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Confusion  by Laikwalâssê 4 Review(s)
demeter dReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/5/2012
My, my! Are any of you who are reading this old enough to be familiar with the American television series called "Dallas"? I know some of you are. It was on oh, late Eighties to early 1990's, I think. It was about a family of scheming
Texas oil barons. One season the writers killed the somewhat nicer youngest brother of the family early in the season. The last episode of that season featured Bobby Ewing's grieving young widow waking with a start to the sound of a shower from her bathroom. She went in to see her towel-wrapped, very much alive husband! The whole season turned out to be her dream! Or, on the other hand, maybe he is going mad? Or, some evil influence is trying to upset the family? All kinds of possibilities here!

Author Reply: to my shame I have to admit that I liked Dallas and in fact I have looked as long as the scene you described. Then I have stopped because this turn of events was stupid in my opinion. I have not thought at this scene while writing my story and Elrohir´s problem is a bit more complicated or so I hope. I hope you like what´s going on. I will post the next chapter today. Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

ladyevenstarReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/5/2012
..... but.... but...... uh.... umm.....did I just read what i think I just read..... so was it all in his head? Or is he dreaming now..... I'M SO CONFUSED!!!!

Author Reply: yes I have done it! Confudion, that´s the titel...LOL! Hang on and you will see. I will post a chapter per day. Thank you so much for your review. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/5/2012
Methinks Elrohir has just stepping into the Twilight Zone. LOL! This is definitely getting interesting. Can't wait for more.

Author Reply: twilight zone, yes! I´m glad you are confused as poor Elrohir. Just my intention. LOL! And more is coming soon! Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/5/2012
Wow, now this is a unexpected turn. I think I am echoing Elrohirs confusion. Great story Laikwalasse. very very intriguing.

Author Reply: yes, the story titles fits perfectly, I think. I´m glad I could confuse you too! LOL! Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

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