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| The White Horse and the White Banner by Chigger | 2 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/15/2003 |
| I couldn't get here for a few days due to Christmas issues, but it was worth waiting for. I am so happy that she loves him enough to stay with him. It was short, but it said all that it needed to say. Another great chapter! Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed it. So many of my chapters seem to be rather short, but then, it's easier to write them that way. ;) | |
| EomerofEastfold | Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/9/2003 |
| It certainly was an enjoyable chapter, but what to say, what to say. Hmmmmm. You didn't venture straight into the stereotypical male with Ceorl, which was quite good. I like how he is worried about how much her life would change if she married him. Using today as an example, it's much easier for men with secure financial futures to speak of the concepts of love and marriage. Good men, whether one will believe this or not, worry MORE about the well-being of their wives and children than they do themselves. I'm very, very happy, you didn't portray Ceorl a selfish jerk. Men's hearts are actually extremely difficult things to understand, even for me. :) Author Reply: I'm glad Ceorl came of correctly. I give Hirilian everything I want, and I most certainly don't want a selfish jerk. :) Also, with a Dad and brother like mine, I haven't really been exposed to selfish jerks, so I wouldn't know quiet how to portray one. Not that I would want to or anything. ;) | |