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The Brink  by Aldwen 1 Review(s)
RenataReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/21/2021
I am so glad to see another story from you, so quickly. And what a wonderful start! You describe the natural world so well, that I could almost feel myself on the cliff with Maglor, and then down on the beach with the tide coming in, and then back atop the cliff again, with the grasses.

I am looking forward to the rest of the story, and seeing how Elrond and Elros work themselves into Maglor's (and his brother's?) heart.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the review! I am glad you like the beginning! :)

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