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Not So Happy Returns  by Soledad 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/5/2014
I can see how things have grown worse for poor Fingon. As for Aracano--he is now in quite a tight and ticklish situation indeed. I don't think she's being quite fair with him.

Author Reply: I don't think she intends to. She wants what she wants and does her level best (or worst) to get it, feeling that she'd been wronged in the past. We'll see how it plays out.

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/5/2014
Okay, now this is pure soap opera elvish style. LOL! Meril is a naughty elleth. Poor Aracáno is caught between the (she) devil and the deep blue sea. Yes, a scandal indeed. And those meddlesome Maiar... I've know one or two myself. ;)

BTW, in the last sentence, "wait" should be "waiting".

Looking forward to the rest, Soledad.

Author Reply: Thanks for the correction. English tenses will be the death of me. Why do you need so many of them? My mother tongue functions perfectly with only three. *g*

As for the meddlesome Maiar, you'll soon see what they have to say about the whole situation.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/5/2014
unless any of the Maiar were eavesdropping unclad, which she would not put beyond them. They were a meddlesome lot at the best of times.

*grins*

I'm enjoying these stories very much.

Author Reply: I'm very glad to hear it. Will try to keep up the level of entertainment. *g*

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