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Upon Amon Sl  by PSW 13 Review(s)
KateReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
Very excited to read a new chapter! Very chilling. Looking forward to reading what happens next

Author Reply: Thanks! :-) Glad youre enjoying it!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
The sky, the stars, Anor and Ithil they were no more. Perhaps they had never been.

How easy it would be to lose sanity, and all hope, in such a situation. *shivers*

Author Reply: Yes agreed. The black breath just sounds terrible

Thx for reading!

periannoreReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/23/2022
During his first conversation with Frodo, Sam and Pippin Aragorn mentions that he knows about the Nazgl. I wonder if he's referring to his encounter with them in your story? Things look so grim. You did wonderfully with your description of Aragorn's battle with the inertia of the black breath. I can only read on knowing Aragorn will survive for LOTR.
I'm worried about Elrohir and Daelin. As I read any fiction I automatically Project what might happen next. In this case I'm wondering if Halbarad, Dorhaur and Elladan will arrive to help or, if they arrived first and were similarly attacked. Oh no!
You've worked up a gripping head of suspense. Write on.

Author Reply: Thank you! Glad youre enjoying all will be answered in due time. ;-) Thx so much for your comments!

Kate Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/22/2021
Your writing is so compelling! Looking forward to reading more

Author Reply: Thank you! Im looking forward to writing more! (And hopefully in the not too distant future ;-)

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/2/2021
I have long pondered the quoted passage. They are terrible!

What a marvellous gap-filler this is! I am eager to read on.

Author Reply: Thank you! So am I! :-D Things are slowing down a bit finally fingers crossed that I will finally have time to get this all put together its been swimming around in my head for ages

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/20/2021
A terrible encounter. A nasty business, fighting naxzgul.

Author Reply: Indeed. Not something with which anyone would want to be suddenly faced

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2021
You have set the mood well. Not a fit night on which to visit Weathertop, I'd say.

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/17/2021
Wow! That lack of ability to move, and the sky becomming nothing but inky blackness sounds like Merry when found on the road in Bree. It also has echoes of the blackness that Faramir, Eowyn and Merry wandered in after the battle on the Pellenor. But now, how long do they lay there in weakness? Who will come rescue them?

Author Reply: Thx! Yes, I cant imagine the consequences of getting to near a Nazgul would be pleasant. Hopefully it wont be too long before theyre found the sooner the better, for sure.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/17/2021
This whole scene is masterfully described. How easy you make it to now understand Aragorn's fierce attack on the Nazgul with the flaming brand when the hobbits were under attack on Weathertop.

Author Reply: Thank you! Yes, youd think hes somehow need some previous experience to know not to go right for his usual weapons

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/9/2021
Good start, you describe the dark scary atmosphere very well. Looking forward for more.

Author Reply: Thank you, Im happy youre enjoying it so far! :-)

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