Idril Celebrindal · 10 April 2007 · Chapter 19: Gifts
Oh this was wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed it! I hope that there is a sequel about Legolas' retributions. Thank you for a wonderful read! Idril
Miscreants and Rapscallions by Elendiari22
Idril Celebrindal · 10 April 2007 · Chapter 19: Gifts
Oh this was wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed it! I hope that there is a sequel about Legolas' retributions. Thank you for a wonderful read! Idril
MaidenofValinor · 28 November 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
That was great! So cute! I absolutely love Faramir! You rock!
Author's reply
Thank you! Faramir is a real sweetie to write; I've written some other things concerning him, too. I'm so glad that you took the time to read this fic!
MaidenofValinor · 28 November 2004 · Chapter 3: Arrivals and a Case of Slight Misfortune
Wow...it's lucky they got hurt or they would be in trouble!
ladyeowynofrohan · 24 July 2004 · Chapter 16: Queen Arwen's Challenge
Oh very nice! i loved the whole thing :)
Tinania · 24 June 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
hi this review is obviously just to review on the story and i think it was ab fab! please write others like it and if you have please tell me the name of them and i will definatly read them (i think definatly is spelt wrong! oh well)
Author's reply
Thank you! I've written several other stories; you can find them all on my page here at Stories of Arda. Enjoy!
Pervinca · 24 June 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
So sweet! Oh, Faramir - that was such a typically hobbit thing to say! Good to see Merry got something out of his role in Arwen's little plan. I was waiting to see what you were going to give the poor fellow! Thank you for sharing this lovely little tale :) - Pervinca
Author's reply
Thank you for reading it! I almost forgot to give Merry his ale. Luckily I caught it. :)
Grey Wonderer · 23 June 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
Wonderful! I enjoyed every word of this! Legolas was splendid and I am so happy that Merry got a reward in the end. I loved your descriptions and I could just see Merry in that Pink frock! Can't wait for another story!
Author's reply
Thank you! I've read so many fics were Legolasis vapid, that I just had to remedy that. Then Arwen got in and dressed Merry in that frock, and they all ran away with me. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Hai Took · 23 June 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
What a wonderful way to end it! I guess Merry was paid off well for his putting up with the ladies shemes! Faramir suggesting a hobbit game of "go home and rest after the grand adventure". I certainly hope that rest and relaxationg wouldn't lead to too much trouble! It was such a fun story, thank you!
Author's reply
Thanks for reading it! Merry and Faramir were hilarious to write. And knowing the kids, relaxing WILL lead to trouble. :)
LOTRFaith · 23 June 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
Hmmmmm.... Legolas' Revenge by Elendaiari22?.... In the future?;-) Great story loved every bit of it!
Author's reply
Hmm, maybe. :) Thanks for reading, I'm glad that you like the story!
FantasyFan · 23 June 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
I was pleased to see that Merry got the best prize, for he was certainly the most put-upon by Arwen's game. A very fun story, and thank you for writing it.
Author's reply
Merry was fun to write, and he was lucky to get that ale. :) Thank you for reading, I'm really glad that you liked it!
shirebound · 23 June 2004 · Chapter 19: Gifts
A wonderful end to a truly wonderful story! I love Arwen's gifts, and it's easy to see that these children will be lifelong friends. Thank you for a delightful tale.
Author's reply
Thank you for reading it! Arwen's gifts were fun to write, and the kids were brilliant. :)
Hai Took · 12 June 2004 · Chapter 18: The End of the Contest
Merry being in such an bad mood was wonderful! I couldn't stop laughing! Really there was some pity for him ;) I'm glad they all made up their differences! I liked all the ladies grinning and only Arwen managing to make her smile serene! Hm, I would like to see Faramir and Eomer in dresses! Looking forward to finding out what the arrows were for!
Pervinca · 11 June 2004 · Chapter 18: The End of the Contest
I really believe that Arwen is much to clever for her own good. I missed the last couple of chapters, but I'm gald to have caught up on them now. I hope you will not be insulted if I dare to suggest you may be a little twisted - but, hey, aren't we all? :P Now, you certainly have me curious as to what the arrows are meant for. Knowing Arwen (or at least, how you have written her) it can't be good :P - Pervinca
Author's reply
Twisted? Me? *grins* Thank you. The arrows are the tricky part. I'll be getting to them soon. I'm pretty sure that they're harmless, though.
Sara Seanthi · 24 May 2004 · Chapter 17: The Challenge Happens
noonooonoo!! don't stop now!! I adore this story and I'm starting to read to my niece... she loves it aswell... continue soon! yours Sara Seanthi
Hai · 12 May 2004 · Chapter 17: The Challenge Happens
I loved the way you described each little challenge! I liked that Thrandul was the cat, it doest seeming fitting somehow! That Merry went out and got drunk before he had the challenge of course I think I probably would as well! The picture of Eowyn going after him was great! I liked this 'Legolas fought the urge to snicker at that. “I believe he has asked all of you to call him either Mr. Took or Pippin,” he said. “Lord Took makes him feel ridiculous.” ' Also this, “To think I’m running from my own people,” Legolas thought as they dashed away. “It’s absurd.” Looking forward to more, thank you!
lolololol · 11 May 2004 · Chapter 17: The Challenge Happens
Oh wow ! This was a great, and I do mean great chapter! This story has been absolutely amazing so far. Congrats must also go to Arwen who REALLY seems to have outdone herself and put a lot of thought in to this thing !!! And Gimli and all the others also helping ! Wow. Are you going to show us what the elves are going through in the next chapter ! I have a feeling that along with Legolas, they too will want "to wring her neck ". Haha, the kids seem to be enjoying it though ! Once again, good work and can't wait to see the next chapter * hint, hint*
shirebound · 11 May 2004 · Chapter 17: The Challenge Happens
Ack! How could you end it there??? (And how did this simple, adorable story evolve into something so complex and amazing? I'm just in awe.)
Hai · 21 April 2004 · Chapter 16: Queen Arwen's Challenge
I can never help but laugh! And Merry is still apart of this one, poor guy! Using Alice in Wonderland was a fantastic idea! I liked this “If nothing else, we must always remember that we have brought this upon ourselves,” he said. I can't wait to find out what happens on the next challenge!
Pervinca · 17 April 2004 · Chapter 16: Queen Arwen's Challenge
Oh, dear... :P So that's where Lewix Carrol came up with the idea - it had nothing to do with drugs at all! Celeborn -> Lewis Carrol. I can see how it could work :P I really think the next chapter will frighten me, lol. I don't know who I'd prefer to rescue the hapless maiden. Faramir seeing his dear uncle Merry in a dress would be priceless, but so would Legolas finding him! Oh well, I suppose I will just have to wait and see :)
sqrt(-1) · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 16: Queen Arwen's Challenge
While I agree that that is an extremely un-Middle Earth-ish thing, it is also extremely funny, and therefore you can be forgiven. And you did a good job adapting it and sticking Middle Earth references into it to make it seem more Middle Earth-ish. I look forward to the challenge itself.
Lyta Padfoot · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 16: Queen Arwen's Challenge
The elves seem to be finding themselves in other their heads while the children are sensibly reviewing the story. As a fan of "Alice" I adored the notion of Celeborn as Lewis Caroll and Arwen as the inspiration for the girl.
Anso the Hobbit · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 2: The Ballroom
Poor Legolas, or rather: Poor High King of Gondor. But it looks like they both enjoy this too much to be angry. I bet Pip would have liked to join them.
Anso the Hobbit · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Crime and Punishment
Hobbit lads = disaster! Off to read more.
Amlee · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 16: Queen Arwen's Challenge
I am still enjoying this story! I love the whole Alice in Wonderland idea. Keep up the great work!
sqrt(-1) · 11 April 2004 · Chapter 15: An Even Score
Next chapter! Next chapter! I can't wait to see what the ladies are up to. Poor Merry, somehow I think that everybody else is going to find out about that dress soon :)