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| Not So Happy Returns by Soledad | 2 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/8/2014 |
| It appears he took on too many of the beliefs of the returnees when he ought to have remembered the old ways better. Author Reply: I can imagine that in some ways the beliefs of the returnees would be attractive, even if he pretended not to buy them. | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/8/2014 |
| Interesting conversation between these two. I'm sure Eöl will be very happy in Ramandur with his first wife. And those pesky pronouns strike again: "And by that he saved you...". I may be mistaken, but I think you mean "she", referring to Aredhel. Looking forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: That was a typo, I swear! I have it correctly in the hand-written version. That is the problem with proofreading: you have in mind what you wanted to type, not what you actually did. *sigh*. Thanks anyway. I don't know how happy Eöl will be, carrying the weight of what he has done till the end of Arda, but at least he will be where he belongs and that is something. | |