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Too Long a Sacrifice  by Linda Hoyland 4 Review(s)
Lady BluejayReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/11/2013
Very much enjoying this. I like the rational that Denethor thought to sacrifice Faramir.LBJ

Author Reply: THank you so much. I've just posted another chapter.

RobbieReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/2/2013
Poor Faramir. I fear he won't get off without nightmares.
I love this story! A very good plot, involving followers of the "Lord of gifts" without it being that far-fetched. And I love the way your characters seem to be really alife, interacting realistically. You also mix dialogue with descriptions so well I feel like I am seeing the things for myself.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and kind words.I'm delighted that you are enjoying this story. I fear you are right about Faramir.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/2/2013
I rejoice that he is safe and receiving proper treatment. Alas that Fikri was shot, but hopefully he lives and will continue to do so to the greater honor of Harad.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.More about Fikri's fate will be revealed soon.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/1/2013
"What greater honour could there be than to return the White Rod to the King returned?" Faramir exclaimed.

Faramir loves his King so much.

Thank you for bringing the rescue so soon, I could hardly bear the thought of more anguish for either of them. But poor Fikri! I hope we hear more about him.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.Yes, Faramir does indeed love his King.I promise you will hear more of Fikri.

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