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Embers  by Independence1776 3 Review(s)
UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/26/2011
Thanks for a lovely introduction to your excellent longer story. I enjoyed both.

Author Reply: I'm glad you enjoyed it (them)!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/24/2011
At least he finally came home. Now, to learn his fate.

Author Reply: Yup. Glad you enjoyed it!

galathilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/1/2011
I feel for Maglor,roaming from one age to another.You get the scense of him being lonely but knowing he's only got himself to blame.I'm glad that it was Elrond that bought him back to Valinor,who knows mabye he might find some peace and forgivenes from the Valar and himself.LOL Galathil.Can't wait for your next story.

Author Reply: I'm glad you feel for Maglor-- that's the point. He may be a Kinslayer, but I've never seen him as somone who revels in violence. He sincerely regrets his actions.

mabye he might find some peace and forgivenes from the Valar and himself.

If you haven't yet, you should read Rise Again From Ashes. It begins pretty much where Embers left off, and covers that.

Can't wait for your next story.

I'm happy to hear that! Just remember you'll have to go to Silmarillion Writers' Guild to read it; I'm not posting here any longer.

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