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Blanketed in Love  by TopazTook 60 Review(s)
ValerieReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/16/2004
This will be a review for the past three chapter that I have missed. They were all wonderful! I can tell you right now that I was highly disappointed when I didn't see the link to the next chapter. So, not only has Pippin gotten rid of an enemy, he has made a new friend :). I'm looking forward to the next update!

Author Reply: Thank you for your comments on my chapters! I will be posting the next one right now as per your request.
Pippin has indeed managed to outwit Regi by being good and kind -- even Regi got part of what he wanted, in a position with respect!

ElenarReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/16/2004
Great chapter. Good to see Pippin's continued improvement.

Author Reply: I promised I'd fix him, didn't I?

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 17 on 6/16/2004
Really good.....
I liked seeing fern back in the story,she was a character I liked. Pippin is walking about and playing games,he even plays with regi's brother.
Regi isn't a nice fellow,wasn't to nice to fern.... I like that pippin wanted to give sam a gift,really nice.....
Keep up the great work,and update soon.....

Author Reply: Thank you for your comments on Fern: positive reaction to her was part of the reason she showed up again. And Regi is a bad hobbit to pretty much everyone, not just Pippin.

pipspebbleReviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/10/2004
Oh, I just love this chapter! I have loved them all, but the ending of this one especially is heartwarming. Cannot wait to read more, and thank you for sharing this gem with the rest of us. :-)

Pips


Author Reply: Oh, thank you for such a sweet and touching review! And thank you for the plug on the Quill and Inklings list, too -- I did see it, I just can't get on the list during the day to respond (my work computer blocks it because of the "some adult content" notification on yahoo groups).

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/10/2004
Really good!!

Pippin seesm so happy and carefree with his father,and family. Yet I do wonder if regi won't harm him to get him out of the way. He want to be Thain after all,but pippin did hear him,if only he could tell them.
Pippin walked it was such a great surprise to all,it was nice...

Kepp up the great work,uodate soon....

Author Reply: Pippin's glad to be home, but Regi is not glad to have him there. I think Pippin has some ideas about Regi, though....

ElenarReviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/9/2004
That was so cute. I am so happy for Pippin. Can't wait for more.

Author Reply: Thank you. I thought the next chapter would be up sooner, as I had planned to write it on my business trip the end of last week, but I discovered that a snoring seatmate on an airplane does not make it easy to concentrate.

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/9/2004
Alright!!! You Go Pippin!!! And you have laid down a good beginning to more mischief from Reginard and his brother. Good job!!

Author Reply: Pippin appreciates his cheering section. Regi probably does not appreciate your suspicions, but, of course, the rest of us know you are being an accurate judge of character. Thanks for the compliment!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/7/2004
This was a wonderful look into Pippin's thoughts and how adults must look sometimes to children. Well done!!

Author Reply: Thank you. I'm glad it worked for you. I knew I wanted "silent Pippin" to do the internal narration for at least one chapter of this fic, but I had a struggle to maintain the same little hobbit "voice" I'd used for him earlier - I'm still not sure I'm entirely satsified. Plus, when he did try to narrate to me, he tends to tell a story in circles.

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/7/2004
Really like it. Pippin seems so lonly, I feel for him. Frodo seems a bit frustrated and not really sure what to do.
Pippins dad finially picks him up,pippin misses his family,but I wonder what awaits him at home.
good story,update soon...

Author Reply: Hmm, well I think you may have picked up on some of how Frodo feels -- he's not used to little hobbits, as Pippin notices. Of course, part of that could also be from an author who was having an especially hard time writing Bagginses in this chapter.

ElenarReviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/7/2004
Poor Pippin. I can't wait for him to get better. I love Paladin showing up at the end. Great chapter.

Author Reply: Glad you liked it. Thank you.

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