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| The Price of Freedom by erin lasgalen | 2 Review(s) |
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| LisaB | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/3/2004 |
| Just a quick note to tell you I'm enjoying your story. I'm a fan of your DBZ works and was thrilled to find this. It was a bit slow to get into, but that may also be the learning curve of the fandom (I only know the movies). Once it gets going, however, it drags you in and keeps you there. Brava! I noticed quite a few mistakes (typos, homonyms, etc.) Do you need a beta for this story? I would be pleased to help if you do. I've left me email if you need one. | |
| ... | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/18/2003 |
| This is looking really good. I'm glad to see a well written Eyown finally coming to the fore. Please continue! | |