinar like a pro. I wonder what he'll do about the stolen meat--it seems like he can't do anything, as there's no evidence. He'll probably just have to give Anyr a stern talking-to about guarding the food.
And watching Legolas interact with the kids and Tuilinn was adorable.
You write politics very well. I'm amazed at how wonderfully complicated this situation has become, when it seems straightforward on the surface--very realistic!
Author's reply
LOL. You did indeed predict that. It's always interesting to me to notice what readers see coming and what they don't. I outline the story ahead of time so I know most things from the start and sometimes it just seems obvious to me and I'm surprised that anyone else is surprised!
This will make an involved tale to tell Thranduil who may be distracted by other matters. I doubt if Legolas will tell Adar all about Tuilinn, although it would be nice for the king to hear about the rescue.
This mission did seem simple back when the only complication was explaining why Thranduil couldn't send as much food as the settlers had asked for. It's been fun exploring politics and elven and human quirks.
Tapetum Lucidum
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Legolas is lucky to have such a good friend in Annael. He can curse freely in front of him and express his opinion about certain thick-headed bureaucrats without worrying about the consequences. He can even smirk about time well spent with pretty maidens. I liked how Legolas handled Tinar - he finally put him in his place. It will be about impossible for him to serve with the senior warrior anytime in the near future. He will be lucky if Ithilden keeps them apart. Good job using Ithilden as a role model for the rookie emissary. He couldn't learn from a better elf.
At least Anyr can't deny that it was a human who took the food. The were lucky to find the tracks. It is not certain that it was their allies who did it but who else knew about the food and where it was kept? Tuilinn's little inquiry would have been much better received if she had left out "that you think." It did come across as accusatory. Legolas is rarely testy but he did not handle the mini-inquistion very well. I hope he gets a chance to apologize later. Nothing like a heavy downpour to improve your disposition.
I was glad to see both diplomats realize that the flooding on hand was more important than the missing food - at least for the moment - and throw their backs into saving the remnants of the village. Tinar stepped in it again and I loved Legolas' response. It is good to see him pick up his crown and wear it. He does it so rarely. "Anyr's strong point does not seem to be planning for possible probelms." - LOL - that is the understatement of the year. By the way, did they think to leave a guard with the rest of the food this time?
I guess when you are shoveling sand, it is easy for your thoughts to wander to pretty maidens. It was a good thing that the prince arrived in time to help the fair maiden in distress. I liked his field promotion to Captain - I hope it will stick soon. His actions were very heroic. Thranduil would be proud. I hope he remembers to tell his father about that part of his little adventure. What is it about little boys and sword. We had to make a No Swords at the Dinner Table rule. Anduril and Sting can reck a table pretty fast. I think Legolas will get a chance to apologize... Too bad there is such a big audience.
Author's reply
We took our son to a Renaissance Festival once and bought him a wooden sword. He was ready to leave immediately afterwards. He thought he had everything he needed to make life perfect!
Legolas and Annael are very comfortable together. Annael doesn't mind 'my lording' Legolas when it's appropriate, but he's also willing to rib his friend in private. In contrast, Tinar is an ass. I truly enjoyed writing about Legolas chewing him out.
Legolas woke up crabby and got crabbier as the day went along, and I can't say I blame him. He's had a lot of irritating things happen in the last few days, starting with his leave being used to deliver food to Anyr in the company of Tinar.
Ithilden intends to make Legolas a lieutenant soon. I just have to find the right moment. And it is too bad that there are seven little kids watching the grown ups. Otherwise being stuck on a flet might not be so bad!
French Pony
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Dun dun dunnnnnnn! Will Anyr get his act together? Will Tínar ever shut up? Will Galivion ever drop the Captain Obvious act? Will Legolas get anywhere with Tuilinn? Well, the good Lord willin' and the creek don't rise . . . oh, wait . . .
All kidding aside, this was a really good chapter. It had its Moments, such as Legolas proving that hanging with Beliond has expanded his vocabulary (which I thoroughly approve of, by the way -- if you need to curse, you should be able to do so fluently and creatively, ideally in several languages) and the bit where he sees the flooded-out house and starts sandbagging for all he's worth. He'd be a real help along the Mississippi levees in the springtime, wouldn't he?
And then the chapter had the Big Thumping Moments o' Wonderfulness. In specific, Legolas as Badass Alpha Male, which he pulled off brilliantly. Especially considering that he's the baby of the family, with not a whole lot of chances to perfect an Alpha Male act. Speaking as a) a firstborn and b) one who does a not-too-shabby Alpha Female spiel with extra Yiddishe Mama, I'd say he's up there with the best. And believe you me, I know from Alpha Dog acts. The physical intimidation, the absolute, I-can-do-no-wrong assurance and the quick cutoff, all nicely executed. Bravo, Legolas!
And bravo also for Detective Legolas, looking for clues and withholding judgement until he knows for sure what happened to the food or until he finds it. Jumping to conclusions is a bad idea, and that is why Legolas is the expedition leader and not Tínar.
The kids are great. Once the immediate danger is over, adult Tuilinn is a wreck, and the kids think this is just the most interesting thing that has ever happened to them. They're right, of course.
Author's reply
You're very funny about the creek!
I have been amusing myself with the idea that Beliond is a world class swearer and the way that rubs off on Legolas. I suspect Thranduil may not have heard about this aspect of Legolas's education. And I have to admit that I enjoyed writing about domineering Legolas. He may not have had many opportunities to practice but he has plenty of role models!
The kids were plenty scared but I'll be they recover faster than Tuilinn does.
Kristy
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Ok, in the beginning Anyr was an annoyance, but now. . .how can these elves follow him? He left ONE elf alone with 7 children and a rising river!!!!! I mean idealism is ok, but stupidity and irresponsibility is not. What if Legolas had not remembered them?''
Thank goodness Legolas showed up to help Tuilinn, she would have been swept away saving the children and it would have been Anyr's fault. Bravo Legolas and Tuilinn!!!
Legolas is really doing wonderfully this trip, saving children, managing a difficult hippie-elf, courting a maiden, and finally and scathingly putting Tinar in his place(I loved that part)!
I see the Legolas of LoTR shining through in this chapter. He is growing into that role well.
::in a timid and slightly pleading voice:: But what happened to Eilian and Celuwen?
Author's reply
What would have happened if Legolas had not thought about the children does not bear thinking about. Poor Tuilinn, struggling on her own. She must have been terrified.
Legolas did do well with Tinar. I enjoyed writing that part.
The last time I saw Eilian and Celuwen, they were sound asleep, wrapped in their cloaks and his blanket. When I go home from work tonight, I'll see what else is happening with them.
Estel_Mi_Olor
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Wild applause for Legolas! Tinár's scolding would make even Thranduil proud. Looks like Legolas has more of his father in him than he realizes. Anyr does not seem like the ideal Elf to lead this settlement, perhaps someone with more...ah...decisiveness and...leadership skills would be better. It's nice that they decided to help the men, but someone should have looked to the Elvish village. Legolas deserves many thank yous for taking care of that. I take it the next chapter will be about Eilian? Oh please update soon, for both your plots in this story are equally captivating and engrossing. Thanks again and keep writing!
Author's reply
I did like seeing commanding!Legolas in action too. Anyr must be driving him to distraction. The only thing one can conclude is the Valar must look after fools, because otherwise Anyr and his people would not have survived. They are very lucky Legolas thought of the children. So are the men, for that matter. Those were their children about to be swept away. I doubt if they'll be happy.
The next chapter will indeed be about Eilian. :-)
Jay of Lasgalen
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
I can't believe how dense Anyr can be - in a time of famine, not thinking that someone may steal the food! I wish something would jolt him out of his complacency. But I'm glad that it doesn't seem to be thieves from the Mannish village.
Tinar was being Tinar, as usual - and it was great to see Legolas pull rank, just this once, and set him right. I think Tinar got a shock.
Your description of the flood was good - I was caught in a flood once, and the force of the water made impossible to stand although it was only about two feet deep. Scary. I can't help remembering the tree storing food that was brought down in the last flood - I hope it won't happen again!
Author's reply
As I read your review, I was suddenly struck by an idea for what the settlers really need. Thanks, Jay!
I also enjoyed seeing Legolas light into Tinar. He's great when he takes charge. He should do it more often.
I've never been in a flood. I originally had the water rising higher on Tuilinn and Legolas, but it sounds as if that would be unrealistic, so I'm glad that Nilmandra advised me to make it lower. They're elves, it's true, but they still have limitations.
erunyauve
· 6 April 2004
· Chapter 8: Flood
Poor Legolas! He is going to need a vacation from his vacation. Then again, if he must be stuck up on a flet in a flood, at least the company is good (he could be stuck with Tinar, after all). He certainly does have an impressive Ithilden-moment with that irritating elf. And I had to laugh at Annael's reaction to Legolas' expanded vocabulary. Somehow, I doubt such a word is in regular use in Annael's household.
Author's reply
I try to imagine being stuck on a flet with Tinar and seven small children. Not a pretty picture!
I love commanding, masterful Legolas. He appears so seldom, but he's great when he does. And I suspect you are right about Annael's household, although maybe he lets his hair down more among warriors.
Angel
· 5 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Wow!!! What can I say? That was an awesome chapter Daw!!! I have enjoyed all of your stories!!! but this chapter... wow!! Amazing!! I think my heart stopped while reading that last bit (well, I was holding my breath, anyway, lol). Just, keep it up... I am really looking forward to more chapters... what's her dad gonna say... and his? Lol.
Cheers
Amanda
Author's reply
I'm glad you liked the chapter. In truth, I was a little worried about it because it was out of the ordinary for me and I was afraid that readers who usually read me would be put off. But I was intrigued buy the idea of elven bonding and the actions here just seemed to me to be what Eilian would do.
Yes, what are both their fathers going to say???
tigerlily713
· 5 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Sure am glad I'm an adult. That was a great chapter. I loved the little scene with Legolas and Annael. It seems so casual and also meaningful, just like it would be between two friends of that nature.
Great chapter! Lily
Author's reply
That little moment between Legolas and Annael seemed natural to me too. They've known one another for a long time, and once they were alone, Legolas was no longer 'my lord,' but someone whom Annael could say looked pleased with himself.
Glad you liked it, Lily. I've decided I'm not meant to write smut, though. Posting it made me much too nervous!
Tapetum Lucidum
· 4 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
I liked having Legolas have some time to himself to be a wood elf. He seldoms has time to enjoy his surroundings. He ususally to busy fending off orcs and overly friendly maidens. His consoling the trees was very sweet. I hope his father will be proud of the way he handled the difficult situation - especially for his first diplomatic mission. He was lucky to run into some pleasant company in Tuilinn. I could see how his carrot comment could be misinterpreted in light of the food situation. I liked how Legolas fought with his inner urges to act like Eilian (smirk) and flirt with the elleth. It was sweet the way he opened up to her. It is rare for him to do so, probably because his family already knows of the fight and they all venture near the shadow. The do not hold the appreciation that Tuilinn does. I hope that he gets to bring her a green ribbon. I was wondering exactly what they did in that hour. The next part of the story assured me that it didn't go much further than what we saw.
Eilian had a much more eventful evening. It was sweet of Celuwen to come and visit him as well as fill the prince in on the discussions in her cabin. I was glad to see Solith admitted his deception. Celuwen seemed surprised when Eilian mentioned a betrothal. I guess it wasn't in keeping with his more wild behavior of the past. What was the warrior thinking?! I guess he is indeed a man of action and not planning. It is hard to resist a beautiful female in a secluded forest glade. You did an excellent job handling the scene. It had a lot of emotion and you really expressed the depth of their feelings.
Thranduil is going to kill him. In your last comments you said you were unsure how the King would react to Legolas' situation - it would depend on his mood. Legolas better pray to the Valar that he arrives home first. I would not want to be the one to go in there after Eilian explains what he has done. Nor would I want to be the one who has to clean the blood off of the walls.
Author's reply
I can't see Legolas (or Ithilden) being as -- what word do I want? -- pressing with a maiden as Eilian is. I think he's internalized rules in a way that Eilian does not seem to have done. But then, he hasn't been in love and frustrated for years either. He was just taking an opportunity for joy, as his nana would have said.
Eilian wanted to bond with Celuwen and, from his point of view, their parents made it seem so impossible to do it conventionally that he had no choice but to throw caution to the winds and do what he wanted anyway. And Celuwen seemed to feel pretty much the same way. But somehow I doubt if either ada is going to hold Celuwen responsible.
Anonymous
· 4 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Another great story that I can not wait to read more of, which is indicative of all your work. I have been reading your series of young Legolas for some time now and am sorry I have not reviewed them until now. Normally, I have enough time to just print them and read them when I have a break from my students, which is usually at home and the computer is off. Thanks for sharing your work with those of us who enjoy a "loving father and family" image.
SasseyJ
Author's reply
Thank you so much for your kind words, SassyJ. It makes me feel good to think of you printing the chapters and carrying them around. I remember doing that with Jocelyn's "Little Nudge out the Door." I really believe in Good Ada Thranduil. And I enjoy writing about the dynamics in this family where the ties are strong even if tumultuous sometimes.
Kristy
· 4 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Oh God, they eloped! I'm so happy that they're together, but they are in for so much trouble. Angry, disapointed parents are never any fun.
I just hope that this hastily made decision dosen't spell misery. I know they love one another and that they belong together, but they haven't planned how to handle the near future. Where will Celuwen live when Elian is away? Will Eilian be ok leaving her to go back to the Southern Patrol? Or will he feel like he has to stay closer to home and then be eaten up with guilt for "abondaning" his patrol?
Ok can you tell I'm worried about tomorrow?
Oh but tonight, I'm so happy got them. They deserve this joy in eachother before the storm breaks tomorrow.
Please update soon. I know the scenes with the Adas will be ugly, but when you know trouble's coming wait for it is always the worst part.
You wrote this beautifully. I can really see the love they hold for eachother.
Author's reply
Thank you for saying the chapter was beautifully written, Kristy. I was kind of worried about it because it's a departure for me. And no, I seriously doubt if Eilian has thought about any of that. They have some work to do yet. There's a reason those Elven betrothals last a year!
I have been making notes to myself about the adas' reactions. I'm working on flooding the settlement where Legolas is right now, but I'll get back to Eilian soon.
sol III
· 4 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Cheers to the new young couple. May their happiness last
forever. HOwever, I must ask if Elian has given any serious
thought to changing his name and running away from home?
I will be waiting with storm shutters in place for the
tremendous two-fold natural disaster to follow this
announcement
Author's reply
Eilian is in very big trouble. He will need to keep reminding himself that his father loves him. He does, he does, he does! And Thranduil needs to be reminded of that too. After all, what would Naneth say? I'll bet she'd approve. I'm writing about Legolas at the moment, but I'll get to Eilian soon!
Thank you for the review.
Hisielome
· 4 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Shame, Shame, shame. Adar will not be pleased with his boys. But I am. Well done. You handled this well.
Author's reply
Thank you, Hisielome. I was worried about how explicit the bonding scene was, because I wanted it to be tender and loving as well as sensual, and I didn't want to offend readers whom I treasure. So I'm glad you liked it. And no, Thranduil will likely not be pleased.
Jebb
· 4 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Hurrah! Well done Eilian and Celuwyn they have finally put their feelings first and it was beautifully done too thank you for writing this it was needed I think they so obviously love each other and now they are bonded at least they have each other to rely on when the sotrm breaks over head. As I have no doubts it will two Adar's on the warpath Elian will find it safer in the south I think!
As for Legolas well good for him at least his little fling is less likely to be commmented on given what has happened elsewhere although knowing Thranduil he will find out eventually this was a superb chapter so full of lovely things
Author's reply
I've been laughing to myself at the way almost every single reviewer has jumped instantly to the realization that the adars are going to be really angry about this. That thought is still way in the back of Eilian's and Celuwen's heads, but morning will come and in the light of day, they're both going to wonder what in Arda they've done.
Legolas is going to look like a very good boy compared to big brother, but as French Pony reminded me in another review, what are brothers for?
Joee
· 4 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Oh dear...On the one hand I want to jump up and scream FINALLY! but on the other hand I know heads are going to roll over this. But I am glad they have finally bonded and I'm looking forward to seeing Thranduil's and especially Solith's reactions. Update soon please =)
Author's reply
Just what I like, an eager reader! Solith and Thranduil are both going to be sincerely ticked off over this. I think the newlyweds should expect to have a few problems once they come out of their current dazed state.
Glad you liked it, Joee.
erunyauve
· 3 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Oh, Eilian is in so much trouble! That was beautifully done, and I'm glad Eilian's body finally overcame his good sense and, more importantly, Celuwen's good sense. They will be much happier for it! But oh, he is in trouble!
I was actually thinking, when Legolas took a step back from Tuilinn, how much more sensible he was than his brother (somehow, I don't think the words, 'remember who you are' have ever come between Eilian and a kiss), though he seems to have got beyond that scruple. He can count himself lucky that Eilian's visit to the settlements has been somewhat more eventful than his.
Author's reply
I'm afraid you're right, and Eilian is in a whole lot of trouble. I hope he finds compensations for whatever storm is about to break over his head. Legolas is such a good son, comparatively speaking, that Thranduil should barely have time to say "trade, shmade."
French Pony
· 3 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Not rain nor snow nor fear of Ada shall keep these messengers from their appointed rounds, eh? I think Sólith is going to have what must be the weirdest experience in child-raising: hearing your kid tell you, rather graphically, to shove it. Sorry, Sólith. You snooze, you lose. I am having fun imagining what will happen the next morning when Ada wonders what happened to His Little Girl and goes out to look for her. Let the wacky hijinks begin!
On the other hand, this is rather like the climax (pun fully intended) of "Cold Mountain," so Eilian had better watch his tuchus for a while so it does not end up in the same position as Inman's.
And good ol' Legolas is probably going to find that his report to Thranduil is a lot easier now that Eilian has given the King something far more interesting than trade to worry about. But, after all, what are brothers for?
Author's reply
You're making me laugh, FP. You snooze, you lose, indeed! And given that elves can tell from another's eyes and voice if they're bonded, there will be no secrets here at all.
"What are brothers for?" LOL. Yes, indeed!
Fadesintothewest
· 3 April 2004
· Chapter 7: Night Meetings
Finally! Finally! Finally! I have been waiting for this moment for sooo long, and it is so great to finally have Eilian and Celuwen together. How wonderful for them. They need each other, they balance each other, they make each other happy. What a wonderful and romantic chapter Daw! And our Legolas finding solace with the young maident. I only hope he too can find the love Eilian has with Celuwen. The thought of such a loving and thoughtful soul to be without that kind of love is unbelievable to me. Great chapter!
Author's reply
I'm glad you're happy for the newlyweds! I suspect that not everyone in their lives is going to react that way. But I do think they love one another, and given that their parents love them, if they treat one another well and, as you say, make one another happy, then the parents will come around eventually. It's just what happens in the meantime that will be unpleasant.
Legolas is still in the early stages of whatever is happening there. Thank the Valar. I don't think my blood pressure could stand writing a chapter like this about him!