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Across Dark Waters  by Zimraphel 6 Review(s)
MÓdhaerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/2/2009
Terrifying. It's so real! This is one of those wonderful stories that draws you in and doesn't let you go until you've finished reading it. Amazing. A truly amazing story.

RenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/4/2003
This is so cool! This is the first Mandos related fic that I have seen using the whole Styx river and boatman concept...hee, fitting punishment for the main characters. Although in my opinion, Maeglin deserves more than Feanor...excellent job on this fic!

TolkienFanReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/2/2003
Oh! What a surprise! What deliciously just desserts! *Very* interesting story, thank you!

CorielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/24/2003
Ooo, creepy! But very, very insightful, and yes! Feanor ought to answer for Doriath! It serves them both right! For a long time I wondered if Hell would exist for malicious Elves, as opposed to the neutral Mandos/Limbo, and it ought to. Surely that has to be the best and most fitting type of punishment, to face exactly what you have done and those innocents who have suffered for it. Turn your sins inside out and take a good look! Thanks so much for this intriguing glimpse of the way things are on the other side! ~ Coriel

AnabelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/24/2003
Wonderful story. Well written, imaginative and emotional. Thank you for your efforts. I will look for more of your stories.

MirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/22/2003
Wow. This is really good. You truly have a beautiful vision here. This was very touching, as I truly can believe that Namo would let them see the fruits of their wrongdoings. How sad it must have been for Feanor, how many times worse for Meaglin!

This is very good, and your descriptions are excellent. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you.

Many cheers!

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