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| Not So Happy Returns by Soledad | 2 Review(s) |
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| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/14/2014 |
| We carry our own darkness into death and create our own special hells along with it. I firmly believe that. Purgatory is getting rid of the darkness. Some people can't or won't and they remain in hell though there is Light all around. I hope Aredhel is able to shed the darkness and accept the light. Fourth paragraph, the last "she" in the first sentence should be "he" since it refers to the Maia, Nornorė. Good to see him here, btw. I had him helping out in Mandos when Ingalaurė died. It's fun using minor (Maiar) characters that never got into the published Silmarillion, isn't it? Author Reply: Oh,yes, it is. I would never be able to come up with proper names otherwise. Thanks for the correction. | |
| UTfrog | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/14/2014 |
| Utterly chilling. Very, very well done. Author Reply: Thank you. | |