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| To fool an Elf by frodo16424 | 40 Review(s) |
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| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 1/19/2004 |
| Can mortals play? I think this should be a computer game - sneak into Imladris without being caught, a la castle wolfenstein (I just dated myself :/) I look forward to seeing what you come up with - and what Estel has found that apparently has been unknown for thousands of years! (that will make it devious, I am sure). Hang-gliding? :D | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/19/2004 |
| Ha! Estel hid in plain sight! That always throws us when we seek deception :/ | |
| tmelange | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 1/17/2004 |
| This is a great competition! I can't wait to see how it plays out. I like the fact that everyone is now in on it. Kudos. More soon, please. | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/14/2004 |
| Rivendell's been punk'd! This is way too funny, even better than a pile of hobbits. I can't wait to see what Estel comes up with next. | |
| Kathira | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/13/2004 |
| Another good trick! These kinds of things are hard to write, because they take more imagination than the usual sort of story, but you are doing very well. Excellent work, very well-written and clever. I just have a question/quibble on the this last one, however. Was Estel the scout who came to tell Elrond about the party with the injured man? I could believe he went back and forth, guiding the twins and Glorfindel without being recognized. But if it was, it wasn't very nice of you not to mention that he went with them! I suppose I'll have to wait with Elladan and Elrohir for the fuller explanation in the next chapter. Can't wait! | |
| tmelange | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 1/13/2004 |
| This is so very clever! I look forward to reading more! | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 1/10/2004 |
| ok, he is either one of the healers, the sick person or one of the servants. i will guess that Legolas's father is one of the healers, and Estel is one of the servants. I think i need more clues here! | |
| tmelange | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/10/2004 |
| This is great! more soon, please! | |
| Shireling | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 1/9/2004 |
| Lovely picture of the two Elf Lord's rolling about laughing. My money is on Estel!!! Great job...can't wait for the next installment Helen | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/7/2004 |
| well had that totally wrong, or backwards. would have loved to see Estel in a dress. How is he going to do it two more times, the twins are going to looking twice at any old woman that crosses their path. looking forward to more | |