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| Chain Reaction by Estelle | 46 Review(s) |
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| Elven Queen of Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 2/15/2005 |
| I have followed this story with joy, and I appreciate your attempt to write on one plot with different authors. Yet in this chapter I began to worry what the heroes can take without simply breaking down! Being injured and maltreated for such a long time and with grievious wounds, it is quite hard to imagine them moving at all. And wasn't Legolas shackled before, or did I overread the part in which he was freed? Anyway you girls do a marvellous job! Author Reply: Legolas was freed in Chapter 15. You must have missed it. :D | |
| Timmy2222 | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 2/15/2005 |
| Wow, this was a griping chapter! What twists and turns! Kept me on the edge of my seat. Looking forward to more! - T. Author Reply: Do you need a seatbelt? *eg* Or perhaps a pillow for you to fall on? LOL! Glad you liked it! :D :D :D | |
| Galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 2/5/2005 |
| NO NO NO NO! You EVIL person! You and your EVIL cliffies! How can you live with yourself torturing me like this! *sniff* Please update soon, this is a great story! Author Reply: Of course I can live with myself. I didn't write that chapter. I only post it. *cackles evilly* | |
| Faith | Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 2/5/2005 |
| NOOOOOO!!!!! not again!!!??? sheesh..you cantkeep doing this to me...this this is is is is...just...so of the wrongness...the supsense is killing me....update soon! sooner than soon!:) Faith, the slightly obssesesed fangirl Author Reply: Will update after the 14th. I'm on holiday now. Lalalala *eg* | |
| Faith | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 1/28/2005 |
| Oh no! shes back! oh of all the things...oh no another cliffie!? update soon! sooner than soon! sooner than sooner than soon! LOL hehehe keep it up..this fic is awesome! write more...cant stand cliffies..all that supsense is going to drive me crazy....but i cant wait find out what happens...more please!:) Faith the slightly obssesed fangirl | |
| Faith | Reviewed Chapter: 21 on 1/21/2005 |
| oh no! poor elrond...:( please please please tell me theres a nice happy ending...cant take more of this...supsense....you better update soon! sooner than soon! sooner than sooner than soon! sooner than sooner than sooner than sooner than soon! I MEAN NOW!!!!! NOW! NOW! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!! LOL.... Faith, the slightly obsssessed Fangirl Author Reply: Ok, I'll tell you that there's a nice happy ending :D But update now? No, not now. Maybe tomorrow... or the day after tomorrow... or two days after tomorrow... or... LOL! But don't worry, it'll be updated eventually. :D | |
| Lyn | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/3/2005 |
| Excellent writing...however, I cannot stress it enough when I say that one should NEVER give liquids to an unconscious person, because the liquid goes into the lungs, not the stomach. There is no "reflex swallowing" that many writers seem to think exist. The tiny flap of tissue that temporarily separates the esophagus (food pipe) from the trachea (air pipe) is controlled voluntarily by someone who is awake. When a person is nconscious, this piece of tissue is relaxed and thus any liquid entering the mouth enters the trachea (breathing tube) and goes directly into the lungs. In effect, giving liquids to an unconscious person allows one to murder them by drowning them, depending on the amount of liquid administered. If not drowned immediately, they will suffer pneumonia. So---please do not have anyone give unconscious characters liquids (or solids either). This is the reason people in comas died from dehydration. It was only until the advent of sterile vein infusions that unconscious people could be kept alive. Author Reply: Ahh, okies. Will keep that in mind. Thank you for pointing it out for us! :) | |
| elf-girl | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/3/2005 |
| WWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Please make Legolas die! Kill him! Kill him! KILL HIM! (I know I will later regret this but just do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) Author Reply: Killing Legolas is a very bad idea. We value our lives too much to attempt that :P Sorry to disappoint you. Hehehe. *eg* | |
| Dayna | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 12/24/2004 |
| This just keeps getting better and better! I squeal in delight every time I see it near the top of the "Recent" list! You guys are just AWESOME!! MORE MORE MORE!! :) Author Reply: *squeals in delight too* Glad you enjoy the story as much as we enjoy writing it :D :D :D | |
| Timmy2222 | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 12/17/2004 |
| I stil enjoy reading this story, and I marvel at the strength the protagonists display with every chapter. I would have loved to have a look at how the two injured Elves were placed into the boat... Take care, - T. Author Reply: They will be placed into the boat very carefully. LOL!! Glad you're enjoying this story :D | |