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| The Touch of Sight by LAXgirl | 83 Review(s) |
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| Ashaselle | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 7/14/2004 |
| Well, I got through the whole story in one sitting (last night). Great Story! Please write more. It's been alsmost a month since you updated! Surely you can not leave poor Legolas in the burning building with yet another crack to his poor head! Update soon. Thank you. Asha | |
| longlivetheking | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 7/9/2004 |
| Woah...........I have so many rheitorical questions (I think that's how you spell it), like "Is he dead?" and "Is 'The Bad Guy' gonna survive? And if so, how?" Oh, and my most pressing one:"Does she enjoy leaving us hanging?" But seriously, that is one peice of work right there. Post soon, please! You're killing us! [No pun intended, so refrain from the evil looks please. :P] | |
| lwarren | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/27/2004 |
| LAXgirl!!!!!! There you are!!!!! I was so glad to see this addition.....and you had to go and make it another evil you-know-what!!! AAAGGGHHH! Just when you thought is was safe to etc.,etc.,etc. Well, it is a nice LOOOONG chapter, and that stupid guard-murderer (can't remember his name - CRC strikes again!) finally got his due!! You really do write a good fight, tho'...the one in the alley with Gimli was very well done, and the final battle in what's his name's house with Legolas had me ducking and cringing and yelling! :-) (Haven't you ever read a story with Legolas about to get the snot beat out of him and yelled at him to move or duck or something? Your's did that *deep calming breath*!) And of course, you just had to add the FIRE! Legolas's almost escape was very convincing, too! Now, our poor elf has another head wound, and is about to be roasted to a fine turn.....HOW COULD YOU LEAVE HIM LIKE THAT!!! ummmm, sorry.....Seriously, great chapter as usual, and I was struck by the absolute tenacity you had Legolas pursue the murderer with. He was not about to give up and have that monster kill again! The elf was going to catch him or die trying *sob* and he just might! *sobsobsob* Update soon, I fear for the elf and my sanity! *g* linda Author Reply: Wahahaha! *evil laughter!* Evil cliff hangers are my specialty. Haven't you realized that yet? ^_^ Anyway, thank you for the review. I'm glad to hear I had yo ducking and cringing. Oh, and you know i had to add that little fire in there just to add a little spice to the story. You didn't actually think I was going to let Legolas get out of there that easily, did you? I can't give you any hints about how or even if Legolas is going to get out of this, but hopefully I'll have an update out sometime soon (hopefully sometime before you lose your sanity! ^_^) Thanks again for the review. Till next update! Signing out -LAXgirl | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/25/2004 |
| You had me skimming through the chapter just to make sure that Legolas was ok! (Then I went back and read it again.) I really enjoyed how you created such a vivid word picture during the fire and the fight. Well done. I'm guessing our story is (sadly) almost at the end? Author Reply: Ha ha! That was funny how you cheated and went ahead to make sure Legolas was ok (kind of... ^_^). Yes, the story is slowly winding down. There's only about one more chapter and possibly (I'm not really sure if I'm going to just put it with the next chaqpter or make it it's own) an epilogue. But like I said, I'm not sure if the actual epilgoue is going to be added with the nexdt chapter. Thanks for the review.Glad to hear I had you on the edge of your seat. Till next update (which opefully won't be two months from now! :P). Signing out -LAXgirl | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 16 on 6/25/2004 |
| Oh My God. That was very very very awesome chapter. Will someone find him before he gets burned to death? I was wondering if you forgot about this story, but you didnt, and you sure know how to make up for a long wait. Dont keep us waiting for too long, again. -sofia Author Reply: Aw no! I couldn't forget ToS!! Thought that was something of a long hiatus before I managed to update again. And like you said, I tried to make up for such a long time with a nice long chapter. Thanks for the review. There's no hints about what's going to happen next. But I will promise I'm going to try and get an update out within the next two months. :P j/k j/k! Thanks again. Glad you liked the last chapter. Signing out -LAXgirl | |
| Elerrina | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/12/2004 |
| Ack! Evil, evil woman ;) Legolas' powers must be contagious or something, because I just knew that Harberd was going to be the one, and it was not a good feeling...all that stuff about being a guard "having its advantages" and his questions was very creepy—I just wanted to yell, "Get out of there, already!" at Legolas and Gimli :) Interesting how it was an action motivated by reflexive helpfulness that was to give his secret away... You'd just better not get Legolas or Gimli killed, that's all! *grin* Looking forward to the next update: I think it's just reading fanfic that gets me through my exams (and will probably lead to my failure in them, too, but do I *look* worried? ;) ) Author Reply: Well, no hints about how Legolas and Gimli are going to get out of this, but let's just say all hell's breaking loose next chapter. *chuckles evilly* Thank you for the review. Hope the fic helped you get through finals... I know how beastly they can get... Thanks again! Signing out -LAXgirl | |
| longlivetheking | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/11/2004 |
| Oh my gosh! You are a *very* talented writer of fanfic, and I've read quite a few. The way you portray Legolas is very.....refreshing compared to many other stories I've read (example: Legolas falling in love with a Mary-Sue, Legolas getting "overcome with lust" and...um....doing things to Mary-Sue[s], etc. etc.) Very catchy story, and I can't wait (read: CAN'T. WAIT.) till the next chapter, so please, pretty please post more soon! :P Your fan (lol), longlivetheking Author Reply: Aw thank you! *blushes* I can understnad what you mean about mary-sue writing. I tend to try and stay away from stories such as those described above like the plague. Thanks for the review. Hope you like the new chapter! Signing out -LAXgirl | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/8/2004 |
| Augh!I knew something was up when the guard *insisted* that they take someone with him! Why are they being led so far away? Is he going to kill them as well? When will you update? So many frantic questions...so few answers... Once again, this is truly excellent and I am throughly enjoying this. :) Author Reply: Questions questions questions... all unfortuanately I can't give any hints for! ^_^ You're just going to have to wait for the next chapter just like everyone else! But no fear! I've already started on it and should have it up sometime (relatively :P) soon... (famous last words...) I am trying tho, so keep a look out for it. Thanks for the review. Signing out -LAXgirl | |
| Miss | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 6/4/2004 |
| That was awsome! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please, update soooooooon! Bye! | |
| Souad | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/3/2004 |
| A good start!! | |