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And Then There Were None by Estel_Mi_Olor | 5 Review(s) |
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mystarlight | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/26/2018 |
I love everything about this story plot characters dialogues. I was mesmerized from the beginning to the end of the story. Can't wait for Battle of the Five Armies from Elvish point of view. Thank you so much for your WONDERFUL story. | |
obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 2/1/2015 |
So, the mystery remains. Poor Thranduil, I think if he would be left in peace for a while he would figure it out, but alas he has no peace and quiet and his mind is already on his march on Dol Guldur. I think this is a good stopping point. The scene is now changing away from the King's Halls and you set out to write the escape from the Dwarves from the viewpoint of the elves. | |
Lynn H | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 8/4/2013 |
And a review you shall have! Excellent work - very good study of the confusion of the elves. | |
Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 7/27/2013 |
A good place to stop, Estel. I've enjoyed this story very much, especially the dynamics of the royal family, and look forward to the sequel. At one point you have Hananuir baiting himself. I think you meant Girithron was doing the baiting. | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 7/27/2013 |
So, they haven't figured out how it was done? I wonder why? Heh! Has anyone confided with Thranduil as to the pilfering of food and such? If they put all of the pieces together they could begin to figure it out, I think. But perhaps they will begin to understand once Bilbo is recognized for what he is. It ought to prove interesting as you begin your next section of the story. | |