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The Silence  by Aldwen 1 Review(s)
EllynnReviewed Chapter: 12 on 2/5/2021
Well written, it's interesting! ;)

P.s. I suggest you find a beta before publishing, to correct some minor grammar and punctuation things. They are small, but why not fix them if possible? :) It always helps when someone else checks the text, especially for us who are not native English speakers. ;) (No, English is not my mother tongue either :) )

Author Reply: Thank you for the review and the suggestion! I completely agree, beta reading is very helpful, but finding someone will take time which I do not have at the moment. This story is now finished, and I want to upload the rest too, once I have started to publish it. Sorry for the errors in the remaining eight chapters! :)

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