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| Little Ones about Little Ones by Golden | 68 Review(s) |
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| Celeritas | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/6/2009 |
| Emerald has got Pippin wrapped around her little finger! This was flufftastic! I also really liked the cradle song that you incorporated. Author Reply: Thanks Celeritas :) Emerald is a Took... that explains everything. ;) | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/6/2009 |
| Aw, what a sweet little story! And I think Larner used the perfect expression concerning cute little babies: enchantment! That's exactly what I felt when the wee little daughter of my friend was placed in my arms for the very first time. So cute! But like Pippin I was a little bit afraid. Now, she's already three years old - and still cute :) Merry (as Pippin's protector) had to find out that his little cousin was now a protector himself! Well, time is flying! And in the end Merry found himself enchanted by the little baby, too! Very nice and very true! And, of course, I recognised the song, "Schlaf, Kindlein, schlaf...". Did you translate it? It sounded very well in English! Author Reply: Glad you liked it Andrea! :) The song I did not translate myself, but found the english translation of it online. However I found it fitting. Just the last verse...terrible..something with when the child does not sleep and stops crying then the farmers dog will come and bites it dead. :-/ | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/6/2009 |
| Ah--the enchantment of babies spreads from one young Hobbit to another and another! Wonderful! And did you say "pea-butt?" Oookay! Author Reply: *g* Yep Pea-butt! I found it fitting for the behind of an Hobbit babe. :P Thanks for reading! | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/6/2009 |
| How adorable that Pip was able to lure Merry into enjoying the baby as much as he did. Author Reply: Thanks for reading :) And Pip is good at luring Merry into something and I guess his niece has the Took Charme as well. ;) | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/2/2008 |
| Jana! This is absolutely amazing! You are a wonderful poet, and in a language not your own! The imagery just glowed, and your rhymes and rhythm were just right! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/1/2008 |
| Fun to read this again here. Hobbit madlibs! Heh! | |
| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/1/2008 |
| That was nice and sneaky! Cute story! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/1/2008 |
| Sometimes, wonders do happen. They do, indeed! How very clever of Frodo to turn the writing lesson into a game. And the outcome was very funny. “Merry steps crazily on a cow-pat.” LOL!!! Just imagine that! I love to read and review all those wonderful stories here. When I happen to find a German one I'm really happy about it and place a German review. But I also know that for you it means double work. And time is precious! So don't worry, I'll be fine. Vielen Dank für die schöne Geschichte :) | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/1/2008 |
| Adorable! Frodo is very clever indeed, and it's fun to see the hobbits playing with 'plotbunny' and challenge ideas like we do. :) | |
| Saphira | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/1/2008 |
| What a wonderful story, Golden! I really liked it^^ The End made my smile a tiny bit, it was such fun to read! | |