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And Then There Were None  by Estel_Mi_Olor 5 Review(s)
mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 9 on 8/26/2018
Really emotional chapter. Esgaldir's death saying goodbye to the fallen. I am happy you still didn't let Rochiron die. Thank you!

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/7/2013
The cost of victory. It was a hard won battle, and when you look at the cost in fallen and wounded, there is little to celebrate. Legolas grows with the challenge. Let's just hope they can get back home without too much trouble.

Author Reply: Thank you for the review! I think all too frequently people like to skip over the aftermath of a battle, but for me, the day after is just as important as the action itself.

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/4/2013
What a terribly hard chapter to read. Though there is a sort of victory, the cost is overwhelming. Legolas shows his worth and continues to grow in the esteem of those he commands.

This is the kind of tale that I already plan on rereading once it is complete.

Bravo!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the compliment! I am delighted that you will be rereading. It will definitely be easier once I've got all the chapters posted...which may occur soon (I hope). Hopefully the next chapter will prove a bit lighter, before we have to go downhill again! : )

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/26/2013
Alas for those lost in the battles, and I look forward to learning how these shall be able to return home in the end, with the other groups called home as has been done.

Author Reply: Thank you Larner! I thought the aftermath of the battle deserved all its own chapter : )

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 9 on 3/26/2013
I'm glad Rochiron survived and Legolas does quite well taking over command when necessary. Too bad he doesn't know that his brother won't be coming to help. I hope they are able to get back to the Stronghold without too much trouble. And what has Bilbo been up to all this time? Is he still causing trouble? *grin*

Author Reply: Teehee, Bilbo is still burglarizing (I think that's a word)...but the poor elves are so preoccupied that they'll get a rude awakening on that score. All your questions have now been answered as I've just posted chapter 10 : ) Thanks for sticking with the story!

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