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| Taken by Iorhael | 108 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/30/2007 |
| Pretty frightening indeed. How can he tell without Sauron finding out he's telling? This is the question. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/30/2007 |
| A desperately nasty one, Sauron. Pure spirit, this Frodo? Then how is it he feels hunger and his stomach growls and he breathes out in a huff of air? It seems if he could somehow manage to destroy the palantir or to hide it from Sauron he could halt a good deal of what's going on. That last image is pretty gross, I'll admit. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/30/2007 |
| Oh, NASTY Sauron--nasty Sauron. The cell becomes a torture chamber, and the palantir of Minas Morgul is at Sauron's command, not allowing free Frodo to tell what's going on. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/30/2007 |
| Sauron is starting quickly with the torture, I see. It has managed to scare the rest, I see. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/30/2007 |
| An interesting premise and beginning. Frodo divided and used against himself? | |
| marigold6 | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/5/2005 |
| I'm only to Chapter 5 but this is very creepy! Poor Frodo Spirit - having to watch himself and the others in the Palantir. And then being chained to the wall...eek! Author Reply: *grins* Sorry for having tormented Frodo so. But thank you very much for reading. I hope you're 'strong' enough to continue. :) | |
| Starfire_Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 11/2/2005 |
| Just found this and starting reading it. O_O Whoa.... what a story it is! Will Frodo's torment be over soon? Or will Gandalf be too late to save the other half of Frodo's spirit from Sauron? I am on pins and needles, literaly! Don't leave us all hangin' here, please. Author Reply: Thank you for trying this. :) I want to continue this soon, too. Heheh. And thank you! You have given me some ideas there. | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 23 on 10/31/2005 |
| AI! Talk about a cliffhanger! *pets poor Frodo* Hang on, dear one, help is on the way. (At least I hope he doesn't have too long to wait.) Perfect treat for Halloween Shinta! I've been missing this something fierce. Author Reply: *squeezes you o someone beloved!* I hope it won't be too long, but... *grins guiltily* And I really, really hope I wasn't too gentle. Thanks so very much for your encouragement! XXX | |
| Periantari | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 1/1/2005 |
| oh no oh no :*( Sauron is back and nastier than ever...=( please let Gandalf come to rescue Frodo soon~! ooo the climax is nearing i can feel it.. or is it? aww please update soon~! this is getting me very excited for more. =) this is going to be incredibly interesting. =) Spirit Frodo is in quite a fix. :/ i love this line though: "That’s my lad, thought the grey pilgrim. The lad he used to know: strong-willed and inquisitive." "Strong-willed and inquisitive" aww i love Frodo~!! <3 Author Reply: Heheh. Why oh why do I only reply now? Sorry. Btw, thanks for reading. But... Sauron is always nasty! :) | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/29/2004 |
| *whimper* Sometimes a glimmer of hope seems to be a bad thing. How is Gandalf going to know when it's safe to go now? (Wait, he can't go; Sauron will be waiting!) ACK! *bites nails* I've missed this! I know I'm impatient, but I hope the next chapter doesn't take so long... Author Reply: Can Gandalf go? Or not? I hope he can. It seems very difficult in this universe. You cannot be hopeful too much. Thank you for coming by. I hope the next chap won't be long, too! | |