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A Walk to Remember  by LOTRFaith 5 Review(s)
JSReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/10/2003
Ack!!! You can't leave it there! Please, please, post more soon! Don't torture your poor readers! ;)

Author Reply: Well, it seems I've ruffled more than a few feathers. ;-) Nearly everyone has been begging me to post soon as possible, but have no worries. I have it entirely written and might post on Friday. If not, then on Saturday like usual. The next chapter will be a little bit better. Trust me;-) Thanks for the review!

NikaraReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/6/2003
That is horrible! I can't believe that you left us like that. That is an amazingly bad place to leave off. Please add more soon.

Author Reply: Sorry:-\ It was a rather mean thing for me to do, but I couldn't resist! Come on, can you truly blame me? lol. Thanks!

EruannaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/6/2003
Oh my! Poor Legolas. He gets whipped, he gets kicked, he gets threatened, he gets whipped some more, and now he gets thrown off a cliff! Lovely! ;-) Poor Adoril! A most noble sacrifice; I am proud of him. Too bad he didn't live to know that... ;-)

*breathes a sigh of relief* Good, good. I am now fully confident that Legolas does not become involved in someone else's sexual sin. You had me worried there! (But that was your point, wasn't it?)

Anyway... ADA TO THE RESCUE!! Yeah!!! Once again, very nicely written, plot development coming nicely... Post soon!

Author Reply: Yes, poor, poor Legolas. And yes he is currently hanging in mid-air waiting for me to write the next chapter. Yes and poor Adoril. He paid his king his greatest submission by dying for him. So sad.

No, Legolas will not be forced into someone else sexual sin. Sorry I worried you, I actually worried a lot of people, but don't worry;-) And yes, that was the point.

And yes Ada and Big brother to the rescue! lol. Thank you so much!

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/6/2003
It was very thrilling to see Thranduil ride to the rescue, but things do not seem to be going well. I enjoyed seeing Thalion confounding the Lorien elves with his archer.

Author Reply: Yes very thrilling to see Thranduil ride off to the rescue. But unfortantly not everything turned out as well as he had hoped. I know I have to be scaring you. This new development is almost worst than Legolas' nightmare in chapter 1. But trust me with this;-) He will get out safe and sound, mentally, spiritually, physically, and any other ways. lol.

Yes, I read a little bit about archery, so I thought that I would have Thalion show Haldir how archery is really done;-) Thanks for the review!

AlyReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/6/2003
And Legolas' torment goes on and on! Just when he should be rescued, he gets thrown off a cliff! And Adoril dying for his king made a nice little touch, but how will that one effect Legolas? He's going to have a lot of physical and emotional healling to do once his ordeal is over. I'll enjoy reading how you work it all out!
Keep it up.


Author Reply: Yes, indeed it does. Wow. I can't believe that I'm actually worrying you guys a bit! Yes, Legolas is indeed going to have a lot of physical and emotional healing, with his family right beside him. Yes, I was rather sad that Adoril died, but am glad he died for his king. I wanted to stand up and cheer while tears were pouring down my face lol. Just kidding.

Yes, my 'working' it all out will be a challenge. But I look forward to it!
Thanks.

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