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| One Heart Protecting Another by Antane | 174 Review(s) |
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| Cleo | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/7/2005 |
| Really interesting so far, I like the detail, and the inclusion of the Elvish. The word "okay" really throws me out of the story every time I read it though, as it's a really modern word. The rest of the story is good, but it would be even better if you edited that word out. Author Reply: Hi and thanks for your review. You're right about 'okay' - I've replaced it with 'all right' in most cases and sometimes 'fine'. Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Elentariel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/6/2005 |
| Let's hope that Elrond, or Glorfindel or Arwen are already on their way. That would certainly speed up matters. It seems better in reflection, as well as worse as you know what will happen | |
| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/6/2005 |
| No! No! You have me shivering on the edge of my seat! More, more, pleeeeeease! This is remarkable, Antane! It's definitely going on my favourite stories list! But please, please, pleeease post more soon!!! Namarie, and God bless! Galadriel | |
| Starfire_Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/6/2005 |
| How could you leave us like that! That is just no fair. *picks up handful of popcorn and throws at Antane* Poor Frodo. And he got stabbed twice too! Please, oh please continue soon!!!:D | |
| Elentariel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/5/2005 |
| Oh dear, here we go again! It must be awful to know what you're about to go throught but have no choice in the matter. Kind of like the hobbit actors talking about filming the grey havens sequence three times! Update, it's good | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/5/2005 |
| Wow roller coster here we come. I especially loved the pledges given by various people. | |
| Starfire_Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 10/5/2005 |
| So, now they're on their way to Weathertop now. And your right, just in time for the anniversary. And now Aragorn is with them! Yah! ^_^ At least the Hobbits won't have to worry about much, right? And Merry and Pip won't stay behind if you have them a million bucks, would they? Post more soon!!!:D | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/5/2005 |
| The plot deepens and changes are happening and our appitites are whetted - more, more, more! Pleeese! | |
| Starfire_Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/4/2005 |
| Well, at least Gandalf doesn't have to worry about Sam not keeping promises. He proved that last time. And what sort of business does Gandalf have this time? He already knows about the Ring, so he doesn't have to go to Gondor, unless it has something to do with Aragorn. It seems that Saruman is starting his rain of terror pretty fast, eh? Post more soon!!:D | |
| RS | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/4/2005 |
| So, time reversed itself. Are we going to find out how this happened later on? So if everybody knows, does this mean that Aragorn is not king?. Will Boromir be brought back from the death and will he know? Are they going to do things differently? AAHH but if they know, So will Sauron! Knowing what he knows now.. he will have an advantage and will he do things differently? I need to keep reading. I am very intrigued! | |