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| The White Horse and the White Banner by Chigger | 3 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 12/19/2003 |
| I am so glad that you included the part where she asks Belecthor what he thinks of everything. I enjoyed the relationship between them. It is nice to read about a close, happy, family. There is also a great deal of humor in this chapter which I love. The part about having withstood many charges when he is warned he might be knocked down when she greets him was priceless! I enjoy these characters very much and hope you do more with them. Also, throughout this story, I have enjoyed Legolas's friendship with Ceorl's mother. Take care and keep writing. Author Reply: Hirilian and Belecthor are very close. They were the only two kids for about two years. Then Morwen was born. Therefore, while being close with Morwen, too, they share a special relationship. I just hope Belecthor doesn't run off to Rohan after she gets married. :) | |
| dr_seuss_is_cool | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 12/18/2003 |
| omgoodness i have been reading this story for a while...and i just keep getting too busy to review it but AW! i loved it so so so so so so much! are u going to write a sequel if you aren't that's ok...but continue writing!...i think ur awesome at it! thank you and great great great job! :) Author Reply: Glad you were finally able to review. :) No sequels are in the making, but I am in the process of writing two more stories centered around Hirilian's brother and sister. Thanks for the great review. :D | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 12/18/2003 |
| Ah, and I thought they were going to get married in this chapter. Oh well, I suppose they will in the next. :) Author Reply: *OK, here come some minor spoilers.* I'm going to pull a YOU. I know nothing about weddings, so I skipped that entire ordeal and they will already be married in the next chapter. But it will also be the last chapter. :( I'll be sure and post it tomorrow sometime. ;) | |