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| Enigmas- The Life and Love of Linwe and Frodo by MysteriousWays | 2 Review(s) |
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| Keener | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/16/2004 |
| Again, you've almost made me cry! This chapter was very moving and I think it's great that Frodo and Linwe are each other's confident now. It will help them both having someone to talk to who shares the same loss. There's no doubt about it, Frodo and Linwe were made for each other! Keep the updates coming, I can't wait to see what comes next! Your story is just like reading an interesting book that you just can't put down! :) Author Reply: Your review is enough to make me cry. :) I am sorry I keep making you put this "book" down. Ethusiastic responses like this make me want to post the whole story now. Chapter Fifteen is currently getting spiffed up and ready for it's debut. Hopefully it will not take me long to get that done. Thank You, Mys | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/16/2004 |
| Oh, goodie, they're finally talking! At first I wasn't sure if they were going to, but now that they have...yay! The scenes with them together are beautiful. I truly do enjoy them. Thank goodness that you updated! I was just looking at this story sadly again yesterday, hoping that you hadn't forgotten about it. :) Oh, one more thing, I think you may have forgotten a sentence at the end of the chapter: Frodo smiled, a bit sadly "It does in a way. You get used to it I think and learn to sort of step around it and keep going on." Turning away, Linwe nodded her head once as though in agreement, then started walking back towards the Cotton farm, without letting go of Frodo’s hand. The words were few but they were enough. Not even the Gaffer could stand up to the fury he saw in the gaze Linwe had fixed on him. In a quiet voice, he said "Yes Ma’am," and made his way back to his room. "The words were few?" his words? Her words? Huh? I think I'm missing something... Anyway, I love love love love this chapter!! Please update soon! Author Reply: Bless You! Bless You! Bless You! Every now and then the site will take some bit of the story from one spot and put it where it does not belong. That line about the Gaffer belonged way back in the first part of the chapter. I did not catch the error when I skimmed over the preview. It is a shame because that misplacement of the sentence kind of messes up the scene where ti goes and detracts from the ending. Of well, it is fixed. I am so glad you liked the chapter. I will try to get back to my schedule of once a week posts. Thank You Again! Mys | |