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| A Perilous Journey to Lorien by LadyJaina | 36 Review(s) |
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| Nurayy | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/27/2021 |
| Love to see these two together and I'm very attentive about their interactions and conversations. I like to see how authors approach them. And I like your take on them, of their slowly building friendship. Your writing style is very pleasant and fluid to read. | |
| Nurayy | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/27/2021 |
| I like the way you show Legolas strong even in this state, determined and commanding them to go. And I forgot to tell you before that I very much liked how how Merry saw him, even his fighting style. I liked the action. And Boromir's POV, his musings about Aragorn and Faramir and that in the end he very much respects him. Author Reply: Thank you! Action is very hard for me to write, so this really stretched by abilities! | |
| Nurayy | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/27/2021 |
| Awww Aragorn/Legolas friendship... I love that! You show Aragorn's care and fear for the elf so well. Author Reply: They are probably one of my favorite friendships, though Gimli and Legolas are a really close second! | |
| Nurayy | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/27/2021 |
| I like how you are writing every chapter from a different POV. It is interesting to get to see their thoughts. Poor Legolas! I especially love to see Gimli's thoughts and reactions about Legolas. Touching a soft spot, a care, and a friendship I love so much slowly begin. You did so well also showing Gimli's grief for his kin, the people he knew and cared for, so much death and destruction. I also like how you wove in quotations of the book. Author Reply: Thank you! I couldn't decide on a favorite point of view...so I just had to do them all! | |
| Nurayy | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/27/2021 |
| This is a good start. I liked the POV from Frodo and you show the grief for Gandalf very well. Author Reply: Thank you so much! | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/25/2021 |
| Oh, lovely! I enjoy discovering new book-verse-based reading options. I have bookmarked this for later reading. (I have to go back to work now after a flying break, and with the editing deadlines piling up, I'm not sure if I'll get back before the weekend, or perhaps the weekend after. Still, something to look forward to.) Author Reply: I'm so glad to hear that! I hope that you'll enjoy reading this. I'm hard at work on finally getting Chapter Nine up, so you should have plenty of time to catch up! | |