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Revolution  by Laikwalâssê 3 Review(s)
Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 15 on 3/23/2012
Wow. Thoran really knows how to win hearts and minds, doesn't he? I hope you've got something particularly nasty in mind for him!


Author Reply: indeed, and we have not seen the worst of him yet. And be assured Thranduil will act accordingly but first he has to get in the position to grab him. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Jay. Lai

BeeGeeReviewed Chapter: 15 on 3/18/2012
Looks as though Thoran is getting desperate! Hopefully, this will cause him to make mistakes that will cost him dearly. He deserves all he gets. Great tension in this chapter!

Author Reply: beside getting desperate Thoran is more and more slipping into madness and the elves around Thranduil will soon have to deal with this. I´m glad the tension worked in this chapter. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 15 on 3/17/2012
Crossed a line indeed. Thoran may not have actually killed those two Elves, but he's no less guilty of kinslaying than Fëanor. Things are definitely going to get worse before they get better, that's for sure.

Author Reply: you are right,Thoran should be handled like the criminal he is and you are right it will get worse. Thanky ou so much for a much appreciated review. Lai

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