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Fate  by Laikwalâssê 3 Review(s)
KatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/2/2015
Oh my gosh! So sad. But very well written and I want to read more! I noticed that you didn't include a meaning for Thranduil's name and Just want to let you know that his name means "vigorous spring". :)

Author Reply: thank you so much. I´m glad you like the start to my story. Read more as you wish. It´s already finished and tell me how you liked it, yes? Thank you for the meaning of Thranduil´s name - I have included it. Lai

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/27/2013
Forgive me. I swore I've been reading this and commenting, but I see I must have been in some dream state. Not sure why.

I loved this opening chapter. The character studies are great. I loved the feeling of a family knit with love. Thranduil is perfect.

You do a really great job of pulling us into the tale. From comfort and peace to horror and grief.

Nicely done.


Author Reply: you review now - that´s all that matters and I´m happy. More so that you find my characters believable. Family bonds are really importanty for this family and all they will have left in the end. From comfort and peace to horror and grief - indeed! Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreaciat it. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/25/2012
Oh dear, I fear this is going to be a real tear-jerker of a story, Lai, and at Christmas time. How evil. *grin* Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle this.

Author Reply: I fear you are right. Keep yout tissues ready, but earnestly I have tried to focus n the emotinal storm that must have raged through the royal family after this tragedy. Hopefully I have succeeded. Thank you for reviewing, Fiondil. Lai

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