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Thunder & Lightning  by Lady Bluejay 4 Review(s)
Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/15/2013
A most enjoyable chapter. I felt as if I could see the room and loved your scene for Eomer and Lothiriel.
One tiny typo you might want to fix "she pulled the quilt strait" should be "she pulled the quilt straight."

Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the typo. I have corrected all the chapters and now need the time to repost. LBJ

MarinelliReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/9/2013
Hmmm he needs the money, she has a dowry. She may be really angry when he finds out how much he needs the money. Esp. since she seems just a little bit frightened of him, because she's not sure what he wants. She's thinking, no way, he might have a girlfriend somewhere.

Author Reply: I don't think she's ever met any man like him before and is unsure. Thanks a lot for reviewing.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/4/2013
She does have a good deal to tame in him, doesn't she? Heh! The room sounds breathtaking!

Author Reply: Well, I don't want her having any old room when they finally get together. Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ

curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 7 on 6/2/2013
Oho! We have more sparks flying, a knowing Éowyn, an almost apologetic Éomer... wonderful!

Author Reply: Thanks. And thank you for taking the time to review. LBJ

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