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Long She Awaited Her Sorrow  by Tinuviel ylf maegden 23 Review(s)
RosieLuvsHerChainsawReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/10/2004
*in sing-song voice* someone's having mood swings...

Author Reply: Are you refering to Elfhild or me? One would believe she already was pregnant with her fluctuating hormone-level. Forgive her. And it's not like you'll ever have kids, so you can live vikariously through her in my story.

RosieLuvsHerChainsawReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/10/2004
Well, Theoden, maybe if you guys... *caugh* you know... there would be a better chance of haveing kids...

Author Reply: Shet up, Rosie the serial killer. Not like *you* could ever get a guy like Theoden in your life. ;)

P.S. Rosie the soon to be jailed is wine min, so she doesn't care (I think) when I disparage her.

DracawynReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/10/2004
I had never cared much about the character Elfhild but now, she seems to have a spirite so like my own that i cannot help but like her. And Rhiannon is awsome. you are amazing when it comes to discription.

Author Reply: Why thank you, Dracawyn. How so do you identify with her?

DracawynReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/10/2004
Beautifuly sad with a little glimer of hope. I LOVE IT! (I'm in picess mode again)

Author Reply: Thanks, Dragon-fancier. I'm glad you love it. Hurrah for the picese!!! (which includes myself {quite obvious}, Aragorn, King Arthvr, and Galahad).

DracawynReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/10/2004
*giggles* very subtle. that's what Tolkien did to suggest stuff on wedding nights... describe the bed sheets. But it was very romantic and sweet even in those short verses... and honestly I've never thought of Theoden like that... i meen i knew he had a child but... it still is a little wierd to me, especialy sence you began to refer to him as Miss Havisham...

Author Reply: Give it up, Wemmick-fancier! But tee-hee, I love the Bombadil poem where they talk about his sheets (almost as much as "Little Princess Mee" {"The Adventures of Tom Bombadil," though thank Elbereth that said poem was not one of them). And thank you anyway. My giggling suprasses yours. I win.

eokatReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/8/2004
Very moving chapter. What a choice before Elfhild. She so desperately wants a child. Well written and such detail. I loved it. Eokat.

Author Reply: Thank you very much, Eokat, for reviewing my story, and thank you twice for liking it!

Lady EponaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/7/2004
Oh this is so well written my dear sister. I do ever so look forward to the next chapter as I am very much so enjoying this story. Please continue...


Author Reply: Thanx Gin Tonic! guese what? Astarte gave me her password! HA! guese who this REALLY is... go on, guese.

Author Reply: Yes, I was forced to give my friend my password. The previous reply was writtin by the Rosie mass murderer person. Yep. Very interesting, she. But yes, Gin, I shall continue.

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/3/2004
Really good!
She wants a child so much,that she looks to the wise old women.... She is told if she has the child she will die,yet even that dosen't make her turn back....Please keep up the good work,update soon....

Author Reply: Thank you, pipinheart! I shall. Sorry it takes me so long to reply, I'm not very good with technology.

eokatReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/2/2004
This is good. You write so well and with such emotion. I look forward to the next chapter. Eokat.

Author Reply: Thank you! *Beams* I appreciate your reviews!

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/1/2004
Really like this story...A woman who is desperately wants a child,and is willing to look to anyone for aide...
Great job... Please continue

Author Reply: Thanks be! And I shall, thanks to your encouragement. Thanks be again!

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