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Points of Light  by Larner 9 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/25/2015
I begin to sympathize with Denethor for having to parent a kid of Faramir's imagination and persistence. We know how important both qualities will be in his development and maturity; and the young Faramir is well written here. Love the ending!

Author Reply: For Faramir to be so like him but more willing to let his heart lead him must have been both wonderful and frightening. Am so glad you liked the ending--it makes me so happy!

Good to hear from you, by the way. Hope you'll add to your stories!

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/14/2015
I love Faramir's dreams here. I always wondered when Boromir and Denethor had their conversation about the thousand years.

Author Reply: It was a delight to find a context in which to present that remembered conversation, and who better than Faramir to embody Faith? Thanks so, Linda! And a joyful Christmas to you!

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/13/2015
That is very interesting! We have three people and three different opinions here: On the one hand Denethor who does not want anything to change. He is content with being steward, but only because of his belief that there will never be a king again.

Then we have Boromir who comes to the conclusion that there is no living heir to the king and wants his father to be the new ruler (and then himself of course).

And we have Faramir. Like Boromir he is not content with just waiting. But he had this dream about the Tree and the King and somehow he knows that it is true.

With that attitude Faramir is the luckiest of all three!

Author Reply: Both the luckiest and the truest to what is meant to be, I think. Thanks for the comments and for sharing your perceptions, Andrea! A lovely holiday to you and all you love!

MarianelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/13/2015
Faramir! Hes almost as special Aragorn but in his own ways. Lovely and heartwarming story❤️

Author Reply: Oh, yes--the perfect foil he will one day prove to Aragorn's hands and service, and in doing so he will best serve the Reunited Kingdom. Thanks so, Marianel!

PSWReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/12/2015
Just like children -- that single-minded push toward an obvious, inconvenient conclusion, either ignoring or missing the warning signs that it's not at all what Ada wants to hear ... :-P Faramir's joy in the thought of the King come again is endearing and refreshing. Even Boromir seems willing to dig for the truth -- though his reasons are very different. Denathor, though, has ever been proud and just doesn't want to hear it ...

Very interesting conversation! Thanks for writing ...

Author Reply: And thank you for the comments--I am so happy when it becomes apparent that others perceive precisely what I'd hoped to convey! Denethor doesn't want for life in Gondor to change from what it's been for the last millenium, after all. But life has a way of sending us all too often the challenges and changes we just don't want to face.

Thanks so much, PSW!

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/11/2015
I love Faramir's faith and hope - and it was well rewarded! His first sight of the king - the dream become flesh and looking into his eyes - is such a wonderful part in the tale.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: I know, Antane. He has the clearest foresight of the three of them, and he does not fear what he sees, but looks to embrace it when the proper time comes. Thank you so, and a joyful Christmas to you!

KathyGReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/11/2015
I get the feeling that Denethor rather wishes that he could be king instead of just a steward.


Author Reply: I suspect you are right, KathyG. Thanks so for the comments--you know how much they are appreciated!

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/11/2015
Lovely story. Thank you.

Author Reply: And thank you so much also, UTfrog. And a joyous holiday season to you!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/11/2015
And if perhaps a fruit of the tree lies in a hidden, protected place until it is time for it to begin to grow into a tree, perhaps there is such a place where the one who will be King lies hidden, too, so that he and the tree can come to Minas Tirith at the same time and the city and our nation will be restored

What a perceptive and thoughtful lad. This is a nice gap filler.

Author Reply: I've long suspected that Faramir always hoped one day for the kingdom of Gondor to be restored to its former glory, and if anyone should see a parallel between the hope for the White Tree to again grow in the courts of the King and the hope for that King to return, it would be him.

Thank you so for the compliments! And may Christmas fill your heart this holiday season.

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