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Pippin-Frog For A Day  by Neilia 32 Review(s)
Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/28/2008
Ohhh, I was in suspense for long weeks... Of course Gandalf wouldn't let harm come to the Hobbits! What a relief - a ward. So Pip-frog won't be any snake's dinner. And he actually is feeling sorry for what he has done. I hope he does learn his lesson... or may Gandalf consider lengthening the spell? *grins in a way saying she wouldn't mind*
-Kitt

Author Reply: Hahaha! Poor Pip! You want him to be a tiny green tree frog longer? He won't hear of it. He is gumming my finger right now wanting to be turned into a Hobbit the very next chapter; but, no promises! Hugs, Neilia

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/27/2008
Bless Gandalf for that thoughtfulness! Poor Pippin--fearing he would be a snake's meal! And now he'd even sacrifice his afters for Merry? Dear, foolish Took!


Author Reply: Yes, our Pip is pretty much a scamp. Hope he doesn't change too much, though. Would hate for him to lose that little twinkle in his eye! :D Hugs, Neilia

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/27/2008
Oh my!! Poor wee froggy-Pip :-O

I'm glad Gandalf protected him and that he is learning some lessons :-)

So well done, Neilia!!

Author Reply: Thabk you, Pearl. I appreciate your review so very much. See you next chapter. Hugs, Neilia

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/27/2008
Well, thank goodness Gandalf had the foresight to protect our frog-hobbit (froggit?). But poor Pip, what a fright!

Author Reply: Thank you for your review. Froggit? I love the term! Wish I had thought of it and applied it sooner. Do you think that it would fit in so late? Hugs, Neilia

Hobbit_FriendReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/28/2008
"No ‘ribbit' answered him, no gentle tugging of his foot-hair."

EEEEEEEEEEEE! What brilliant, hobbity writing! ^-^
More, please. *big round doe eyes - BLINK, BLINK*

Author Reply: Thank you for your enthusiasm. The next chapter is in the hopper. See ya soon. Hugs, Neilia :D

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/13/2008
Yes, totally AU - but what fun! I like Pippin-the-frog and his still Hobbitty appetite.


Jay




Author Reply: Yep! Pip-frog is still totally Hobbit. :D Thank you for the review. Look for the next chapter soon.

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/12/2008
Naughty of Pip-frog to scare his Merry like that! And now he's really in for it - I hope you don't leave us hanging off this cliff too long!

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: Cliff? Did I leave you hanging? *Teeheehee* Will post next chapter as soon as me and my beta get it whipped into shape. Thank you for reviewing. Hugs, Neilia

Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/12/2008
I loved it when he ate the bugs. This is excellent and Pippin really was enjoying being a frog but now, he is in serious trouble from the sound of things. I don't know which will be worse, Gandalf having to explain things to Lord Elrond or Pippin frog tangling with a snake! Merry had better hurry up and find Pip! (I hope there's more soon!)

Author Reply: Well, now I have to write Pip-frog in or out of trouble, right? It's coming along...it's coming along. Thank you for your review. :D

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/11/2008
Great story so far! Pip-frog seemed to have a lot of fun - until that snake appeared!

I don't know what's that "something about Pippin's condition" Gandalf talked about, but I really hope it will prevent the snake from eating Pip-frog.

I'm looking forward to reading more :)

Author Reply: Thank you Andrea for your review. Pip-frog does seem to be in a fix! We shall see what is up in the next chapter. *Teehee* It's fun being the author! :D

Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/11/2008
This is very different and hilarious! Oh, Pippin is so notty...
I like the contrast between Bilbo and Sam's exclamations.
I can imagine his plump hobbity-frog stomach would look appetizing to any snake. But you won't really let him get eaten? I'll just have to be patient for the next chapter then. :)
-kitt

Author Reply: Cool! So glad you like my tale. Oh, yes, the next chapter should be interesting. :D

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